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Thanks for the encouragement guys.

Starcloud, thanks for the PM. Your constructive criticism is by far the best I've ever received. I've decided to continue it, but I think I'm going to scrap the second intro part. I feel motivated now

I actually think it's really good. My only problem is how it feels ridiculously 'deep' in the beginning, if you'll excuse the term. Though I suppose being 'depressed' gives you a good enough reason to think reflectively. What I liked in particular was how I felt what your MC felt. When he felt deep...

Here's my intro: http://www.mediafire.com/?z8z588jobvvacxq 2nd part in the works: http://www.mediafire.com/?oazcus68qiruc3f Link to my plan thread: (note - lots has changed. I removed the dramatic hollywoodness from the plot and replaced it with more tasteful ideas, still working on it though) http:...

Alright thanks for the advice :) I'll fix it and add the traits but as it's a VN about a mental institution, the characters are somewhat defined by their dissabilities. It's not stereotyping, it's just the way it is. I'll work on it though. As for the two primary ways, I've been planning it to be fi...

Thank you very much for responding! It's a relief to know that I don't necessarily need a team now :) I have a personal experience from the age 12 to 16 at an institution for mentally ill children, mine being autism but later changed to aspergers. It was a good experience, yet bad at times. When mak...

DeMentor Institution is a visual novel about "MC" who after attempting suicide finds himself leaving his hometown to start anew in a Mental Institution for high schoolers. Depending on your choices, the novel could lead to romance, friendship, mystery, and justice. I plan on this to be a long projec...