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It may be out of my place to say this, but... Half the people that replied to this thread were either posting off-topic comments, twisting each other's words, behaving in a hostile manner, fooling around and didn't bother to try to understand what the other person was trying to say. This obviously ...

@Auro-Cyanide: I agree completely with what you say. Everyone has to start out somewhere. We definitely won't tear them down, we'll do our best to give constructive feedback and advice so they can keep on improving. In a way this is feedback as well, albeit hostile. People definitely shouldn't stop ...

This looks lovely! Congratulations on completing this, Anna, you've really outdone yourself this time!
I'm sorry if I'm unnecessarily bumping your thread, I'm just so excited about your game~ I shall download this and give feedback sometime.
Once more, congratulations on completing this game!

This thread is pretty much everyone overreacting. Let's all try to express our opinions clearly instead of telling each other to stfu and gtfo in polite words. I'm tired of Japanese settings in the VN scene - just like how I'm tired of vampires and werewolves in the Young Adult section of books. I h...

:D I'd love to help out as a proofreader. I'm a bit concerned, though. You want someone to give advice about the plot, storyline and events, but you will ask this when your script is 80% done? You might need a lot of revision and have to cut out entire chunks of the script if someone finds a plothol...

The backgrounds look really good, they match up well with your GUI. The airbrushed parts like the paintings and water on the night beach one look a bit odd, since there's smooth lineless art, and then suddenly BAM airbrush. You might also want to try adding light shadows? Right now they look a bit o...

Wow, this looks really amazing, thanks so much for sharing, floricca! I'm sure someone will find some great way to put them to use, the art is just too gorgeous to be passed up. I love the amount of details you put into the clothes, the shading is just beautiful. Just a suggestion, maybe you could a...

what I can't believe this even spread to LSF what XD The Tumblr fandom just exploded with this. It's just a commercial. It's mostly for fangirls, haha. Personally, I think the animation is gorgeous, but the art style is pretty cliche. I've been seeing that art style pop up a lot recently, have to sa...

RunicV wrote:Goal: Write 150 words.
Timeframe: Now until 3rd March.

Previous Goal: COMPLETE

I'll need to polish it sometime, but this week is for art.

Goal: Draw 5 decently detailed common items in one-point perspective and 10 in two-point perspective.
Timeframe: Now until 11 March.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG

IT'S OUT IT'S OUT OMG

Okay, congratulations on your release! I'll download it and offer feedback later, really, congrats on releasing this KN!

*showers in confetti*

...Don't laugh. Everyone has to start out small at first. I'll increase the target amount of words bit by bit, so in the meantime don't laugh. *curls up into a ball and rolls away in embarrassment* My writing goal is currently 130 words :) (I'm using https://750words.com/) Susan owo This looks real...

You've probably heard this countless times, but please analyze my results? :oops: Sorry to bug you, but I'd really like to know what my strong points in writing are, and how I can improve on my weak points. It would be easier if you'd make one gigantic guide XDDD but thank you so much for creating t...

Goal: Write 150 words.
Timeframe: Now until 3rd March.

...Don't laugh. Everyone has to start out small at first. I'll increase the target amount of words bit by bit, so in the meantime don't laugh. *curls up into a ball and rolls away in embarrassment*

Oh, crap. I remember this game. I know exactly what game you are talking about, and I can even picture one of the sprites in my head. I remember it was a beta for a game that was never completed, so it was riddled with bugs. It was on DeviantArt, I remember. You'll want to dig through the otome game...

Oohkay~ I'm excited for your game. Things to point out: -Tutorial: Even for a demo, you might want to put a tutorial for people who are interested in trying out but have never played a dungeon crawler before. Most people here are into VNs, so they might not have played much dungeon crawlers. I'd say...