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by PMscenarios
Thu Dec 28, 2017 2:45 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Trying to design a chibi - help?
Replies: 5
Views: 235

Re: Trying to design a chibi - help?

I believe your main problem is what I said in Tip 3 in the editorial- you're working with a semi-realistic style that's more reminiscent of your regular art style than one that fits chibis. Chibis are supposed to be super cute, not realistic. I myself have a semi-realistic art style for my main art...
by PMscenarios
Tue Dec 12, 2017 2:22 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Synthetic Lover [Sci-fi, Drama with Romance, Yaoi] 18+
Replies: 18
Views: 1677

Re: Synthetic Lover [Sci-fi, Drama with Romance, Yaoi] 18+

This ticks like all my boxes. I love sci-fi, and robots, and yaoi, and have wanted for a long while to explore companion bots myself, so I'm really intrigued by how you'll handle this. :D 1. Out of the two current romance options which one would prefer to romance first? I was gonna say the thief, bu...
by PMscenarios
Fri Dec 08, 2017 5:07 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Is this idea STUPID?! // Let's share Visual Novel marketing ideas
Replies: 11
Views: 604

Re: Is this idea STUPID?! // Let's share Visual Novel marketing ideas

The problem with using memes to advertise something is, popularity is fickle. Memes come and go. What's hilarious today might be considered stale ten years from now. Thank you for your input. Only thing I'm am pondering is that is the "short" life span of a meme any problem in game marketing? Any g...
by PMscenarios
Fri Dec 01, 2017 2:14 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Dialogue Between Unnamed Characters
Replies: 8
Views: 407

Re: Dialogue Between Unnamed Characters

I find ??? To be really tiresome after a little while, and there's often the issue that everyone not- named are identified the exact same way. This will especially be a problem if more than one unnamed character is in the same scene, or even shortly after each other. Using a nickname is a great way ...
by PMscenarios
Tue Nov 21, 2017 11:31 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: KIRTS Art Thread [feedback welcome]
Replies: 9
Views: 347

Re: KIRTS Art Thread [feedback welcome]

I really like your art it's very pretty. The clothes detail for your male sprite is really sharp and detailed, and I really like the feelings of the "almost kiss" one where she's sitting on the counter. Talking as a person planning in the future to commission sprites, your VN sprites does not have e...
by PMscenarios
Tue Nov 21, 2017 10:55 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Yuri/Yaoi game query
Replies: 8
Views: 340

Re: Yuri/Yaoi game query

There are several games featuring a diverse cast of characters you can date, from Hustle Cat , Where we lay our scene to Date (almost) anything sim and Date or Die that seem to have found a market, after all there's loads of ppl who like to see more diversity and representation options in the games ...
by PMscenarios
Tue Nov 14, 2017 11:57 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Trying to design a chibi - help?
Replies: 5
Views: 235

Re: Trying to design a chibi - help?

Sorry in advance for my rambling tone, it's time for me to sleep and I'm too tired to filter my words. I don't mind blunt feedback at all, I'm basically one of those annoying ppl who'll get a sudden urge to try something and then flail wildly at it for a little while. The only reason I have -any- i...
by PMscenarios
Mon Nov 13, 2017 3:46 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Is my character art passable for a vn?
Replies: 6
Views: 377

Re: Is my character art passable for a vn?

I really like your art. They're cute, and the simple, more "animated tv" style could work very well for a certain type of VNs. First guy and last guy could also definitely work for an otome game or a fantasy-style rpg-lite story. While the anime style is really popular, it is also pretty over-satura...
by PMscenarios
Mon Nov 13, 2017 3:40 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Trying to design a chibi - help?
Replies: 5
Views: 235

Trying to design a chibi - help?

I'm working on a chibi fairy/genie for my game " a Fairy special night " that can serve as a game icon and also an in-game chat icon sprite - but I've never tried to draw anything in this style before. Most of the game is done in a 3d blender style (art by my game artist), but I wanted to have a vis...
by PMscenarios
Fri Oct 27, 2017 10:57 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: As We Know It [GxB][GXG][VN][Romance|Drama|Apocalypse]
Replies: 21
Views: 2684

Re: As We Know It [GxB][GXG][VN][Romance|Drama|Apocalypse]

A lot of the backstory/setting is currently organically revealed through Kat in Scribbles' script - as we get to know her we also learn more about how her life was before, and how the city works.

God, I love how Scribbles has written Kat so much! :wink:
by PMscenarios
Fri Oct 27, 2017 2:24 am
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Experienced LGBT Writer, Editor, Proofreader
Replies: 5
Views: 451

Re: Experienced LGBT Writer, Editor, Proofreader

Welp, I'm crying now. Your depiction of anxiety and self-hatred is really evocative. Really well written.

Do you have any editing samples? It doesn't need to be fiction, articles would suffice - maybe something written in another style of voice than your own?
by PMscenarios
Fri Oct 27, 2017 12:42 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Devil's Markings on Kickstarter
Replies: 10
Views: 684

Re: Devil's Markings on Kickstarter

A kickstarter is a potential backer's intro to your project and why they should want to back it - right now you're doing yourself no favours by introducing potential visitors with a setting outline that's almost unparsable. What/who are Akeens? What is the Yardrill planet? Which priestess? Connected...
by PMscenarios
Wed Oct 25, 2017 8:56 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Seems like more VN devs aren't hiring editors/proofreaders nowadays
Replies: 16
Views: 981

Re: Seems like more VN devs aren't hiring editors/proofreaders nowadays

It has never been about fluency - this is one of the biggest mistakes ppl make when they get a friend who's fluent in English to do their proof reading - it's about understanding what the writer is trying to convey . If you have someone go through your script and just change misspellings and grammar...
by PMscenarios
Wed Oct 25, 2017 8:19 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: DSG - ReDraw [BxB, GxB, Drama, School, Mystic, Free, COMPLETE!]
Replies: 13
Views: 1437

Re: Dream Savior Gakuen - ReDraw [BxB, GxB, Drama, School, WIP]

Ooh, this seems really cool. I really liked Let's meat Adam, but never played the original DSG though I had been considering it, so this is really intriguing! - Which character are you drawn to most and why? Never feel like I have a good answer to these type of questions, but I guess Polar is intere...
by PMscenarios
Thu Oct 19, 2017 2:28 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Miss Bullard’s School for Former Lades [Lesbian/Victorian/Fantasy/Mystery] Now on Kickstarter
Replies: 6
Views: 662

Re: Miss Bullard’s School for Former Lades [Lesbian/Victorian/Fantasy/Mystery] Now on Kickstarter

The demo is currently not available through the itchio app on windows machines. You need to tag the demo specifically as a windows version through the creator dashboard for it to allow downloads.