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by Desu_Cake
Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:25 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: I want to improve
Replies: 20
Views: 1748

Re: I want to improve

Soo, the foot problem is because I've mentally put the horizon line too high? Because the feet are parallel to the ground. (I assume you mean parallel, perpendicular would be weird :P) @100puro: Don't worry about it, it's just that I have had people suggest that to me before. Sorry if I snapped at y...
by Desu_Cake
Tue Oct 30, 2012 1:30 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: I want to improve
Replies: 20
Views: 1748

Re: I want to improve

I would suggest you learn to Walk before you run. No fear. Other then that. Your neck is too thick and long for her body/frame Try making it about 1/3 to 1/2 the thickness. sloping in from the back. you need to extend the line of her chin, it looks like her head/neck are all one blob. Oops, when I ...
by Desu_Cake
Tue Oct 30, 2012 9:01 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: I want to improve
Replies: 20
Views: 1748

Re: I want to improve

Thank you, both of you!
Looking back on it, I think all of my art has an oversized head problem :V

Is this any better, anatomy-wise?
Image
by Desu_Cake
Mon Oct 29, 2012 1:53 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: I want to improve
Replies: 20
Views: 1748

I want to improve

For quite some time, I've been practising drawing, but I feel like I'm hitting a bit of a wall where I can't get any better without someone pointing out all the numerous things I'm doing wrong. So I created this thread to get some feedback. This is Abby. She's supposed to look angry and stiff, since...
by Desu_Cake
Sat Oct 27, 2012 12:38 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: So, I followed your guys tips.
Replies: 3
Views: 571

Re: So, I followed your guys tips.

Stop making a new thread every time you draw a new picture. The old one is still on the first page. There's definitely been a good bit of improvement, anatomy-wise, but you need to work on the shading. Assuming the light is coming from above, why is there shadow on the top of his head? You probably ...
by Desu_Cake
Sat Oct 27, 2012 12:22 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: WIP/Idea threads: What turns you on/off
Replies: 113
Views: 10622

Re: WIP/Idea threads: What turns you on/off

Goodies: Good/Decent art, obviously: Manga/Realistic/3d, I don't care as long as it looks good. An interesting premise: Again obvious. Something where I can quickly see whether it'll be interesting: I don't know how to word stuff. It's not so much about the amount of information, more about being ab...
by Desu_Cake
Fri Oct 26, 2012 7:36 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Pitching Your Visual Novel - What's Your Premise?
Replies: 76
Views: 7400

Re: Pitching Your Visual Novel - What's Your Premise?

Gonna give this one more try. Mark has been put in charge of a particularly gruesome murder and disappearance case. As if that wasn't enough, he's been forcibly enlisted into the army in order to fight off an invading demon horde. Worst of all is that on top of all that, he has to deal with one of h...
by Desu_Cake
Fri Oct 26, 2012 6:51 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Witch Apprentice (Oct 31st update: Demo up on page 3)
Replies: 112
Views: 23233

Re: Witch Apprentice [Comedy/Fantasy][gxg]

Damn this looks cool!

Also
Please tell me you can romance the old crones.
FTFY
by Desu_Cake
Tue Oct 23, 2012 5:01 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Regarding realism
Replies: 11
Views: 905

Re: Regarding realism

Personally, I feel that more than realism or lack thereof, what matters to me is internal consistency. That the world the story takes place in follows it's own rules, regardless of how different they may be to the rules governing our own. A world that's almost reality, but inconsistent is harder to ...
by Desu_Cake
Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:44 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What does your dream house looks like?
Replies: 29
Views: 3493

Re: What does your dream house looks like?

I want a Georgian manor house full of Edwardian furniture. With stucco on the walls and ceilings, Rennaissance and Impressionist paintings hanging up, a grand piano and a four-poster bed.
by Desu_Cake
Wed Oct 17, 2012 8:02 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Pitching Your Visual Novel - What's Your Premise?
Replies: 76
Views: 7400

Re: Pitching Your Visual Novel - What's Your Premise?

I think your instincts are correct. I like the first one, it has my interest. I like it...it's snappy and has drama. The second one...argh. It's like the premise of about a hundred RPGs along the lines of "a dark force has taken over the land..." :lol: . Damn, you're right. How about: A girl has go...
by Desu_Cake
Wed Oct 17, 2012 5:32 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Pitching Your Visual Novel - What's Your Premise?
Replies: 76
Views: 7400

Re: Pitching Your Visual Novel - What's Your Premise?

David is in a special branch of the army, tasked with dealing with supernatural phenomena. When his girlfriend is killed by a demon, he will do anything to get revenge. But how can he kill something that isn't alive? A young girl disappears in a demon-infested household. A war between two realms be...
by Desu_Cake
Thu Oct 04, 2012 6:09 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: DreamWalker [alternate reality]
Replies: 14
Views: 3406

Re: DreamWalker [alternate reality]

I thought that might be it.
"An talamh" means "The ground", or earth as in dirt.
The word you're looking for would be "An Domhain" (pronounced dow-wan)which means "The World"
by Desu_Cake
Thu Oct 04, 2012 9:08 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: DreamWalker [alternate reality]
Replies: 14
Views: 3406

Re: DreamWalker [alternate reality]

Looks interesting! I really like the idea.
"An Talamh" seems kind of an odd name for a world though.
by Desu_Cake
Wed Oct 03, 2012 8:08 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: NaNoWriMo '12
Replies: 113
Views: 8725

Re: NaNoWriMo '12

I'll probably try it once again.
My personal goal will be 20k, since I know there's no way in hell I'll get to 50k.