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by Jonarific
Mon Mar 21, 2011 5:01 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
Replies: 8
Views: 1451

Re: [WIP] - The Phenomenon

Here's my work :D Kinda surprised you put your sketches of the characters in the thread, but hey, whatever. Sent you a PM about it. As an update, hoping to have a demo done within a month or so. The art is coming along a little slowly, but it's getting done. P.S. To anyone curious about the random ...
by Jonarific
Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:18 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Artificer Chapter 2a/2b
Replies: 16
Views: 4092

Re: The Artificer Prologue

You might want to give a little detail to your story, a hook of sorts... I'm not saying this to be mean, but if you just post "here's my visual novel and the genre, if you want to, take a look." No one really knows what's going on, just a little synopsis of your story can do wonders for ge...
by Jonarific
Sun Mar 06, 2011 3:19 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
Replies: 8
Views: 1451

Re: [WIP] - The Phenomenon

Yay, a not-dating-sim project! I like what you've written so far, but I have my doubts about the character profiles/their pictures. What bothers me is that swords weren't even mentioned, it's set in a modern day setting and yet the main character carries a sword. How does he get away with that in t...
by Jonarific
Thu Mar 03, 2011 7:23 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
Replies: 8
Views: 1451

Re: [WIP] - The Phenomenon

I did a major revision of the post, hoping to get a few more opinions from it. My non-edited post was poorly written, I'm not surprised I didn't get any feedback, haha. Don't be shy, post your opinions!
by Jonarific
Tue Mar 01, 2011 10:11 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Thanatos Contract - An Episodic Visual Novel
Replies: 4
Views: 2078

Re: Thanatos Contract - An Episodic Visual Novel

It looked like a normal visual novel game until I went to the website and saw the map. I'm guessing it''ll have elements of a flash-rpg later on? he story sounds fascinating, I really, really, really want to know what the "dark twist is" or even what happens at all when they try to meet up...
by Jonarific
Sat Feb 19, 2011 5:01 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
Replies: 8
Views: 1451

[WIP] - The Phenomenon

(I edited the post, this one should be a little clearer) Greetings forum dwellers, I would like to present my project: The Phenomenon I finally decided to form a team to create a visual novel version of a story I started writing about a year ago. Back then I had just finished reading my first VNs, T...
by Jonarific
Tue Nov 02, 2010 8:20 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: [WIP] NOSTALGIA -fragment of memory
Replies: 24
Views: 4112

Re: [WIP] NOSTALGIA -fragment of memory

The average American adult reads prose text at 250 to 300 words per minute. While proofreading materials, people are able to read at 200 wpm on paper, and 180 wpm on a monitor. <- so speaks wikipedia, with a verified citation. Audiobooks are recommended to be 150–160 words per minute, which is the r...
by Jonarific
Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:52 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Calling All Newbies?
Replies: 31
Views: 4158

Re: Calling All Newbies?

I'm a bit curious... and a newbie. I have a few random questions I would like to ask, perhaps they'll help generate some hype around your plot? This is mostly for me to see about other writers ways of starting their plot, etc. As well as a bit of criticism Questions: Which direction are you planning...