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- Mon Mar 21, 2011 5:01 pm
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1451
Re: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
Here's my work :D Kinda surprised you put your sketches of the characters in the thread, but hey, whatever. Sent you a PM about it. As an update, hoping to have a demo done within a month or so. The art is coming along a little slowly, but it's getting done. P.S. To anyone curious about the random ...
- Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:18 pm
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: The Artificer Chapter 2a/2b
- Replies: 16
- Views: 4092
Re: The Artificer Prologue
You might want to give a little detail to your story, a hook of sorts... I'm not saying this to be mean, but if you just post "here's my visual novel and the genre, if you want to, take a look." No one really knows what's going on, just a little synopsis of your story can do wonders for ge...
- Sun Mar 06, 2011 3:19 pm
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1451
Re: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
Yay, a not-dating-sim project! I like what you've written so far, but I have my doubts about the character profiles/their pictures. What bothers me is that swords weren't even mentioned, it's set in a modern day setting and yet the main character carries a sword. How does he get away with that in t...
- Thu Mar 03, 2011 7:23 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1451
Re: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
I did a major revision of the post, hoping to get a few more opinions from it. My non-edited post was poorly written, I'm not surprised I didn't get any feedback, haha. Don't be shy, post your opinions!
- Tue Mar 01, 2011 10:11 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Thanatos Contract - An Episodic Visual Novel
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2078
Re: Thanatos Contract - An Episodic Visual Novel
It looked like a normal visual novel game until I went to the website and saw the map. I'm guessing it''ll have elements of a flash-rpg later on? he story sounds fascinating, I really, really, really want to know what the "dark twist is" or even what happens at all when they try to meet up...
- Sat Feb 19, 2011 5:01 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: [WIP] - The Phenomenon
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1451
[WIP] - The Phenomenon
(I edited the post, this one should be a little clearer) Greetings forum dwellers, I would like to present my project: The Phenomenon I finally decided to form a team to create a visual novel version of a story I started writing about a year ago. Back then I had just finished reading my first VNs, T...
- Tue Nov 02, 2010 8:20 pm
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: [WIP] NOSTALGIA -fragment of memory
- Replies: 24
- Views: 4112
Re: [WIP] NOSTALGIA -fragment of memory
The average American adult reads prose text at 250 to 300 words per minute. While proofreading materials, people are able to read at 200 wpm on paper, and 180 wpm on a monitor. <- so speaks wikipedia, with a verified citation. Audiobooks are recommended to be 150–160 words per minute, which is the r...
- Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:52 pm
- Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
- Topic: Calling All Newbies?
- Replies: 31
- Views: 4158
Re: Calling All Newbies?
I'm a bit curious... and a newbie. I have a few random questions I would like to ask, perhaps they'll help generate some hype around your plot? This is mostly for me to see about other writers ways of starting their plot, etc. As well as a bit of criticism Questions: Which direction are you planning...
- Fri Oct 29, 2010 2:20 am
- Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
- Topic: [WIP] "Day of Tragedy" Project - Looking for members.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 981
Re: [WIP] "Day of Tragedy" Project - Looking for members.
Kills post
Project canceled, we'll do The Phenomenon for now.
Project canceled, we'll do The Phenomenon for now.
- Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:42 am
- Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
- Topic: [WIP] "Day of Tragedy" Project - Looking for members.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 981
Re: [WIP] "Day of Tragedy" Project - Looking for members.
Kills post
Project canceled, we'll do The Phenomenon for now.
Project canceled, we'll do The Phenomenon for now.