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by airenrin
Thu Jun 28, 2018 4:29 am
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Writer and proofreader for commission or trade
Replies: 0
Views: 473

Writer and proofreader for commission or trade

Hi! I'm Krysta or Airen (depending on your comfort level). I've been creating stories with the mind of publishing since I was twenty. My range of interests span from children and young adult/new adult aisles of Barnes and Nobles to Japanese light novels/manga/anime. Dissecting stories is a (sort of)...
by airenrin
Thu Jun 28, 2018 2:26 am
Forum: We are offering Paid Work
Topic: [R18] Looking for writers to create game cutscenes
Replies: 2
Views: 682

Re: [R18] Looking for writers to create game cutscenes

I've sent you a request to see your writing guidelines.
by airenrin
Sun Jun 10, 2018 1:10 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Looking for Feedback on a First Chapter Draft
Replies: 9
Views: 1949

Re: Looking for Feedback on a First Chapter Draft

No problem. The first line/paragraph/scene is definitely one of the hardest things to write for stories. If you check out other authors' blogs, they would say the same. I recommend checking out Janice Hardy's Fiction University. It's a website and they do weekly critiques of opening paragraphs that ...
by airenrin
Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:13 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: How do you write the manuscript of a visual novel?
Replies: 6
Views: 2279

Re: How do you write the manuscript of a visual novel?

Thanks Imperf3kt! I've been using post-it notes on the wall and taking it down as I go along... but your style sounds a lot more environmentally friendly.
by airenrin
Sat Jun 09, 2018 2:55 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Looking for Feedback on a First Chapter Draft
Replies: 9
Views: 1949

Re: Looking for Feedback on a First Chapter Draft

First, I know this is still a rough draft so some of the feedback might be a bit advanced for the story at this point in time. I'm wondering how you are planning on executing the story. As a visual novel, a lot of the descriptors on the background and the character would be already drawn out, so you...
by airenrin
Sat Jun 09, 2018 2:07 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Starting with the pinnacle, then gluing highlights
Replies: 7
Views: 1406

Re: Starting with the pinnacle, then gluing highlights

Usually, I try and begin with a concept that can be described in 25 words or less. A cafe that exists on a strange dimensional rift that collects and sells stories. Android trying to figure out why his creators have abandoned him and the laboratory. Last person on Earth journeying to find a working ...
by airenrin
Thu Jun 07, 2018 12:04 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5523
Views: 2542252

Re: Guestbook

Name: Krysta/ Airen Location: Canada No website yet. I'm currently working on my first project in Ren'py, which is turning a partially finished novel into a VN. (The reason why I could not finish it was because the scenes lead to different outcomes, thus visual novel would be the best medium for tel...