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Thank you so much for the detailed analysis Pick_One. Really appreciate the feedback. I'm glad you liked the extra motions in the VN. I too am a fan when there are some motion on screen, just something to keep it from being too static. Admittedly, you are right about Anita's expression during that s...

Thanks Pick One, I am very curious to hear your honest opinion. getting a better grasp of what people think will only help me going into the final version.

It’s complete (well the demo is anyway) So far the choices are quite linear, but this is the demo version, in the finished version I plan to have more branching paths and multiple endings. For now please enjoy XD https://digitalbento.itch.io/grotesque Feedback is welcome, i’d Like to know what you t...

https://78.media.tumblr.com/65a6b3df5c1e18a3171d6386ff8a6419/tumblr_p69t4hqjUO1x1m9mwo1_540.jpg I made pretty good progress in this. Think I've reached a point that is good to stop at for a demo version. Think I got about half way through the planned story, the later half will have branching paths ...

Making some slow progress. I doubt I can get enough of it complete by the end of the month but I do hope to have the set up to the story complete and finish the rest afterwards. For now, enjoy this lil mockup :D https://78.media.tumblr.com/9ea11d128ab638027d2f365b54739037/tumblr_p5pigkzhwQ1x1m9mwo1_...

Here are some background images: https://78.media.tumblr.com/459259e713c7b58d9f43455790b6c5cb/tumblr_p559pk3JOX1x1m9mwo1_540.jpg https://78.media.tumblr.com/50d902a8538aedb3c225f2f3170c8148/tumblr_p559pk3JOX1x1m9mwo2_540.jpg https://78.media.tumblr.com/5a0e0594da54abc3fed6e11a94f252ef/tumblr_p559pk3...

Cool! Sounds creepy as hell. Why does everything always go wrong during slumber parties? :p

Thank you guys so much for the kind words. Its encouraging to hear the support. Nay - I don't intend to have jumpscares. I'm the same, I love creepy stories but hate horror relying on cheap jumps to get me. PMscenarios - Thank you! Really hope I get a good amount done. LateWhiteRabbit - Glad to hear...

Some concept art to kick things off: https://78.media.tumblr.com/c1287ec1d353bf6e218533435b9a7f5b/tumblr_p4xkjsbzce1x1m9mwo1_540.jpg https://78.media.tumblr.com/eec1c7c06b7723fbe96d5f1c1191b3d7/tumblr_p4xkk2bNnl1x1m9mwo1_540.jpg https://78.media.tumblr.com/50749727f342386cf11539ae597f430d/tumblr_p4x...

For NaNoReNo 18 I offer you Grotesque Beauty, a horror visual novel in the vein of Junji Ito's creepy stories. The plot revolves around a sleepover between two friends. Anita have been experiencing bad dreams each night, it isn't helped that her parents are often working through the night, leaving h...

Thanks Zelan!
The main character is a blank slate. With the writing I had to dance around direct references to the character's gender so that the character can be anyone. Was a bit tricky but I think it works.

Soooo I'm cramming to get the game together for release... Also got a Steam page set up!!! Setting a release in a few weeks!!!!
Check it out in this link:

http://store.steampowered.com/app/78874 ... r_Mystery/

So a little update... I've put together a trailer.
Hope you guys like it.

Thanks for the feedback Bob and Empish. Jisei looks intriguing. I'll have to check it out. Yikes! That thread about VN sales is scary. I don't know how much to take away from that thread though. From that sample you could say we're all doomed to fail but you then there are games like One Night Stand...

https://78.media.tumblr.com/32fcf356188764af22a3073e40b0636b/tumblr_p2wv9pqUBK1ri4cxgo1_1280.jpg Hi guys, I'm Ben and this is my first visual novel I'm making. I'm a professional concept artist who's been working on other people's projects for 8 years and finally decided to make something for my ow...