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- Mon Mar 20, 2017 10:40 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Confessions of a Drifter
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1089
Re: Confessions of a Drifter
@Zelan: Thanks for the feedback! I've revised the blurb based on your suggestions, but the [not attention grabbing part] still baffles me. May need to ruminate on that a bit more... I'd be interested in beta reading, but I wouldn't be able to do it until April, when NaNoRenO is over. c: Sounds awes...
- Sun Mar 19, 2017 9:05 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Confessions of a Drifter
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1089
Re: Confessions of a Drifter
What was the conflict, actually? She's in doubt, but I don't see any reason why she's in doubt (at least not from the blurb). The characters are still too generic to gain my interest; You might want to add something unique to each of them. Thanks for your feedback!! :) The reason she's in doubt Tru...
- Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:50 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: What if No One Plays It
- Replies: 33
- Views: 7351
Re: What if No One Plays It
I am having that fear, right here, right now. I just finished 10-15k words and realised I haven't thought about whether it was an interesting premise or not! I didn't have any friends who wrote, and when I tried to get my family or friends' opinions they tend to be... too nice. I probably should go ...
- Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:29 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: First short visual novel theme poll
- Replies: 3
- Views: 879
Re: First short visual novel theme poll
Hi @EscapistHowl,
I tried accessing the link but it says URL not found -- has it been taken down?
-Marmoon
I tried accessing the link but it says URL not found -- has it been taken down?
-Marmoon
- Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:20 am
- Forum: Anime, Games, and Japan
- Topic: VN recommendations, please!
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5732
Re: VN recommendations, please!
Hello,
I second Alistair, and here are a few others:
Ristorante Amore
Cupid
Juniper's Knot
Let me know if you end up playing any of them!
-Marmoon
I second Alistair, and here are a few others:
Ristorante Amore
Cupid
Juniper's Knot
Let me know if you end up playing any of them!
-Marmoon
- Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:04 am
- Forum: Anime, Games, and Japan
- Topic: A manga/game you wished was an anime?
- Replies: 19
- Views: 21480
Re: A manga/game you wished was an anime?
Off the top of my head: Seven Seeds. It's a manga about survival in a dystopian future, where some disaster has hit Earth and you were one of the few survivors. The characters' personalities were very distinct and plot was very well thought out. There's a lot on (the dark side of) human nature and i...
- Sun Mar 19, 2017 6:53 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Confessions of a Drifter
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1089
Confessions of a Drifter
Update 2017/03/21 : The blurb will get revised based on your feedback! Previous versions will be at the end of this post. http://i67.tinypic.com/1grwvd.png Hi Guys, I have written a short story (10-15k slice of life), and suddenly realised I haven't thought if the premise is good enough! That is wh...