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by anonymouse
Sun Sep 27, 2020 11:28 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Is it possible to create Layered Side Images?
Replies: 1
Views: 65

Re: Is it possible to create Layered Side Images?

I don't know about layered side images, but I use a ConditionSwitch that may get you the effect you're after. image side mycharacter = ConditionSwitch( "character_emote == 'happy'", "side_mycharacter_happy.png", "character_emote == 'sad'", "side_mycharacter_sad.png") Just set the character_emote var...
by anonymouse
Wed Jun 17, 2020 5:07 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7850
Views: 824930

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

I think the hips and legs look good. Something about the shape of the torso looks off. I think the biggest problem is in the shoulders and head. The arms seem to connect to the body unnaturally, and I think the head is too small. Just my unprofessional opinion! I like the subject, and it's better th...
by anonymouse
Sun Jun 07, 2020 12:35 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7850
Views: 824930

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

She looks like... an angel. :D Her hair (where it flows down her back) has an wing-like quality that I think adds to the angelic look. Her hands look too big. Is she standing on a pedestal? The white part under her dress kind of looks like a marble pedestal to me. The pink 'ribbon' down the front of...
by anonymouse
Thu Jun 04, 2020 7:18 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7850
Views: 824930

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

group portrait.jpg
I know drawn art is the usual style around here, but I wonder if you like my character line up? It is 3d rendered with significant post work.

Do you like the style?
How old do they look?
Any other comments?

Please and thank you! :D
by anonymouse
Thu Jun 04, 2020 4:14 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: New isobellesophia's art thread (Wishing critiques)
Replies: 4
Views: 932

Re: New isobellesophia's art thread.

My favorite is the one in the teal dress. I like how there is a natural flow from her shoulders, chest, arms, and to the bottom of her dress. I think it's especially good in her left (from her perspective) shoulder and arm.
by anonymouse
Mon Jun 01, 2020 8:15 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Multiple Dialog with Side Images
Replies: 5
Views: 298

Re: Multiple Dialog with Side Images

I'm starting to think this is a bug. I tinkered with my code some. define e = Character("Eileen", image='eileen') define l = Character("Lucy", image='lucy') style block1_multiple2_say_window: ypos 807 yanchor 1.0 screen multiple_say(who, what, multiple): style_prefix "say" window: id "window" if who...
by anonymouse
Mon Jun 01, 2020 6:57 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Multiple Dialog with Side Images
Replies: 5
Views: 298

Re: Multiple Dialog with Side Images

Did you run your code? When I ran it, I didn't get side images with the multiple dialog lines. Here, let me show you. Using this code, define e = Character("Eileen", image='eileen') define l = Character("Lucy", image='lucy') style block1_multiple2_say_window: ypos 807 yanchor 1.0 screen say(who, wha...
by anonymouse
Mon Jun 01, 2020 4:01 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Multiple Dialog with Side Images
Replies: 5
Views: 298

Re: Multiple Dialog with Side Images

Thank you for your reply! Unfortunately, it doesn't look like this works. I made a bare bones working example to show. I made a new project and put all the relevant code into script.py define e = Character("Eileen", image='eileen') define l = Character("Lucy", image='lucy') style block1_multiple2_sa...
by anonymouse
Sun May 31, 2020 6:02 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Multiple Dialog with Side Images
Replies: 5
Views: 298

Multiple Dialog with Side Images

Hi, I am trying to implement multiple character dialog in my VN, and it was really easy to get the basic functionality by adding. style block1_multiple2_say_window: ypos 807 yanchor 1.0 and having my characters talk at the same time like this a "This is a test." (multiple=2) b "Yes, it is." (multipl...
by anonymouse
Thu Mar 07, 2019 1:32 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Balancing narration with dialogue, improving dialogue and banter
Replies: 15
Views: 1293

Re: Balancing narration with dialogue, improving dialogue and banter

I see you're already using character sheets, so I guess this post is just to let you know how I think you are doing something right, nerupuff! I find that a character's thoughts/emotions come more easily to me than the dialogue they use to express themselves. My character sheets include some sample ...
by anonymouse
Tue Jan 08, 2019 8:27 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Need Advice on Developing this Character I'm Making
Replies: 6
Views: 768

Re: Need Advice on Developing this Character I'm Making

The point of asking which sin is to try and avoid something that may be too offensive, which is why I don't think Lust would be a good idea. Honestly, I think any sin could work, even Lust. You just need to avoid writing her as a negative stereotype, which is what I think would invite criticism. He...
by anonymouse
Mon Jan 07, 2019 8:21 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Need Advice on Developing this Character I'm Making
Replies: 6
Views: 768

Re: Need Advice on Developing this Character I'm Making

None of the sins jump out as being particularly fitting for a sex change. My advice is make the sex change incidental to the sin; make the sex change about the character's preexisting personality. Don't use sexist tropes. For example, if you went with greed , don't make her a gold-digger. Something ...
by anonymouse
Fri Jan 04, 2019 6:38 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Script writing
Replies: 4
Views: 842

Re: Script writing

I love Twine for script writing. I find it very easy to use, and I like how you can view the overall structure of the story in graph form. I am getting close to finishing the script of my first story, and my process went like this. Write the endings Write the beginning Add major scenes Connect with ...
by anonymouse
Sat Oct 13, 2018 12:13 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Please Critique My 3D Art (DAZ Studio, GIMP, BeFunky)
Replies: 10
Views: 836

Re: Please Critique My 3D Art (DAZ Studio, GIMP, BeFunky)

Oh, the head is definitely too big. All of my figures are somewhat stylized with heads and eyes that are just a little bit too big. That's something I did to try to move away from that uncanny valley effect that is a common criticism of 3D art. And I got your psd. I will take a look later. Thank you...
by anonymouse
Fri Oct 12, 2018 3:59 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Please Critique My 3D Art (DAZ Studio, GIMP, BeFunky)
Replies: 10
Views: 836

Re: Please Critique My 3D Art (DAZ Studio, GIMP, BeFunky)

Apologizes for the double post, but I made an attempt to follow your lead on this, morinoir. I added some more items to the scene to make it less empty, and I picked a new poster. Well, that's minor stuff. The main thing I'm showing with this new picture is my attempt to get some of that warm fuzzy ...