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by GreenVegetations
Tue Sep 17, 2019 10:53 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: I need Help Please with my awful love scene writing
Replies: 2
Views: 2565

Re: I need Help Please with my awful love scene writing

Well it seems like you are the starting off the conversations extremely strong. Like most of these conversations begin with you either trying to fuck someone or offer them protection and it just feels unnatural to do so. I would suggest you just simply have a conversation with the love interest and ...
by GreenVegetations
Sun Sep 08, 2019 1:18 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Reigniting a past love
Replies: 4
Views: 2377

Re: Reigniting a past love

I think that it's ok if the reader misses most of the original relationship. I've seen many writers say that you don't necessarily need to show all the backstory in the plot, but it is important as a writer to know the characters and their backstories so you can essentially understand them and know ...
by GreenVegetations
Thu Sep 05, 2019 6:38 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to create immersive dialogue that progresses the scene?
Replies: 5
Views: 2592

Re: How to create immersive dialogue that progresses the scene?

With that said, I typically find that stories in which there isn't some problem that needs to be solved are boring (because I personally tend to care less about characters talking about random stuff than about characters trying to solve interesting problems). So I do strongly recommend NOT going fo...
by GreenVegetations
Wed Sep 04, 2019 12:31 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to create immersive dialogue that progresses the scene?
Replies: 5
Views: 2592

How to create immersive dialogue that progresses the scene?

I am having a problem when it comes to writing dialogue. When I try to create an organic branching dialogue between the player and another character I am able to create an immersive conversation that allows the player to feel like they are a part of the world and this will allow for a greater connec...
by GreenVegetations
Sun Sep 01, 2019 12:50 pm
Forum: Anime, Games, and Japan
Topic: Last game you played?
Replies: 379
Views: 54587

Re: Last game you played?

I've recently been playing a lot of Bastion and Psychonaughts. I really like the way they tell their stories and find it quite unique, the writing is also really entertaining.