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by Swadian
Tue Mar 19, 2019 8:53 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Mein Waifu is the Führer [Comedy | Military/War] [BxG]
Replies: 4
Views: 452

Re: Mein Waifu is the Führer [Comedy | Military/War] [BxG]

Where the hell do you people get these ideas? I can hardly wait to see your brilliant humor into action again, you're one of the few things that make me laugh out loud until I'm in tears.
by Swadian
Fri Mar 08, 2019 4:48 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Romance of Raskya [BxG][Fantasy/War/Romance/Pseudo-Roman][Demo] Feedback requested!
Replies: 9
Views: 881

Re: Romance of Raskya [BxG][Fantasy/War/Romance/Pseudo-Roman][Demo] Feedback requested!

To my shame I must answer with "I don't really know". When read out aloud, the segment just didn't sound good. Looking at it again, the "or" (which is the part that I felt was dissonant and that I would suggest they remove) implies disjunction (either they'll have a future together OR they will surv...
by Swadian
Thu Mar 07, 2019 10:29 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Romance of Raskya [BxG][Fantasy/War/Romance/Pseudo-Roman][Demo] Feedback requested!
Replies: 9
Views: 881

Re: Romance of Raskya [BxG][Fantasy/War/Romance/Pseudo-Roman][Demo] Feedback requested!

Little nitpick about the trailer: near the end you said "will the lovers have a future together?" -fade - "or will they even survive?". Now, I'm no native English speaker, but that sounds very off to me. I don't remember seeing any grammatical mistakes in the demo (though, I must admit, I didn't go ...
by Swadian
Tue Jan 29, 2019 1:33 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Romance of Raskya [BxG][Fantasy/War/Romance/Pseudo-Roman][Demo] Feedback requested!
Replies: 9
Views: 881

Re: Romance of Raskya [BxG][Fantasy/War/Romance/Pseudo-Roman][Demo] Feedback requested!

Seems to me like this has both the best art and the most original setting I've seen on these forums, and in VNs in general. Reminds me a lot of the Malaazan Book of the Fallen (at least Gardens of the Moon, the first and only one I've read so far) and Tyranny. The in-game music sounds great, but the...
by Swadian
Mon Dec 10, 2018 12:01 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chromatose [FULL DEMO] [RPG][VN][Horror][Romance]
Replies: 31
Views: 4041

Re: Chromatose DEMO RELEASE [RPG][VN][Horror][Romance]

Looks absolutely amazing! By far the most interesting WIP on this forum IMO.
Really gotta go and finish Persona 5 and 3, thanks for reminding me.
by Swadian
Thu Apr 26, 2018 7:47 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Royal Alchemist [GxB][BxB][Fantasy Court Stats Raising] Demo Available!
Replies: 68
Views: 12548

Re: Royal Alchemist [GxB][BxB][Fantasy Court Stats Raising]

I usually have a slight distaste for otome, since I can't really immerse myself as a female and I'm really not into BxB. That being said, this looks absolutely amazing. 1. The story has the potential to be great (for me the politics seems to be the most interesting). I really like the art, it's abso...
by Swadian
Fri Apr 13, 2018 6:15 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Lisistrata [Fantasy - Adventure - VN-RPG Hybrid]
Replies: 19
Views: 2275

Re: Lisistrata [Fantasy - Adventure - VN-RPG Hybrid]

Everything visual about this game is superb: the art, the gui, the skills icons. The theme is a somewhat all-or-nothing scenario, it can go really well if handled correctly, or it can go Rey-from-Star-Wars. I guess that's the case for all political themes. Do try to make it somewhat morally gray on ...
by Swadian
Wed Apr 04, 2018 5:28 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Sounds of Her Love [Romance][BxG]
Replies: 19
Views: 7930

Re: Sounds of Her Love [Romance][BxG]

Really great VN. What I like most is how realistic everyone is, how down to earth the story manages to remain. Hell, I actually managed to learn a couple of things about relationships. I don't know if that means it's very well written or I'm just super clueless (most likely both). The execution is v...
by Swadian
Wed Apr 04, 2018 4:55 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5116
Views: 1125990

Re: Guestbook

Hello everyone! My name is Swadian and I'm a high school student from Romania. (the pic is actually me, stylised by the artist in my team) My first VN was Sakura Spirit, which I read as a sort of self-depreciating "look at how much of a virgin I am" joke. Look where that got me :lol: I recently star...
by Swadian
Sun Mar 25, 2018 2:51 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Software for Keeping track of characters/writing
Replies: 2
Views: 584

Re: Software for Keeping track of characters/writing

I for one use OneNote to make a scheme for the branching paths (with arrows and textboxes), then have each individual branch in it's own separate Word document. It comes with the added benefit of it all being in OneDrive, so I can edit it from any device and easily share it with my team.
by Swadian
Tue Mar 20, 2018 1:31 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: [Solved] Image "shimmering" on ATL rotate
Replies: 3
Views: 179

Re: Image "shimmering" on ATL rotate

Thank you very much for the assist, that fixed it. My background-and-GUI-artist sends you kisses.
by Swadian
Tue Mar 20, 2018 11:56 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: [Solved] Image "shimmering" on ATL rotate
Replies: 3
Views: 179

[Solved] Image "shimmering" on ATL rotate

I'm trying to add a rotating object in my main menu (a metatron's cube to be precise). I added the image with the following transform: transform lowerright: rotate 0 xanchor 0.5 yanchor 0.5 xpos 0.964 ypos 0.934 linear 35 rotate 360 repeat It rotates and loops as intended, but it has a subtle "vibra...