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by trepiechick
Mon May 27, 2013 12:30 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Far Beyond The Doki Doki [Dating Sim, BxG, BxB]
Replies: 42
Views: 26557

Re: Far Beyond The Doki Doki [Dating Sim, BxG, BxB]

I love that this has so much replay value! I am missing only a few more people and don't have the patience to keep trying. A walkthrough would be greatly appreciated.
by trepiechick
Thu May 23, 2013 9:10 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: My Magical Girl Romance (Worst VN/KN 2013)
Replies: 16
Views: 7718

Re: My Magical Girl Romance (Worst VN/KN 2013)

Congrats on your first project! I'm going to give you my honest opinion on this...I didn't like it. It's supposed to be bad, yes, but it felt rushed, and yet, at the same time, like you were focusing on all the little things that make a bad vn (bad art, spelling, annoying voices) instead of giving i...
by trepiechick
Wed Apr 10, 2013 10:09 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]
Replies: 187
Views: 82597

Re: A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]

I think this was the best VN I've played in quite a while! This might sound odd, but I really connected with Acacia's negative moods. You expressed her sadness and rage like someone who's had firsthand experience with similar issues. I literally cried the tears she wouldn't. Not many otome games hav...
by trepiechick
Wed Apr 10, 2013 1:43 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Very Splendid Otome Game [PPHS Jam]
Replies: 39
Views: 25398

Re: A Very Splendid Otome Game [PPHS Jam]

Thank you! Tira's concept was that he look "mature" and "elegant" since tiramisu is made out of espresso and so has a more "adult" taste. He certainly does look mature, like some kind of super prosecutor Phoenix Wright-style! I loved how you matched his color scheme to his decorations; it just open...
by trepiechick
Wed Apr 10, 2013 1:09 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Very Splendid Otome Game [PPHS Jam]
Replies: 39
Views: 25398

Re: A Very Splendid Otome Game [PPHS Jam]

I think this is great! It works very well as more novel than visual. The focus is on the main characters, so there really doesn't need to be anything else. The art is well done and I look forward to seeing more. This might just be me, but is there a reason the dapper gentleman is more polished than ...
by trepiechick
Sat Apr 06, 2013 8:17 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Lunar Chime [GxB] [Mystery] [Fantasy] [Historical] [NaNo13]
Replies: 42
Views: 33698

Re: Lunar Chime [GxB] [Mystery] [Fantasy] [Historical] [NaNo

I'm a bit of a grammar nerd, so feel free to ask me for help if you'd like. Learning about different cultures (Asian in particular) is a passion of mine, so I'm excited to experience a little bit of Korea. I can't wait to see how the story will continue. Good luck with everything you guys! You make ...
by trepiechick
Sat Apr 06, 2013 5:52 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Lunar Chime [GxB] [Mystery] [Fantasy] [Historical] [NaNo13]
Replies: 42
Views: 33698

Re: Lunar Chime [GxB] [Mystery] [Fantasy] [Historical] [NaNo

Three things I noticed the most in this grammar-wise are that your verb tenses are inconsistent, your punctuation needs work, and you like to add past participles where they aren't really needed, making some of your sentences awkward. Other than that, you have a great story unfolding.
by trepiechick
Fri Apr 05, 2013 9:06 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Lunar Chime [GxB] [Mystery] [Fantasy] [Historical] [NaNo13]
Replies: 42
Views: 33698

Re: Lunar Chime [GxB] [Mystery] [Fantasy] [Historical] [NaNo

For some reason, I'm having issues logging into 4shared, so I guess I'll just wait till the game is available from a mirror, sorry :(
by trepiechick
Wed Mar 27, 2013 5:17 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Nacira [GxB][Comedy,Romance,Mystery,History]
Replies: 92
Views: 72653

Re: Nacira [GxB][Comedy,Romance,Mystery,History]

If you need a proofreader, I'd be glad to offer my assistance as well. I'm not busy at the moment.
by trepiechick
Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:48 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: SummerCamp [GxB][Drama,SliceOfLife,Romance,Mystery]
Replies: 21
Views: 20991

Re: SummerCamp [GxB][Drama,SliceOfLife,Romance,Mystery]

I got about twenty minutes in or so before I stopped. Your writing is done very well; it's clean, clear, descriptive, and obviously your strong suit. You enjoy writing and your enjoyment comes through in your work. Bravo! This story just isn't to my liking. The teen angst is too heavy, and I'm perso...
by trepiechick
Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:08 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: SummerCamp [GxB][Drama,SliceOfLife,Romance,Mystery]
Replies: 21
Views: 20991

Re: SummerCamp [GxB][Drama,SliceOfLife,Romance,Mystery]

You might want to upload it to something that doesn't require any extra steps (e.g. signing up). Try depositfiles.
by trepiechick
Tue Dec 18, 2012 1:01 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Dandelion - Wishes Brought to You [otome][english ver]
Replies: 62
Views: 46780

Re: Dandelion - Wishes Brought to You [otome][english ver]

Benazir wrote:
Try a different browser. It lets me download it with Chrome.
The game doesn't need any browser for playing, it needs only internet connection.
Sorry, I misunderstood the question. I thought you were trying to download the demo, not play the game.
by trepiechick
Sun Dec 16, 2012 4:55 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Dandelion - Wishes Brought to You [otome][english ver]
Replies: 62
Views: 46780

Re: Dandelion - Wishes Brought to You [otome][english ver]

Benazir wrote:Anna, yesterday I mailed, they didn't answer.
Try a different browser. It lets me download it with Chrome.
by trepiechick
Wed Dec 12, 2012 3:26 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Dandelion - Wishes Brought to You [otome][english ver]
Replies: 62
Views: 46780

Re: Dandelion - Wishes Brought to You [otome][english ver]

Not sure if the developer actually posts or even knows of this site, but there are a few lines in just the demo (which leads me to believe there are more in the full version) that I'm assuming aren't translated since all that shows up are squares. Quite a number of typos and grammar errors too, and ...
by trepiechick
Tue Dec 11, 2012 12:39 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Dandelion - Wishes Brought to You [otome][english ver]
Replies: 62
Views: 46780

Re: Dandelion - Wishes Brought to You [otome][english ver]

I'm not trying to be disrespectful or anything, but is it going on sale anytime soon?