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by Khadrian
Mon Oct 22, 2012 5:33 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Five (down for revision)
Replies: 3
Views: 1517

Five (down for revision)

The demo is currently down for revision. With a couple scenes to be rewritten, and a little bit of reworking to do here and there, it will be brought back once we have some stand-in sprites and backgrounds in place. Please look forward to it.
by Khadrian
Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:37 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: My Writing Style: critiques?
Replies: 1
Views: 1424

My Writing Style: critiques?

I thought I would post a bit of the project I'm currently working on. This was written mainly to test character reactions in a certain situation, and was written before any major work on the plot so I may end up changing it when it gets rewritten. Anyway any tips or comments on the style/story would...
by Khadrian
Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:49 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: First Person / Third Person
Replies: 6
Views: 1630

Re: First Person / Third Person

Thanks for your help. I gave it some thought and decided that the only way to keep from breaking the story or the perspective in the specific scene I was having trouble with, would be to change the order of events from the original, Protagonist is knocked unconscious --> events in 3rd person --> pro...
by Khadrian
Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:07 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: First Person / Third Person
Replies: 6
Views: 1630

Re: First Person / Third Person

I suspect you are trying to pigeon-hole the same story you created for one medium into a different one. Changes always need to be made to create the best fit for different mediums. For instance, a manga story might have less dialogue and more action to take advantage of the visual medium. A novel m...
by Khadrian
Sat Jan 14, 2012 1:53 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: First Person / Third Person
Replies: 6
Views: 1630

First Person / Third Person

Alright, I'll start off with saying that this is the first time I have ever posted anything on any form of forum. That being said I have a question that, as the subject suggests, involves first and third person perspectives. So I just started re-brainstorming an idea that I have had for a story, one...