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by Curtid21
Tue Oct 30, 2018 11:26 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Prompt Request [Closed]
Replies: 13
Views: 515

Re: Prompt Request for a Community-Driven Visual Novel!

A supernatural nomad goes on a series of adventures. His ability - his subjectivity and senses can change, at will, based on the peoples he's met across his journey. He uses this to deduce truths.
by Curtid21
Sun Oct 07, 2018 9:46 pm
Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
Topic: Music Composer For Hire
Replies: 2
Views: 285

Re: Music Composer For Hire

There's a real depth to your music and a sound quality of a live performance. Wow
by Curtid21
Mon Sep 17, 2018 12:08 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Feedback for a fantasy VN
Replies: 8
Views: 616

Re: Feedback for a fantasy VN

Hey MiraiZura, Welcome! I liked this intro. It gave me a classic, straightforward feel that also had capacity to go anywhere. I felt the same way after the intro of the classic, Princess Maker 2. My only issue is that I want you to post more of the story. I'm not sure where the first third of the in...
by Curtid21
Sat Sep 15, 2018 8:49 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Music, Sound, and Movies
Topic: Picking the right music
Replies: 1
Views: 858

Re: Picking the right music

Personally, I make it myself. Exactly, you need to find out how a particular scene makes you feel and you create the music by keeping those feelings in mind. 2nd this. I know for sure I'm a very picky person when it comes to music and how they might fit to scenes in my project. But definitely choos...
by Curtid21
Sat Sep 15, 2018 1:19 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Enjoy Yourself Read - Destined: Final Script
Replies: 4
Views: 1222

Re: Enjoy Yourself Read - Destined: Final Script

I totally get where you're coming from now. Hoping to use this weekend to go over these drafts. Hyped!
by Curtid21
Thu Sep 13, 2018 2:22 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Enjoy Yourself Read - Destined: Final Script
Replies: 4
Views: 1222

Re: Enjoy Yourself Read - Destined: Final Script

I feel like the narrative parts are a bit weak; it's a lot of "I do this." "I do that." "I see this." so it feels like the MC is spending a lot of time summing up what he's doing, but not a lot of time sharing his thoughts or feelings. The MC appears to exist as a device to interact with the world,...
by Curtid21
Thu Sep 06, 2018 11:53 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Enjoy Yourself Read - Destined: Final Script
Replies: 4
Views: 1222

Enjoy Yourself Read - Destined: Final Script

Hey all! Again thank you to all continued readers and commenters so far. I've really come a long way since the first time I found this place. I'm about 50%-60% done with scriptwriting for the Destined project. I've shared these steps with you all as I've completed them. This is likely going to be th...
by Curtid21
Tue Sep 04, 2018 4:39 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Script feedback, please?
Replies: 5
Views: 804

Re: Script feedback, please?

So, this is our first game, and my first post to this forum. I'm hoping my script is clear and concise. Is the POV confusing? We're going to use sprites which are from the thigh upward for characters. Maybe we'll also have little expressions in the corners of their textboxes too. I'm not sure yet. ...
by Curtid21
Sat Aug 25, 2018 5:16 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Crime Opera: The Butterfly Effect [Kickstarter Now Live!]
Replies: 6
Views: 1053

Re: Crime Opera: The Butterfly Effect [Demo Available]

sbester wrote:
Thu Aug 23, 2018 2:55 pm
Hi all!

A new demo will be on its way and ready in time for the kickstarter launch. In the meantime, the trailer video can now be seen!
Wow, were you the artist for this as well?
by Curtid21
Sat Aug 25, 2018 4:44 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How many words should I aim for?
Replies: 12
Views: 1292

Re: How many words should I aim for?

I often think about this when writing my own project. Right now, my project is about 1/3rd of the way done and there are about 20k words all in all. In my experience as a VN reader, it's really about the "visual" more than the "novel". While the avg reading speed may be 150 wpm, we have the ability ...
by Curtid21
Sat Aug 25, 2018 4:03 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)
Replies: 23
Views: 2130

Re: Beating Hearts (Fantasy) (DEMO)

- mini update - now added - - some hand-drawn characters have been implemented - mini story corrections (typos) - attempted bug fixes - bugs from new update - lewis and lauren will always appear in the middle of the screen due to their costume positioning on the canvas. this will be fixed soon! vic...
by Curtid21
Tue Aug 14, 2018 4:19 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Read and Critique: Destined - The Second Script!
Replies: 4
Views: 579

Re: Read and Critique: Destined - The Second Script!

I read until the fifth day, I think? I'll give my thoughts on this. While it seems that you're going for the standard "tabula rasa" MC that can be molded according to the player's ideals(nothing wrong with that, it can be an excellent way to do things if done right), your writing and knowledge(whet...
by Curtid21
Wed Aug 08, 2018 5:50 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Read and Critique: Destined - The Second Script!
Replies: 4
Views: 579

Read and Critique: Destined - The Second Script!

Hey all, I'd just like to thank everyone who's helped along so far, including Musick, TigerAlpaca, and the nearly 40 other people who gave my First Script a read on my last thread. I've since finished my second route! And I'm totally looking forward to anyone dropping a helpful comment on the work f...
by Curtid21
Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:59 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Read and Critique my First Script!!
Replies: 5
Views: 656

Re: Read and Critique my First Script!!

The script is SO good =D I struggled to get interested in first - but the end is really sweet and it just hooks the reader in. I'm not very good at putting my thoughts into words - but it's really good and I would definitely play the finished game Holy moly, thank you. I've just finished the next s...
by Curtid21
Fri Jul 20, 2018 8:08 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Making Anime Characters without copyright?
Replies: 2
Views: 809

Re: Making Anime Characters without copyright?

I only know so much about art, but as a creator in general, definitely don't rush. You have an inspiration already, and you can draw, so you have a good base. The rest of the creative process for new characters will come to you.
Practice a bit. Watch your fav artist's livestream. You got this.