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by vociferocity
Sun Apr 01, 2018 4:49 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Mermaid Isle [friendship & fishing] [Nano 18] [DEMO]
Replies: 1
Views: 1032

Mermaid Isle [friendship & fishing] [Nano 18] [DEMO]

https://i.imgur.com/oqsDf36.png Heather has moved into her grandmother's old house on a quiet island, to spend a year peacefully learning to fish. On her first day out, she runs into someone strange...a real life mermaid. Leimomi is stuck on the island, but Heather might be able to help her leave.....
by vociferocity
Fri Mar 18, 2016 7:50 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Ghost on The Shore[Nanoreno 2016] [Horror]
Replies: 11
Views: 3129

Re: The Ghost on The Shore[Nanoreno 2016] [Horror]

maryeliezka wrote:
To get another bad end, You need to visit certain location for x times.
Oh, I see!
I actually thought it might be that, but I just hadn't visited the location enough times. I think x might be too high? I think having to visit it two or three times would get more people.
by vociferocity
Thu Mar 17, 2016 11:39 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Catching the Fox [NaNoRenO16] [NEW! Battle Preview GIF]
Replies: 56
Views: 8191

Re: Catching the Fox [NaNoRenO16] [NEW! GUI Art+1st Post Rev

I can't wait to play this! I love slice of life stories, and now that I'm getting older (wah! where have the years gone?), I really appreciate playing games about older characters. So - I am a big fan of the concept.
by vociferocity
Thu Mar 17, 2016 1:31 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Eevee Quiz (FREE | Online and offline/downloadable versions)
Replies: 7
Views: 2248

Re: Eevee Quiz (FREE | Online and offline/downloadable versi

I got Sylveon! Very cute, I like the art.
by vociferocity
Tue Mar 15, 2016 8:13 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: NaNoReno 2016 General Recruitment Thread
Replies: 60
Views: 9250

Re: NaNoReno 2016 General Recruitment Thread

Hey guys, I'm an editor/proofreader! If you're translating your script into English from another language, if you think the grammar might be a little patchy in some places, or you'd just like another pair of eyes looking over your dialogue for typos, let me know! I'd love to help make your game grea...
by vociferocity
Tue Mar 15, 2016 1:46 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Ghost on The Shore[Nanoreno 2016] [Horror]
Replies: 11
Views: 3129

Re: The Ghost on The Shore[Nanoreno 2016] [Horror]

I liked it! Short and sweet and a little bit spooky, just the way I like my horror games. I really liked the friendship between the two boys, & the storyline. I got almost all the endings, but I couldn't get the second Bad End. The Bad End I got was the one where you run away when the ghost first ap...
by vociferocity
Sun Mar 13, 2016 11:01 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How do you guys plan/write bad endings?
Replies: 15
Views: 1813

Re: How do you guys plan/write bad endings?

I guess I hadn't seriously considered having no "bad" endings, but now that I'm thinking about it, it's true that some of the VNs I've played haven't had any, & it didn't detract from the game at all. I definitely don't want to shoehorn anything in. Thanks for all the advice, guys, it's giving me so...
by vociferocity
Sun Mar 13, 2016 10:58 pm
Forum: WiP: Short Noncommercial Games
Topic: Sweet Tooth
Replies: 8
Views: 2137

Re: Sweet Tooth

I just played through William's route...very cute! I only got one of his endings ("Employee of the Year", I think? I also got the spy ending on my first try :cry: and a bankrupt ending :cry: ...at least I got one good ending!) , but I'll probably play again later to try get the other two (wouldn't m...
by vociferocity
Sun Mar 13, 2016 7:49 am
Forum: WiP: Short Noncommercial Games
Topic: Many A Weary Foot [ Friendship | Welsh Fantasy ]
Replies: 19
Views: 3277

Re: Many A Weary Foot [ Friendship | Welsh Fantasy ]

The screens you've posted are so gorgeous! The story sounds really interesting, too. I can't wait to play this :D
by vociferocity
Wed Mar 09, 2016 4:41 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How do you guys plan/write bad endings?
Replies: 15
Views: 1813

How do you guys plan/write bad endings?

I've been working on a short game, and everything was going well until I suddenly realised I haven't planned any bad ends for the game. As a player, I find it disappointing when I reach a bad end, but I know other players really enjoy them, and I feel like they're almost necessary for a visual novel...
by vociferocity
Sat Nov 16, 2013 5:45 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Choices in Kinetic Novels
Replies: 3
Views: 685

Re: Choices in Kinetic Novels

oh huh, ok. I thought it was more of a sliding scale, rather than a binary, but that makes sense!

I might just see what happens when I write the script, then. the plan doesn't have any choices, so I won't try to shoehorn them in.
by vociferocity
Sat Nov 16, 2013 5:19 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Choices in Kinetic Novels
Replies: 3
Views: 685

Choices in Kinetic Novels

Recently I've played two games I'd classify as pretty much KNs - one storyline, no routes, but with a couple of choices. The choices didn't lead to different endings, but more like....failing/succeeding at the current scene. If you fail, you just try again until you pick the correct choice. Now I'm ...
by vociferocity
Sat Nov 02, 2013 3:11 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Dalliance [GxB][GxG][Otome][9/9/15]
Replies: 24
Views: 5773

Re: Dalliance [Otome]

the art and the UI are seriously gorgeous! plus the story sounds really interesting. can't wait to see where this goes :)
by vociferocity
Sat Nov 02, 2013 1:06 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: A Red and White Fable [KN] [FANTASY] [HORROR?] [BXG]
Replies: 4
Views: 866

Re: A Red and White Fable [KN] [BXG]

really into how out of focus the faces are, it adds to the whole ~mysterious~ feeling about your game
by vociferocity
Fri Nov 01, 2013 8:27 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: A Red and White Fable [KN] [FANTASY] [HORROR?] [BXG]
Replies: 4
Views: 866

Re: A Red and White Fable [KN] [BXG]

this sounds seriously cool, I'm looking forward to seeing how it goes :)