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by Dakishimete
Sun May 06, 2012 2:23 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chris and Claire [BxB][BxG][Mystery]
Replies: 43
Views: 6464

Re: Chris and Claire [BxB][BxG][Mystery]

You really made me interested, since I just love mystery. You say that anyone who wants is free to help, but what kind of help do you need?
by Dakishimete
Sun May 06, 2012 8:34 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Our Crossing Paths [Drama/Romance/AU] Hiatus (3/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 4085

Re: Our Crossing Paths [GxB][Drama/Romance/AU] UPDATE (5/6)

Okay, I'm not an artist, but I think that it's better for beginners to draw anathomy until they hands hurt. Espcially General Walter, his head is too big and his ear is in wrong place. Liliana's head is moved to forward from neck and there's something odd with Kamille's hips. I'm not saying this bec...
by Dakishimete
Thu May 03, 2012 5:56 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What is your religion?
Replies: 219
Views: 15487

Re: What is your religion?

Scientist. What caused me to be an atheist
by Dakishimete
Thu May 03, 2012 5:26 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Inspiration for Works
Replies: 12
Views: 1056

Re: Inspiration for Works

I get my inspiration from three sources. 1. I draw or rather scribble when I'm bored and suddenly a wild character appears. I'm terrible at drawing but as long as I can see where something has hands and legs I can create a story for it. Then I build the world and the plot. When I get this sort of in...
by Dakishimete
Thu May 03, 2012 4:30 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Otome Game Question- How soon do you want to be on a "path"?
Replies: 6
Views: 1396

Re: Otome Game Question- How soon do you want to be on a "pa

It depends on if your game is purely otome or not. I believe it should take some time to get on a perticular path, but I'm writing a fantasy involving politics. If there's a story except all this love, it can get longer, mostly because the obtainable guys would be somehow involved in the plot and th...
by Dakishimete
Thu May 03, 2012 4:17 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Two routes or three?
Replies: 4
Views: 751

Re: Two routes or three?

They may not like it... but hey, isn't that the reason for making different routes? If they're not okay with it, there are two other paths for them. If you want to add another path, do it it's your game. Simple as that.
by Dakishimete
Thu May 03, 2012 4:13 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: De-motivation and Opinion
Replies: 22
Views: 2198

Re: De-motivation and Opinion

The point of constructive critique is for you to understand possible flaws of your work, not to hurt you. When you notice that someone is simply offending you, there's no point in reading/hearing them out. When I get critisized and I really, really cannot agree with what I was said I form a defensiv...
by Dakishimete
Thu May 03, 2012 3:55 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Looking for an editor [CLOSED]
Replies: 6
Views: 857

Looking for an editor [CLOSED]

I'm looking for an editor for my project The Cave (otome, fantasy, politics) I'd like to find a person who'd look for spelling and grammar mistakes since I'm not a native english speaker as well as search for plot holes and give me some advices when it comes to writing. I'm looking for a native engl...
by Dakishimete
Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:57 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Protagonists that you would appreciate
Replies: 47
Views: 3806

Re: Protagonists that you would appreciate

Lately all protagonists I see have a strong will and some other features, not as important. They usually are normal people, not especially gifted, but they are able to achieve their objectives because of their determination... and I hate that. I get that they are supposed to teach the reader to not ...
by Dakishimete
Sun Apr 08, 2012 8:43 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Dealing with your team
Replies: 29
Views: 2358

Re: Dealing with your team

Thanks, I think I get it now and working in team doesn't seem as difficult as it did at first sight. My point is mainly that I treat my stories very personal and care for my characters, but I always thought that's what differs an artist from a craftsmith. Since my writing is still poor I couldn't be...
by Dakishimete
Sat Apr 07, 2012 4:43 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Dealing with your team
Replies: 29
Views: 2358

Dealing with your team

I may a writer with some programming skills so I team up with an artist. I may have every skill I need except for programming and I find myself a programmer. I may also be a part of a bigger writing team. The point is - how to work in team with people you don't know? How to explain them what you exp...
by Dakishimete
Mon Apr 02, 2012 4:21 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Summer Found Me [GxB][Slice of life]
Replies: 44
Views: 11314

Re: Summer Found Me [GxB][Slice of life]

OK, so first I have to say that this demo is very good from technique point of view, but then it gets worse. Of course don't be offended, but it surely has it flaws. I understand that Devlin is love interest, but the way he talks to the protagonist is just wrong. I am fully aware how love-hate or te...
by Dakishimete
Mon Apr 02, 2012 4:00 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: about villains/antagonists/whathaveyou
Replies: 20
Views: 2512

Re: about villains/antagonists/whathaveyou

I simply don't create villains. There are people that for a reason have to fight on opposite sides, but both have some nice characters and violent/greedy/everything that is bad guys. And personally, I'm in team Lannister and I don't consider them evil. They're all perfect example of well created ant...
by Dakishimete
Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:48 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: JustAnother Concept/Story Thread
Replies: 13
Views: 1415

Re: JustAnother Concept/Story Thread

Just as jjbproductions said, it would be the best for you to know what caused this poor state of Earth. Writing in poorly developed universe often leads to creating plot holes. Also, consider the fact that post-apocalypse genre is usually used for a reason, not just because it's dramatic. It's to wa...
by Dakishimete
Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:02 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Character Names: How to decide
Replies: 18
Views: 1586

Re: Character Names: How to decide

Of course the most important thing is that the name matches the setting, as Ryouko said. I like to give my character meaningful names from time to time, but it doesn't mean every name has to have a story behind it. Calling your characters after someone is a good and easy way.