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by Esphirisa
Thu Feb 27, 2014 11:32 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Dolls' Stories (REMOVED)
Replies: 119
Views: 77364

Re: The Dolls' Stories

Hello! Just played this and I have to say I LOVED it!! mdoll is so adorable~ their loyalty and how fast they warm up to you is quite scary though. I'm glad they had different personalities... for a moment I thought they would have the same dialogue, just different sprites. Would definitely like to s...
by Esphirisa
Tue Feb 25, 2014 12:59 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Halloween otome [GxB] - Tyler's OP EP mp3 + walthrough added
Replies: 202
Views: 100670

Re: Halloween otome [GxB] - Tyler's OP EP mp3 + walthrough a

Haha first off I'd like to say thank you guys so much for such an awesome game!! It's been a long time since I've come on lemmasoft and I'm glad the first game I played after so long was yours. I was pleasantly surprised/absolutely thrilled by the great art, gripping way you tell your story, and the...
by Esphirisa
Wed Jan 04, 2012 1:02 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Dreams of the Skies [2011 Anniversary Edition]
Replies: 53
Views: 28586

Re: Dreams of the Skies [2011 Anniversary Edition]

I'm sorry that I can't remember enough of the original version to comment on the changes, but good job for continuing to improve your work. I think that's really commendable. I reaaaaaaaaaally like the art this time round :D The only real problem was probably the aforementioned emotional aspects. I ...
by Esphirisa
Wed Jan 04, 2012 12:57 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Slimey - A romantic movie [Kinetic novel]
Replies: 26
Views: 9252

Re: Slimey - A romantic movie [Kinetic novel]

It was cute and funny, I'm glad I spent time watching it. But I think Ralph and Gloria's personalities could have been better expressed. I never quite understood their motivations for helping the couple near the end.
by Esphirisa
Mon Jun 20, 2011 8:48 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: PQRS the Game [School, Drama, Comedy, Romance]
Replies: 31
Views: 16849

Re: PQRS the Game

Hm, I thought 'Ashley' was a female name. LOL, though I'm also a Singaporean, I'm ashamed to say I've never heard of GPA D: Back to the topic... as mentioned, the story was easy to follow, and I'm sure it will be too even if the reader/player isn't a Singaporean. I love the witty parts, and the time...
by Esphirisa
Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:34 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: DSanchez's - City of Lost Hope
Replies: 10
Views: 6605

Re: DSanchez's - City of Lost Hope

Yay, mystery! You have got a intriguing storyline there, but for a mystery, I believe that more depth is needed. CGs, character art and backgrounds were great, but you can develop more on the characters. Maybe reveal more of their background, personality... I liked the sounds. It made the story more...
by Esphirisa
Tue Jun 07, 2011 2:53 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Untold Myth 1st Tale -Earthbreaking Flight-
Replies: 17
Views: 34891

Re: Untold Myth 1st Tale -Earthbreaking Flight-

Great VN! The animation and sound effects went well together, and was quite refreshing. The grammar needs to be worked on, but that can be easily fixed. I loved the characters' personalities and quirks and their sprites are all very adorable. The storyline is a bit random, but in a good way. Will be...
by Esphirisa
Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:14 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: That Cheap and Sacred Thing - Drama/Sci-fi
Replies: 335
Views: 165090

Re: That Cheap and Sacred Thing - Drama/Sci-fi

I don't think the story NEEDS a sequel; the ending leaves us to contemplate(in a good way and not at all like those frustrating cliffhangers). However, I would love to play the sequel if you're making one, and I don't mind waiting for one! Quick question that has been bothering me a little... is Zoe...
by Esphirisa
Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:41 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Caught in Between: A childhood prologue.
Replies: 41
Views: 24486

Re: Caught in Between: A childhood prologue.

Yay I liked it! As mentioned, there were some grammatical errors. I believed most of them were already pointed out. I like the part when Shione waved goodbye and her mum revealed a background detail. However, I do think that they speak quite maturely for 8 to 9 year old children, and this isn't the ...
by Esphirisa
Fri May 06, 2011 1:15 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: NaNoRenO 2011 - Rapunzel (Fixed Download!)
Replies: 18
Views: 35521

Re: NaNoRenO 2011 - Rapunzel (Fixed Download!)

There are a few punctuation mistakes but since they're minor I won't mention them. Here's the other mistakes I've noticed. (After being locked up) "The girl in the closet th a n sank to the ground and wept." (When Altair returned but Rapunzel wasn't here) "... wondered if she had deci...
by Esphirisa
Fri May 06, 2011 10:01 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Double Romance
Replies: 73
Views: 125451

Re: Double Romance

Haha, I like the music a lot and don't mind the repetitiveness. In fact, that might be the reason why I got addicted to it :O It has been mentioned already, but I LOVE YOUR ART! It's sooo cute and adorable that it woke the little girl in me that goes "kyaaaa"! Everything about the characte...
by Esphirisa
Fri May 06, 2011 8:25 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Ewe of the Falklands
Replies: 19
Views: 10823

Re: Ewe of the Falklands

Very unexpected and innovative =X. It's kinda ironic how if you generalize things, there's really only two endings :
becoming the King of Peru or dying.
by Esphirisa
Tue Jan 25, 2011 7:24 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: 2nd Teen Story - X.mas (Taken down.)
Replies: 45
Views: 31125

Re: [GxB] 2nd Teen Story - X.mas

I love it!!! Especially because you used your own music and art. I can tell that a lot of work was put into it, and even though most CGs don't have color (yet?), the lineart was pretty. I love your art style... long limbs FTW! I loved the characters' hair especially, and your art was super cute... I...
by Esphirisa
Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:25 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Idol Crush v1.1
Replies: 69
Views: 145095

Re: Idol Crush v1.1

There were a few spelling mistakes like "rukus". The mom's sprite doesn't match the others, but that can't be helped if you're using freeware. Hmm... I feel like the characters are too typical. A misunderstood nice guy, a playboy, and the student council president with awesome grades and l...
by Esphirisa
Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:11 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Eyes of a Dead Fish
Replies: 16
Views: 7363

Re: Eyes of a Dead Fish

I liked this piece a lot. Maybe because I feel like I can relate to the character. I think that the images were fine. In fact, I like how the past and present were presented. I think the colors and lack of it helped distinguish the contradicting(okay, maybe that's the wrong word to use...) thoughts ...