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Yup, just bumping because.

Hey all, thanks for the critique and feedback. I just wanted to post a new piece, which I made after looking at your comments. I think I improved a lot, but hair still escapes me. More feedback and critique on the new piece will be very appreciated.

Just looking for a critique and some feedback. I've been going over various artists that I like and seeing what works and what doesn't, and this is what has come out of it. Hair... is difficult.

I really have no idea at this time. I'd love to make it commercial, but it just isn't high enough quality yet. I'd like to sell the highest quality product I can if it's commercial. So for now it's free, but it's possible that when it's done I'd remake it for a commercial release. Thanks anyway, it'...

Actually, the idea of the dark hour comes from a great series of novels I once read called "The Midnighters". They're pretty nice books, so I would reccommend checking them out at least once if you are interested in that kind of thing. However, I'm trying to at least put my own creative sp...

Hey, I'm almost done with the ending of the game!

Unfortuntately, the demo will not contain that...
why can't i just write in chronological order

Also, the images in the opening post have been replaced.
I should have actual art up soon!

Like the symbols on the start screen. I'll be watching to see where this goes.

Ok, worked out fine. Thanks for the help.

I'm compiling a demo to release for my game soon, but I'd like to separate my GIGANTIC script for the game into separate script files. A good example of this would be in the tutorial file, where if you look at the game script there's a bunch of tabs at the top for each tutorial. It seems to me like ...

Well, you'll be pleased to know that work on the demo is underway, so hopefully I should have a workable amount of story available for 20-30 minutes. It's just that writing in a straight chronological line isn't really what I do. I like to write the parts of the story as they come to my head, and mo...

Ok, so what's the general consensus on demos here? I've got a small section working but I'm not sure what an acceptable length for a demo is here. Can anybody fill me in on that?

(The title's tentative, I don't really have a better name right now.) The world goes dark at the 13th hour. Right between 11:59 and 12:00 AM, time freezes. Here, shadows play. In this world there is a War, with 7 Participants, each with their own Shadow. Their Shadows represent the worst parts of th...

Name: Kazegen
Location: America, East Coast
Gender: Male

Comments: Not much for long info dumps. Got interested in making Visual Novels, and I thought Ren'py was the best choice. Since this is the place to have feedback on VNs, this is where I signed up.
Treat me warmly.