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by FerventWriter
Mon Dec 09, 2019 2:23 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Journey of The Scroll [RPG][IGMC2017][Voiced][v.2 is up]
Replies: 4
Views: 2650

Re: Journey of The Scroll [RPG][IGMC2017][Voiced][v.2 is up]

Hi! First of all, thank you for working so hard and making this game! Overall, I really enjoyed it. Here's some of my thoughts as I was playing: -The starting screen looks a little bland-maybe add the title of the game to it? -It's really impressive that the entire game is Voice Acted! It really add...
by FerventWriter
Wed Nov 13, 2019 1:57 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: Looking for Environment artist for point-and-click audiovisual novel
Replies: 1
Views: 125

Re: Looking for (Writer) (Environment artist) (Voice actors) for point-and-click audiovisual novel

Hello! I'd be interesting in helping write for the project. Please send me a PM if you are still looking for a writer.
by FerventWriter
Wed Nov 06, 2019 1:59 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Dark Nights[Otome,Fantasy,Romance,Mystery][Free]
Replies: 21
Views: 2843

Re: Dark Nights[Otome,Fantasy,Romance,Mystery][Free]

This was amazing and it is so impressive to me that it was mostly only you working on it! You are so talented! Which route was did you and play and which did you enjoy the most? I loved Junuro's route! He's such a protective and sweet character that I fell for him right away. How mysterious he was a...
by FerventWriter
Tue Oct 22, 2019 9:38 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Love Spell: Written In The Stars [DEMO][Otome][Romance][Magic][Kickstarter]
Replies: 1
Views: 293

Re: Love Spell: Written In The Stars [DEMO][Otome][Romance][Magic][Kickstarter]

1. To me, Jamie stands out the most! I really like characters with mysterious pasts or other things to find out as you go along the route, so I would assume he would be my favorite. He's so cute too ^-^! 2. I love fantasy stories, especially if there is typically witch magic and things like that, so...
by FerventWriter
Sun Oct 13, 2019 10:34 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Star Legation [Sci-fi][Adventure][RPG Elements][Romance][Space Opera][Dramedy][Mystery]
Replies: 8
Views: 1066

Re: The Star Legation [Sci-fi][Adventure][Romance][Space Opera][Dramedy][Mystery]

I think having one concise route at the end of the demo is a good idea! It gives everyone the same experience, which is important if you want feedback on the same bits of game. I look forward to trying it out :)
by FerventWriter
Fri Oct 04, 2019 5:14 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Primrose Path [Romance][Drama][Otome][Mature]
Replies: 24
Views: 2570

Re: Primrose Path [Romance][Drama][Otome][Mature]

First off, this looks great, and I can tell a ton of hard work and dedication has been put into it! Amazing! Now to the questions: 1. I think for me at least, as long as I can skip past the parts of the common route I've already seen on later playthroughs, the length doesn't matter to me-it should j...
by FerventWriter
Wed Oct 02, 2019 6:19 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Raintime [Psychological][Young Adult][Magical Realism]
Replies: 2
Views: 418

Re: The Raintime [Psychological][Young Adult][Magical Realism]

I really enjoyed the assets and the backgrounds! They were all very vibrant and unique-especially the graphic style. The story line was interesting too-it was all very melancholy, which I enjoy in games, and while I did not find the main character relateable, I was still interested in his story and ...
by FerventWriter
Mon Sep 23, 2019 6:20 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Distant Leaps to Circinus - [Adventure | Dark Fantasy | Multiple Characters | Romance | Psychological Horror ]
Replies: 8
Views: 1109

Re: Distant Leaps to Circinus - [Adventure | Dark Fantasy | Multiple Characters | Romance | Psychological Horror ]

I think the GUI looks clean and very professional! I definitley prefer a more immersive feel, so actually having that option available to players is a really good idea when personal preference comes into play. I also like that the menus don't look cluttered or like there's too much going on as well-...
by FerventWriter
Wed Sep 11, 2019 9:36 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Twisted: A Dark Fairytale [horror/fantasy] 4 days left in Kickstarter!!
Replies: 39
Views: 4397

Re: Twisted: A Dark Fairytale [horror/fantasy] Kickstarter is LIVE!!

The sprite looks great! I love the tones and colors that were used-it suits Sage's look really well. The clothing also gives her a sort of mysterious appearance, which is also really cool! I like all the designs for the characters, but this is a great step in the right direction! I can't wait to see...
by FerventWriter
Sun Sep 08, 2019 10:56 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Roadwarden [Fantasy/RPG Elements/Pixel Art] [DEMO]
Replies: 35
Views: 2862

Re: Roadwarden [Fantasy/RPG Elements/Pixel Art] [DEMO]

I absolutely love the track! It has just the right amount of eeriness and uneasiness to keep you on edge-which is goo, because from what you said, it sounds like its for a more frightening scene/part of the game. I might be a bit biased because I love this type of music anyway, but even so, keep it ...
by FerventWriter
Sun Sep 08, 2019 10:47 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Of Sense and Soul [BxB] [Historical/Victorian, Slice of Life, Romance] In Development
Replies: 6
Views: 466

Re: Of Sense and Soul [BxB] [Historical/Victorian, Slice of Life, Romance] In Development

First off, I absolutely love Victorian era settings, so this already makes me really excited! You seem to have a really good sense of how to make it realistic as well, which is also great! Making it a M/M is an interesting choice as well-there's such a small amount of LGBT+ stories involving past er...
by FerventWriter
Wed Sep 04, 2019 5:55 pm
Forum: We are a Commercial Project looking for Partners
Topic: Lunaria (GXB,GXG,BXG,BXB)(18+ Fantasy/Rpg) (Rev Share/Patreon) Filled!
Replies: 12
Views: 1028

Re: Lunaria (GXB,GXG,BXG,BXB)(18+ Fantasy/Rpg) (Rev Share/Patreon) Background/CG artist/Voice actor needed

I would be interested in being a voice actor! My voice is feminine-I thought I should mention that since I am unsure of what parts you still need. My discord information is Jena #0355
by FerventWriter
Thu Aug 22, 2019 12:13 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Primrose Path [Romance][Drama][Otome][Mature]
Replies: 24
Views: 2570

Re: Primrose Path [Romance][Drama][Otome][Mature]

1: For me personally, I want an MC that's somewhere in the middle of being too quiet or shy and being too loud or obnoxious. Having an MC that acts like a doormat to the romancable characters makes me really uncomfortable, but at the same time one who's too outspoken can alienate a lot of players, s...
by FerventWriter
Thu Aug 22, 2019 12:08 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Twisted: A Dark Fairytale [horror/fantasy] 4 days left in Kickstarter!!
Replies: 39
Views: 4397

Re: Twisted: A dark fairy tale

I think this is a great trailer! It doesn't give too much away and saves the mystery of the game, which I really appreciate. I especially like the logo-it's Gothic and fits the game great from what content I can see. Can't wait to play the demo-hopefully I can give you some feedback on that as well ...
by FerventWriter
Wed Aug 14, 2019 11:46 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][REMAKING]
Replies: 20
Views: 4160

Re: Change Me![GxB][Romance/Fantasy/Comedy][REMAKING]

I love your promotional poster! The art is really cute and charming-it drew me in easily! Also, I'm quite interested in your game itself, as the mysteriousness of the characters is also really interesting to me. Overall everything looks great and I thought you would like some feedback-it looks like ...