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by Esphirisa
Thu Feb 27, 2014 11:32 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Dolls' Stories (REMOVED)
Replies: 119
Views: 66953

Re: The Dolls' Stories

Hello! Just played this and I have to say I LOVED it!! mdoll is so adorable~ their loyalty and how fast they warm up to you is quite scary though. I'm glad they had different personalities... for a moment I thought they would have the same dialogue, just different sprites. Would definitely like to s...
by Esphirisa
Tue Feb 25, 2014 12:59 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Halloween otome [GxB] - Tyler's OP EP mp3 + walthrough added
Replies: 202
Views: 80891

Re: Halloween otome [GxB] - Tyler's OP EP mp3 + walthrough a

Haha first off I'd like to say thank you guys so much for such an awesome game!! It's been a long time since I've come on lemmasoft and I'm glad the first game I played after so long was yours. I was pleasantly surprised/absolutely thrilled by the great art, gripping way you tell your story, and the...
by Esphirisa
Wed Jan 04, 2012 1:02 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Dreams of the Skies [2011 Anniversary Edition]
Replies: 53
Views: 24392

Re: Dreams of the Skies [2011 Anniversary Edition]

I'm sorry that I can't remember enough of the original version to comment on the changes, but good job for continuing to improve your work. I think that's really commendable. I reaaaaaaaaaally like the art this time round :D The only real problem was probably the aforementioned emotional aspects. I ...
by Esphirisa
Wed Jan 04, 2012 12:57 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Slimey - A romantic movie [Kinetic novel]
Replies: 26
Views: 7149

Re: Slimey - A romantic movie [Kinetic novel]

It was cute and funny, I'm glad I spent time watching it. But I think Ralph and Gloria's personalities could have been better expressed. I never quite understood their motivations for helping the couple near the end.
by Esphirisa
Mon Jun 20, 2011 8:48 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: PQRS the Game [School, Drama, Comedy, Romance]
Replies: 31
Views: 14121

Re: PQRS the Game

Hm, I thought 'Ashley' was a female name. LOL, though I'm also a Singaporean, I'm ashamed to say I've never heard of GPA D: Back to the topic... as mentioned, the story was easy to follow, and I'm sure it will be too even if the reader/player isn't a Singaporean. I love the witty parts, and the time...
by Esphirisa
Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:34 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: DSanchez's - City of Lost Hope
Replies: 10
Views: 5732

Re: DSanchez's - City of Lost Hope

Yay, mystery! You have got a intriguing storyline there, but for a mystery, I believe that more depth is needed. CGs, character art and backgrounds were great, but you can develop more on the characters. Maybe reveal more of their background, personality... I liked the sounds. It made the story more...
by Esphirisa
Tue Jun 07, 2011 2:53 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Untold Myth 1st Tale -Earthbreaking Flight-
Replies: 17
Views: 16161

Re: Untold Myth 1st Tale -Earthbreaking Flight-

Great VN! The animation and sound effects went well together, and was quite refreshing. The grammar needs to be worked on, but that can be easily fixed. I loved the characters' personalities and quirks and their sprites are all very adorable. The storyline is a bit random, but in a good way. Will be...
by Esphirisa
Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:14 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: That Cheap and Sacred Thing - Drama/Sci-fi
Replies: 335
Views: 133369

Re: That Cheap and Sacred Thing - Drama/Sci-fi

I don't think the story NEEDS a sequel; the ending leaves us to contemplate(in a good way and not at all like those frustrating cliffhangers). However, I would love to play the sequel if you're making one, and I don't mind waiting for one! Quick question that has been bothering me a little... is Zoe...
by Esphirisa
Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:41 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Caught in Between: A childhood prologue.
Replies: 41
Views: 20082

Re: Caught in Between: A childhood prologue.

Yay I liked it! As mentioned, there were some grammatical errors. I believed most of them were already pointed out. I like the part when Shione waved goodbye and her mum revealed a background detail. However, I do think that they speak quite maturely for 8 to 9 year old children, and this isn't the ...
by Esphirisa
Fri May 06, 2011 1:15 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: NaNoRenO 2011 - Rapunzel (Fixed Download!)
Replies: 18
Views: 28199

Re: NaNoRenO 2011 - Rapunzel (Fixed Download!)

There are a few punctuation mistakes but since they're minor I won't mention them. Here's the other mistakes I've noticed. (After being locked up) "The girl in the closet th a n sank to the ground and wept." (When Altair returned but Rapunzel wasn't here) "... wondered if she had decided whole heart...
by Esphirisa
Fri May 06, 2011 10:01 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Double Romance
Replies: 73
Views: 114560

Re: Double Romance

Haha, I like the music a lot and don't mind the repetitiveness. In fact, that might be the reason why I got addicted to it :O It has been mentioned already, but I LOVE YOUR ART! It's sooo cute and adorable that it woke the little girl in me that goes "kyaaaa"! Everything about the characters are cut...
by Esphirisa
Fri May 06, 2011 8:25 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Ewe of the Falklands
Replies: 19
Views: 8778

Re: Ewe of the Falklands

Very unexpected and innovative =X. It's kinda ironic how if you generalize things, there's really only two endings :
becoming the King of Peru or dying.
by Esphirisa
Tue Jan 25, 2011 7:24 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: 2nd Teen Story - X.mas (Taken down.)
Replies: 45
Views: 28128

Re: [GxB] 2nd Teen Story - X.mas

I love it!!! Especially because you used your own music and art. I can tell that a lot of work was put into it, and even though most CGs don't have color (yet?), the lineart was pretty. I love your art style... long limbs FTW! I loved the characters' hair especially, and your art was super cute... I...
by Esphirisa
Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:25 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Idol Crush v1.1
Replies: 69
Views: 136463

Re: Idol Crush v1.1

There were a few spelling mistakes like "rukus". The mom's sprite doesn't match the others, but that can't be helped if you're using freeware. Hmm... I feel like the characters are too typical. A misunderstood nice guy, a playboy, and the student council president with awesome grades and looks. The ...
by Esphirisa
Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:11 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Eyes of a Dead Fish
Replies: 16
Views: 5102

Re: Eyes of a Dead Fish

I liked this piece a lot. Maybe because I feel like I can relate to the character. I think that the images were fine. In fact, I like how the past and present were presented. I think the colors and lack of it helped distinguish the contradicting(okay, maybe that's the wrong word to use...) thoughts ...