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by icebluehost
Thu Mar 05, 2015 10:14 am
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Will write, proofread and edit for food - I mean free
Replies: 3
Views: 631

Re: Will write, proofread and edit for food-I mean free [clo

I've accepted two projects as writer so unfortunately I will be unable to take any other requests at the moment. But I'm still free to proofread or edit stories. Basically just checking the structure and grammar of your sentences, and making sure that your story flows smoothly or that it doesn't hav...
by icebluehost
Wed Mar 04, 2015 9:30 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Will write, proofread and edit for food - I mean free
Replies: 3
Views: 631

Re: Will write, proofread and edit for food - I mean free

Hi, I want to create a visiual novel (my first) and it would be really great to have some help with writing! My native language isn't english, so proofreading would also be appreciated! (Even though I've already got one for proof reading now, proof reading twice doesn't sound like a bad idea) If yo...
by icebluehost
Wed Mar 04, 2015 6:51 am
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Will write, proofread and edit for food - I mean free
Replies: 3
Views: 631

Will write, proofread and edit for food - I mean free

Hello all. My username is icebluehost, but I'm otherwise known as densagara or Den for short. I've been lurking about in the forums for years (2010 to be exact), and had tried working as a writer for a couple of projects that unfortunately never took off. And now I'm working up the courage to try jo...
by icebluehost
Thu Dec 25, 2014 10:29 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Freak-Quency (GXB, stat raising, sci-fi, comedy, free)
Replies: 187
Views: 120980

Re: Freak-Quency (GXB, stat raising, sci-fi, comedy, free)

Then the Pesona is an obvious copy/replica of Pockemon! You can always find something similar and you don't know who came up first with the idea. I don't think it's smart to call somebody's project a "copy/replica" because then everyone is copying everyone! First off, I apologize if my comment soun...
by icebluehost
Tue Dec 23, 2014 8:59 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Freak-Quency (GXB, stat raising, sci-fi, comedy, free)
Replies: 187
Views: 120980

Re: Freak-Quency (GXB, stat raising, sci-fi, comedy, free)

Thanks for playing my game sorry for the bug 1 and 2. Ah yes, my system simply counts until you have maxed her events meaning after that it is not mandatory to fill her friendship bar. same goes for Crystal. This is my bad though, I said in the notes u have to make their bars full to get the good e...
by icebluehost
Tue Dec 23, 2014 10:29 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Freak-Quency (GXB, stat raising, sci-fi, comedy, free)
Replies: 187
Views: 120980

Re: Freak-Quency (GXB, stat raising, sci-fi, comedy, free)

More bugs I'm afraid. 1) I can't speak/hang out with Nana in the afternoon, even though your stats should be enough to be able to speak to her, unless that's intended. If so, you could add something there to let us know that she can't speak to you in the afternoon. Her current line during the aftern...
by icebluehost
Tue Dec 23, 2014 6:01 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Freak-Quency (GXB, stat raising, sci-fi, comedy, free)
Replies: 187
Views: 120980

Re: Freak-Quency (GXB, stat raising, sci-fi, comedy, free)

Just found a bug. The Fujiyama-Main map has an icon at the bottom which sends you to the main page all of a sudden. I'm guessing that shouldn't happen. So far, I'm having fun playing your game. To be honest I'm not too keen on the theme cause it's an obvious copy/replica of the Persona series but it...
by icebluehost
Wed Feb 20, 2013 12:20 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: What kind of Fiction should You write? 5.0! [Quiz game ]
Replies: 215
Views: 24993

Re: What kind of Fiction should You write? 4.0! [Quiz game ]

Someday I'll work hard enough to become a JR Tolkien or a JK Rowling XD A girl can dream. You sure can! -- By the way, both JRR Tolkien and JK Rowling are Milieu writers ; they're wizards of World creation, even more so than Character creation. They make worlds you want to go to -- and stay there ....
by icebluehost
Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:01 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: What kind of Fiction should You write? 5.0! [Quiz game ]
Replies: 215
Views: 24993

Re: What kind of Fiction should You write? 4.0! [Quiz game ]

Truthfully, you're scattered across the board. This seems to me like you're still deciding how you want to write, and what you really want to write about. You're still in the early stages of being a writer and haven't made any strong decisions on writing style, or even content -- yet. Can't argue w...
by icebluehost
Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:23 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: What kind of Fiction should You write? 5.0! [Quiz game ]
Replies: 215
Views: 24993

Re: What kind of Fiction should You write? 4.0! [Quiz game ]

Hey I tried out your quiz because I was really curious about my own style/genre of writing. I think it got me mostly, but I'd like to hear your opinion too, if you don't mind. Your insight on the scores is very informative and detailed XD Genre: Children's Book Gothic 2 Romance 1 Historical 2 Scienc...
by icebluehost
Sat Jan 26, 2013 3:19 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Doppelganger : Dawn of the Inverted Soul [Guide up]
Replies: 561
Views: 177089

Re: Doppelganger : Dawn of the Inverted Soul [Guide up]

I finally finished the game! And as always you did not disappoint. I think this is the best game you've made so far. I've been waiting for you to finish one of your games and I'm glad that it was worth the wait! My only complaint is the grammar (and sometimes the background image comes out wrong) bu...
by icebluehost
Fri Sep 28, 2012 2:46 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Summer Found Me [GxB][Slice of life]
Replies: 161
Views: 79756

Re: Summer Found Me [GxB][Slice of life]

I've always had a thing for bad boys so yes, Devlin is my favorite. Seth comes at a very close second because he really would be the kind of friend I'd have. He actually reminds me of my own bestie and how we'd interact with each other XD (no, it will never blossom into a romance because one, she's ...
by icebluehost
Thu Sep 20, 2012 10:57 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Line of Heroes [GxB][Arabian Night Fantasy]
Replies: 41
Views: 31940

Re: Line of Heroes [GxB][Arabian Night Fantasy]

It's my first Ren'Py game. I've been a comic artist/animator/writer for over a decade...this was just another medium of visual storytelling. (And I have a Master's degree in Game Design...but that doesn't really count for much.) you...You...YOU! *is green with envy* Do you know that you have the li...
by icebluehost
Thu Sep 06, 2012 7:53 am
Forum: Other Story-based Games
Topic: Square Enix's prank: a Final Fantasy Otome game
Replies: 7
Views: 2224

Re: Square Enix's prank: a Final Fantasy Otome game

You know what really amazes me about this? Square Enix actually made some of the stuff. I mean, they made scenes and the art and I heard that they had some of the voice actors say some lines/script just for the sake of the prank.
by icebluehost
Mon Jul 23, 2012 4:19 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Naming characters, and creating heroines?
Replies: 18
Views: 2013

Re: Naming characters, and creating heroines?

Well that I can understand XD And as I've already mentioned before, in this case the decision rests entirely on you.