Nice attention to details in your drawings. I like the slight movements in body posture and the expression you fill in those eyes. Makes it feel really alive.
I really like the music that plays for Day 1.The music is spectacular. Fine background look watercolor like. Love the bedroom setting of blue and white. The maid uniform looked a bit short. Main room looks almost like a picture unbelievable. Like how you have the text box showing Anton face overlap ...
What do you mean lost cause?! I think it's really cute , although it does remind me a little bit of a scrapbook. I really like how you have the blue ribbon weaving.
The sprites look great. I really like the guy with the red streaks in his hair.
CGs and a theme song. Intro of theme song catches your eye.
I love playing a game that has CGs it makes it worth going onto that path and get the good ending your looking for. Plus it's fun to play over it again to get to the CGs.
I think once in awhile when there is a game out there like that it makes it interesting to play. As long there is a skip button after making a choice.
Plus in this way I think it makes it a bit more difficult in choosing which person your trying to obtain.
MMM how about "I swear if that rock had any water in it, she would have squeezed it out by how tightly she's gripping it." or " I swear by how tightly she's gripping that rock if there were any water absorbed in it, she would have squeezed it out already." By the way where is your proof reading thre...