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by CeruleanMermaid
Tue Oct 30, 2012 4:29 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Requesting critique of girl sprites
Replies: 49
Views: 5119

Re: Requesting critique of girl sprites

Sorry for the late reply guys! I was busy moving across the country, and didn't have access to a computer for a while. .............................................................. Her pose feels awkward, and. her right arm (The whose hand we cant see) also looks like its broken or somehing I have ...
by CeruleanMermaid
Tue Oct 16, 2012 1:32 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: [For Girl] Does girl feel like to dating Kid?
Replies: 71
Views: 10249

Re: [For Girl] Does girl feel like to dating Kid?

In the commercial JVN that I'm currenly playing, the heroine is 12, while all but one of the attainable guys are 20+. Sounds creepy right? But it's not, So now it's dudes in nearing their 30's, if not already 30, going after a 17 year old girl. This is now my favorite thread. Well, mid-twenties to ...
by CeruleanMermaid
Tue Oct 16, 2012 11:53 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: [For Girl] Does girl feel like to dating Kid?
Replies: 71
Views: 10249

Re: [For Girl] Does girl feel like to dating Kid?

In the commercial JVN that I'm currenly playing, the heroine is 12, while all but one of the attainable guys are 20+. Sounds creepy right? But it's not, because the romance aspect of the game doesn't start until a time skip occurs, where the heroine is now 17. The part with her being 12 is mostly ab...
by CeruleanMermaid
Sun Oct 14, 2012 11:24 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: How do you play VNs?
Replies: 28
Views: 2806

Re: How do you play VNs?

I usually play with a walkthrough, since I want to get the best ending on the first try. But I'll sometimes replay it and pick the choices I feel like choosing. Though even when I'm using a walkthrough, I'll often abuse quick save/quick load to see how a different choice from what the walkthrough di...
by CeruleanMermaid
Sat Oct 13, 2012 4:50 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Requesting critique of girl sprites
Replies: 49
Views: 5119

Re: Requesting critique of girl sprites

I think she looks so much girlier now! gratz! :D Thank you :D definitely looking much girlier ;) Thanks :D Would you mind showing them with a Background? This will help me to see if your character style fit's or if you need to fix something. A complete mock up of the whole screen would be nice. Hmm...
by CeruleanMermaid
Wed Oct 10, 2012 10:41 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Requesting critique of girl sprites
Replies: 49
Views: 5119

Re: Requesting critique of girl sprites

I think that definitely looks a lot better, very feminine now :D And personally, I don't think her eyes make her look like a guy, since you've added quite thick lashes. It's so rare to see a female character without massive shoujo eyes, and I really like it.~ Cough I am a hypocrite cough Thank you!...
by CeruleanMermaid
Tue Oct 09, 2012 9:39 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Requesting critique of girl sprites
Replies: 49
Views: 5119

Re: Requesting critique of girl sprites

hmmmm She pass as a girl to me ^^ Face wise maybe because her cheeks is long and sharp? Since I have an impression of guys having longer face and smaller eyes. For body, perhaps make her body smaller and more curve on her waist? <: Thank you! Hmm I'll try doing that :) .................... So I end...
by CeruleanMermaid
Mon Oct 08, 2012 5:10 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Requesting critique of girl sprites
Replies: 49
Views: 5119

Re: Requesting critique of girl sprites

The sprite has a few minor problems, the folds on the outfit could be better defined, the shoulders look a bit narrow when compared to the rest of the body, the head is a bit small. The one BIG problem I see (like that needs to be fixed) is the right arm, it is entirely awkward, the inside of the e...
by CeruleanMermaid
Sun Oct 07, 2012 6:30 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Delete
Replies: 12
Views: 1704

Re: Cotton Candy [GXB] [Comedy?]

The concept seems interesting. The heroine's thoughts being made into reality seems like it could ensue some hilarious situations. I'm eager to see what you do with this :) However, the heroine's sprite worries me a little... the hair covering her eyes doesn't mean that she's going to be a faceless ...
by CeruleanMermaid
Sun Oct 07, 2012 5:21 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Requesting critique of girl sprites
Replies: 49
Views: 5119

Requesting critique of girl sprites

Hey everyone! I'm hoping to look for some critique of my girl sprites. It's well known to anyone who knows me that I dislike drawing girls. I prefer to draw males, and because of that I rarely find myself sitting down to draw a girl. As a result, my drawings of girls... leave a lot to be desired. It...
by CeruleanMermaid
Sun Oct 07, 2012 4:46 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]
Replies: 41
Views: 14738

Re: Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]

Since I was the one who made the critique, I feel obligated to throw in my two cents... SayurisketchComparison.jpg The one on the left is your second sketch, the one on the right is a high-level outline I made to see if I could find the proportions I thought looked "right." As you can see, I made t...
by CeruleanMermaid
Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:24 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]
Replies: 41
Views: 14738

Re: Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]

Hehe , you're opposite me. Boy is not my strong point. I only can draw chibis, girls, and shota. That's how I was at the beginning, before I started putting all my energy into practicing guys.. and ignored girls ^^; Alright guys, I tried to fix some of the issues on Sayuri, so let me know if it loo...
by CeruleanMermaid
Fri Sep 21, 2012 10:23 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]
Replies: 41
Views: 14738

Re: Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]

Ooh this sounds interesting and I like the character art, as well. I always love a good murder mystery and I like that the characters are older. Looking forward to seeing this progress! :D Thank you so much Camille :D Its the darkness of her dress, it blends fairly well with her hair, ehich make he...
by CeruleanMermaid
Thu Sep 20, 2012 5:11 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]
Replies: 41
Views: 14738

Re: Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]

Thanks for the kind comments guys! Just to add to what my writer has already said, no, the GxB aspect is not just for fanservice. My original idea was to create an otome game that had more plot to it than "just getting the guy." So while there will be romance, my plan is to make it develop naturally...
by CeruleanMermaid
Thu Sep 20, 2012 1:24 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]
Replies: 41
Views: 14738

Modus Operandi [GxB] [Murder Mystery]

http://imageshack.us/a/img51/2739/mologo.png Synopsis In Tokyo, three otaku were found murdered in their homes. All were killed in a similar fashion and had their collections stolen, but research reveals that the one connection linking the three victims together was that they all frequented Black C...