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- Wed Jan 26, 2011 10:14 pm
- Forum: Skill Development
- Topic: Critique my writing, please.
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Re: Critique my writing, please.
I think you could work on trying to show things about characters through dialogue and their actions, you know? Like, in the second section, you tell us that the desert prowlers are lustful and greedy; rather than tell us that, show us what they're doing that makes the viewpoint character read them ...