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by Rhea07
Wed Jul 26, 2017 12:44 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Alehaeus: The Radiant Kingdom [GxG/B] [Fantasy]
Replies: 10
Views: 1989

Re: Alehaeus: The Radiant Kingdom [GxG/B] [Fantasy]

- So, it should be obvious that this game is inspired by harem anime that would generally be aimed at males. Problem is, since I changed the protagonist to a female, I'm not sure who my audience is now. Would you prefer it if I tried to stay true to the harem anime feel or would it be better if I s...
by Rhea07
Wed Jul 26, 2017 12:14 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Phoenix Season [GxG/B HISTORICAL FANTASY]
Replies: 8
Views: 1098

Re: Phoenix Season [GxG/B HISTORICAL FANTASY]

This honestly sounds interesting! I totally agree on your point of YA novels, and I can't wait to see how you'd do it better. ^^
by Rhea07
Tue Jul 25, 2017 8:50 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Character designs thoughts?
Replies: 5
Views: 981

Re: Character designs thoughts?

And wow, I had never heard of that game before. ^^; I'll keep that fact in mind. It's actually a popular series that includes 3 games. It was the first thing I thought of when I read your game title as well. And I think your character design is distinct, but it does superficially resemble one of th...
by Rhea07
Thu Jun 29, 2017 5:25 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Character designs thoughts?
Replies: 5
Views: 981

Re: Character designs thoughts?

It seems pretty competent to me. The whole scar over one eye thing is the only thing that stands out to me as a somewhat cliched character design trait. Watch out with the name, you will get a lot of people confusing your game for Shadow Hearts, a well known series of RPGs if you were a gamer back ...
by Rhea07
Fri Jun 23, 2017 5:35 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Character designs thoughts?
Replies: 5
Views: 981

Character designs thoughts?

I'm working on my first (fantasy) visual novel, Shadowed Hearts, and I'm starting to slowly work on drawing my characters. Lucia is the main character and I just sketched her out. Was wondering if it looks good so far. Any comment is appreciated and I will also post more sketches when done.
by Rhea07
Thu Jun 22, 2017 2:24 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Is my character art good enough? (please critique)
Replies: 36
Views: 3677

Re: Is my character art good enough? (please critique)

Honestly, like Sina said above, your art IS better than 40% of the artworks of visual novels made with Ren'Py. So be proud of your art ^~^ One thing you can improve on is clothing. I recommend you draw the base or nude body of your character first in whatever position and then draw clothes on top of...