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by lummoire
Thu Apr 30, 2020 10:57 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Character's doppelganger
Replies: 1
Views: 528

Re: Character's doppelganger

I don't see why not, if it helps with the story you're telling. (ie Future-You traveled in time to warn Present-You to not do something, or else you're in danger)

As long as there's a way to distinguish one character from another aha. Otherwise, you might have a confused reader, I think.
by lummoire
Thu Apr 30, 2020 10:53 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: No narration?
Replies: 8
Views: 825

Re: No narration?

TL;DR: It makes sense, it really comes down to what you need to convey or writer's preference. If it can be told through dialogue, then no narration is needed. Long post ahead, my apologies lol. In my years of schooling, I've had "show, don't tell!" beaten over my head like I was a drum lol. The con...
by lummoire
Mon Apr 27, 2020 1:04 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: How to win NaNoRenO?
Replies: 6
Views: 812

Re: How to win NaNoRenO?

I agree with the top posts, and have an additional criteria I hold to myself for a "win". That said, my post will be anecdotal aha. I'd consider a personal win being a finished project that I'm proud of, whether it's visually impressive or in its written strength. A matter of quality versus quantity...
by lummoire
Fri Apr 24, 2020 5:45 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Is ok to isolate traits to specific characters?
Replies: 6
Views: 973

Re: Is ok to isolate traits to specific characters?

I agree that it depends. In graphic design, contrast is a good way to highlight an element. Bringing that into writing, the typical otome that doesn't try to be unique has several archetypes (mysterious, arrogant, flirty), and those traits in 1 character are emphasized by not being extremely present...
by lummoire
Thu Apr 23, 2020 2:53 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Meme Persona Girlfriend Visual Novel
Replies: 9
Views: 743

Re: Meme Persona Girlfriend Visual Novel

Makes me think of Merryweather's webcomics haha (all the game consoles, a whole series on Internet Explorer and Co., even Elon Musk lol). Food's probably done a fair bit (I have food on my mind all the time fff), maybe... - playing card suits? - plants? - school subjects? idek - weapon types? (a la ...
by lummoire
Thu Apr 23, 2020 12:33 am
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: [Open] FREE writer/proofreader/editor, happy to help!
Replies: 6
Views: 583

[Open] FREE writer/proofreader/editor, happy to help!

Hi everyone! You can call me lumi. c: Offering: FREE text-related services, all in English! This includes: - writing - editing - proofreading - outlining - brainstorming - jamming or freestyling on a prompt - or anything related to the above! About me: - 2x years old - pretty confident in my ability...
by lummoire
Wed Apr 22, 2020 9:40 pm
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5262
Views: 1253849

Re: Guestbook

Hiyo! Name: lummoire / lumi Location: USA (EST) Website: N/A Comments: I was thinking about buying VN Maker last year when it was on Humble Bundle (especially since it seemed to have Live 2D support). However, I decided against it because I didn't think I'd be following through. I've visited these f...