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by TakeOverWorld
Mon May 05, 2014 1:10 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: One Leaf Clover [GxB] [Slice of Life] [NaNo2014]
Replies: 25
Views: 50959

Re: One Leaf Clover [GxB] [Slice of Life] [NaNo2014]

This was sweet, and I liked the vioces, except Rimu's, for similar reasons to nctolu. Although I was kinda thrown by the plane... crash? It seemed really sudden, and then no one seemed too bothered by the fact the plane had just malfuntioned when they were on it, not even the Uncle who was flying it...
by TakeOverWorld
Fri May 02, 2014 2:40 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: The Ren'Py launcher doesn't show up any of my games
Replies: 1
Views: 312

The Ren'Py launcher doesn't show up any of my games

The only thing it has is the tutorial and the question, and pressing the refresh button doesn't do anything.
by TakeOverWorld
Mon Jun 10, 2013 9:34 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Drawning Board of a beginner
Replies: 14
Views: 1906

Re: Drawning Board of a beginner

If its not possible to get a scanner, try to take better photos, like in a better light and make sure you can't see around the edges. It makes it look weird when the page is grey and you have a bright white speech box. Also , I was kinda confused what was even going on in the first comic, the guy wr...
by TakeOverWorld
Wed May 29, 2013 7:56 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: TakeOverWorlds Request Thread
Replies: 5
Views: 805

Re: TakeOverWorlds Request Thread

Thank you merdeamour :)

For Hijiri, Thomas, with and without my shoddy colouring:

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by TakeOverWorld
Tue May 28, 2013 6:28 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: TakeOverWorlds Request Thread
Replies: 5
Views: 805

TakeOverWorlds Request Thread

Hey! Nice to meet you all. Well, if been here before, but - Anyways! Recently, I've had the urge to draw more, and feel like giving back to a community which has provided me with many entertaining games :) (Eep late nights make me sentimental) Feel free to request a character ! It'll probably be jus...
by TakeOverWorld
Wed Mar 06, 2013 5:19 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Skin [Sci-Fi] [2013]
Replies: 2
Views: 834

Re: Skin [Sci-Fi] [2013]

Well, the characters aren't really going to change appearances that much, but yeah, identity is one of the themes in it. Oh, and the font used is MS Gothic.
by TakeOverWorld
Tue Mar 05, 2013 3:27 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Lost But Not All Gone [Post-Apoc][Fantasy][Dark][NaNo'13]
Replies: 15
Views: 2843

Re: Lost But Not All Gone [Post-Apoc][Fantasy][Dark][NaNo'13

This looks really good, I hope you finish it! :)
by TakeOverWorld
Sun Mar 03, 2013 12:43 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: The past and present works of JumpJump. [Critique Welcome]
Replies: 183
Views: 18312

Re: Folder dump!

You have a pretty nice style :)
Though, on the picture that you highlighted in blue, it's still pretty hard to make out what's going on, and that's probably because most of the lines are very thick, the same thickness at that.
by TakeOverWorld
Sun Mar 03, 2013 12:17 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Skin [Sci-Fi] [2013]
Replies: 2
Views: 834

Skin [Sci-Fi] [2013]

http://i1139.photobucket.com/albums/n547/TakeOverWorld/Untitled-2copy_zps1b3678de.png In this story, you play as Leah. Leah has been taken under the wing of the enigmatic Mrs Cheung along with four others, known as Jen Jen, Tal, Harry and Ortis. So far, these are the only people who can change thei...
by TakeOverWorld
Mon Jan 21, 2013 1:49 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Recruiting most roles for sci-fi bishoujo (unpaid)
Replies: 18
Views: 2370

Re: "Sonder" Looking for Artists, Musicians, Writers (Unpaid

Oh, this seems interesting. I'm willing to be an artist, if you'll have me? Here's my deviant art : http://take-over-world.deviantart.com/ , though most of the stuff on that is quite old ^^;
by TakeOverWorld
Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:49 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Arowa-kun's Art Thread
Replies: 5
Views: 777

Re: Arowa-kun's Art Thread

I like the look of your sprites, but for me, having the entire area of Rowans abs that dark looks strange. Also, with the chef character, the forearms are a bit too long, and the gap between the crossed arms, if you cross your arms, normally there is no gap. It's a bit forced to cross your arms like...
by TakeOverWorld
Thu Jan 03, 2013 1:41 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Critique Requested Once Again.
Replies: 19
Views: 2463

Re: Critique Requested Once Again.

As well as that, the left side of the head looks flatter than the right side, and the jaw isn't even. Um, like if you imagine him without the hair, there'd be this strange empty space. I don't know how to describe it, -_- sorry, I hope you know what I mean.
by TakeOverWorld
Tue Nov 27, 2012 2:02 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Tale of Euphoria: To Save the Desolate Future(GXB)
Replies: 7
Views: 1875

Re: The Tale of Euphoria: To Save the Desolate Future(GXB)

The world of the story sounds pretty interesting :)
by TakeOverWorld
Thu Oct 25, 2012 12:52 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Trying to draw anime style, critiques please
Replies: 10
Views: 1026

Re: Trying to draw anime style, critiques please

The first thing that jumps out to me about that head shot, is that the jaw is too wide on the left side of the face, but also, the way that the breasts are , sorta cupped by the fabric? I don't really know how to explain it, but IMO it doesn't look good. Also the top isn't on quite right. But, while...
by TakeOverWorld
Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:29 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: (P)lanets 2 [Cancelled]
Replies: 261
Views: 87194

Re: (P)lanets 2 [GxB] [Sci-Fi School Life]

The new sprite looks much better, but I think the arms look a bit too long? And I think what Hijiri meant was that when people cross their arms, the hands are both close to the elbows. Like this: http://www.google.com/imgres?num=10&um=1&hl=en&sa=X&tbo=d&biw=1366&bih=681&tbm=isch&tbnid=-zqRHK91Q-KHsM...