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by Musashi
Tue Dec 16, 2014 5:14 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Yesoidos [WIP; Kabbalah, Jewish, psychological]
Replies: 47
Views: 16600

Re: Yesoidos [WIP; Kabbalah, Jewish, psychological]

The Yesoidos sources have moved to GitHub: https://github.com/chaimleib/yesoidos
by Musashi
Fri Feb 03, 2012 2:59 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: (CLOSED) - Game's been released already
Replies: 3
Views: 1064

Re: Seeking Sideimage Artist & Proofreaders/Critiquers!

I've made some comments and edits in the script.rpy file. I put all of my input in comments, leaving the original code completely intact.

It's a good story and a great job! I look forward to the release!

Edit: moved commented script.rpy to e-mail to author.
by Musashi
Thu Feb 02, 2012 8:40 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Epicness...
Replies: 18
Views: 2573

Re: Epicness...

A while ago, asking these same questions, I decided to analyze one of my favorite VNs, Katawa Shoujo. I thought maybe someone would be interested in my notes from then, because I think of them as decent story tips: Start with excitement! But don't resolve it yet. OK to calm down after that. Vary the...
by Musashi
Tue Nov 08, 2011 1:01 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Yesoidos [WIP; Kabbalah, Jewish, psychological]
Replies: 47
Views: 16600

Story outline (spoiler!)

Story outline and spoiler! Yay! Up until now, I have only had a very rough outline, which is helpful, but not detailed enough to write my story quickly. I am now working on medium-detail story outline. Here is an excerpt: First spoiler! ...Drunk on his power, Pinchas rebels against G‑d using black ...
by Musashi
Wed Oct 12, 2011 11:25 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Character sketches - please critique!
Replies: 8
Views: 986

Re: Character sketches - please critique!

@HanaMori: Thanks! To be honest, I traced someone else's head shape for the avatar, but changed around the hairline and colored it. On the other hand, the sketches are later creations, and are not traced at all. I'll focus more on practicing the outlines. @Deji: I'm downloading it now. The first pag...
by Musashi
Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:08 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Character sketches - please critique!
Replies: 8
Views: 986

Re: Character sketches - please critique!

The body shape is 3 out of 5. The thing I mostly annoyed with is d face.
OK. What exactly is it that I can fix?
by Musashi
Wed Oct 12, 2011 2:02 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Character sketches - please critique!
Replies: 8
Views: 986

Re: Character sketches - please critique!

I learned ONLY d sketches until I got a proportional shape, d details can wait.
I'm not really sure what you mean. Is d a special term? Could you give specifics? I'm not actually an artist...
by Musashi
Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:27 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Character sketches - please critique!
Replies: 8
Views: 986

Character sketches - please critique!

Hi guys, I have only just started trying to learn to draw people a few days ago, so I am looking for some pointers. This first one seems a bit off to me somehow: http://yesoidos.sourceforge.net/upload/binyomin_sketch1.jpg This one is supposed to be the same character, but several years younger: http...
by Musashi
Mon Oct 10, 2011 4:29 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Do these sprites clash with my shoes?
Replies: 11
Views: 1526

Re: Do these sprites clash with my shoes?

I think actually that the art styles do clash. On the backgrounds, the glistening highlights contrast a lot with the almost complete lack of such effects on the character. Maybe some soft highlights and brighter areas could be added to the character art without discarding it completely?
by Musashi
Sun Oct 09, 2011 7:42 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: VIM script for Ren'Py syntax highlighting?
Replies: 5
Views: 2412

Re: VIM script for Ren'Py syntax highlighting?

I found Spiky's syntax file very useful, so I used it, then added some improvements: Spell-checking support String tags and escaped characters String interpolations (including the new-style interpolations in 6.13) Auto-indenting using spaces; the tab key produces four spaces Tab characters are highl...
by Musashi
Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:13 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Mac-PPC support in 6.13
Replies: 1
Views: 498

Mac-PPC support in 6.13

When I downloaded the renpy-ppc package, I found two PPC binaries, one labeled renpy-ppc.app, and one labeled renpy.app. What's going on? Are these just for developers on mac-ppc? What's the difference between them?
by Musashi
Thu Oct 06, 2011 4:11 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Seraphine: Into the Wind
Replies: 184
Views: 30791

Re: Seraphine: Into the Wind (RPG) - w/Demo

Wow. Great backstory, beautiful artwork! The background sounds make this sound really professional! Most of all, though, this was a lot of fun to play. I'm really glad I discovered this. Thank you so much! I just have a few suggestions about the glossary: Could you make the glossary accessible at an...
by Musashi
Tue Oct 04, 2011 11:39 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Yesoidos [WIP; Kabbalah, Jewish, psychological]
Replies: 47
Views: 16600

Betcha you've never seen this before....

A new alpha is out, v0.4a9. You can download it at http://yesoidos.sf.net/download But, perhaps more importantly.... Jewish anime!!!! http://yesoidos.sf.net/upload/binyomin1.png This is my first attempt at doing anime. I guess things will only get better from here on out! ## Oct. 5: After looking at...
by Musashi
Tue Sep 27, 2011 11:47 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Yesoidos [WIP; Kabbalah, Jewish, psychological]
Replies: 47
Views: 16600

Re: [WIP kabalah, Jewish, psychological]: Yesoidos (ART NEED

Thanks, cosmo! Although I cannot make the demo date I set for myself, mainly due to lack of art, I am still adding on to the story. I added a new meditative conversation with Binyomin's inner voice in chapter 2, and word count is now at 5,923. Update, 10/03/2011: Expanded the conversation with the i...
by Musashi
Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:46 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Yesoidos [WIP; Kabbalah, Jewish, psychological]
Replies: 47
Views: 16600

Demo status

OK, another update about the demo: Since I have no artist right now drawing the characters for Yesoidos, I regret to say that while I will make a new release on the 19th, it will be missing professional character graphics. Therefore, I don't think that release will be ready for the Ren'Py games list...