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Oh my god thank you! You're my hero!

First off, I'm asking in this forum because Tyranobuilder's official help forums are on Steam. The game I'm trying to make is an eroge and I don't want it connected to my Steam account. I tried making a new Steam account but Steam requires you to spend 5 dollars at least before you can take part in ...

And I'm back.
I rewrote a bit of it to make it more in the moment and less flowery. I hope it's still interesting.

I also added some clarification to the artist what I mean by "CG" and things.

Thank you again for your help. We're learning as we go.

*GASP!* Thank you! You're my new favourite person. Edit: May I please request the inside of a subway train, and also a subway/train station? I personally need one and also I bet a lot of people would use it, too. Never mind there's one in post #368! Perfect. Edit 2: May I request a lingerie store? A...

Ohh this looks cool. I can't wait until it's playable.

Thanks everyone!

I have a new question. Should I change it to Third Person Omniscient? Third Person Limited? Is that an acceptable form of narration in VNs, or is it frowned against?

I think this could fall under parody. For example, instead of Lady Gaga you could do Lady Dada. Some people will "get the joke" that Dadaism was an art movement that posed the question "What is art?". That's a very layman's definition but, yeah you could do it. Pretty sure it fal...

Thanks for the feedback!
I'm thinking of shifting the POV to third person omniscient because I've been told Chie's POV is confusing and she comes across as too detached and aloof. So, your comments help.

So, this is our first game, and my first post to this forum. I'm hoping my script is clear and concise. Is the POV confusing? We're going to use sprites which are from the thigh upward for characters. Maybe we'll also have little expressions in the corners of their textboxes too. I'm not sure yet. T...