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Thanks Geki! I've just fixed that little mishap so not to confuse anyone else here. I'm glad to hear that the premise has promise. I'm just not sure how much I can show about each character and the premise to give a better idea as to what is going on. It may give away a bit too much. Still in the wr...

Working Title: The Contract [/b] Otome VN | Supernatural, Girl meets Boys HISTORY SIDENOTE I've been on and off about this idea for years and only started writing it down not too long ago. I thought to keep a record of it here so that I have a place for further feedback and trial and error before p...

Thanks Zelan! I had a look in the Ideas section and will put up a progress report there. Cheers!

Thanks again Mammon! I'll be re-working the outline for the common and sub-story routes to grab a better understanding on how everything will unfold. This is fantastic feedback and really to be honest this is my first time writing for an otome VN. Just a quick question though (if anyone is able to h...

All right this is a first draft of the common route in a way just to set the story. Critiques welcome of course! OUTLINE - COMMON ROUTE MC finds herself in a well-lit restaurant with an older middle-aged man who attempts to woo her during their dinner. She feels uncomfortable as the original purpose...

Thanks for the feedback Mammon! I only started writing this idea down after building so much character history and background for years in my head. I've just not implemented them into a story format. The magic side of the story was the original intent of the story but I'm on the fence whether they a...

I've been bouncing this idea for an otome game for years and I've come to find that it evolves every year. I would like some critiques as to where it can go and have already written outlines for each character. I'll admit the MC is a bit bland and standard blank canvas and I'm attempting to add more...

Hi All! My handle is PedalRocket and I've floated past this forum every now and then while creating the basis for a few game ideas I have. I decided to dive in and hope to find a supportive community to bounce ideas and strengthen them for a fulfilling hobby :) I'm currently studying graphic design,...