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by wererat42
Thu Aug 08, 2013 1:17 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Rising Angels: Reborn [sci-fi]
Replies: 79
Views: 19306

Re: Rising Angels: Reborn [GxG/GxB] [sci-fi]

Since Sol is apparently a love interest in this, could that be taken as an unintentional spoiler that
Faye and Lenna eventually end up together?
by wererat42
Sat Jul 06, 2013 12:54 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Dreamer's Requiem (GxG/BxG fantasy+modern school life)
Replies: 15
Views: 3235

Re: The Dreamer's Requiem (GxG/BxG fantasy+modern school lif

Good to see this is still alive. Story outline kind of reminds me of Dreameater Merry (not sure if that was intentional or not) and the character designs are nice. Can't say no to a lady in a suit.
by wererat42
Wed May 15, 2013 2:02 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Fatexheart (Fantasy/Action) (Yuri) Update 10/18
Replies: 46
Views: 9029

Re: Fatexheart (Fantasy/Action) (Yuri) Update 3/14

The sprites and backgrounds look pretty good. One question, though. Are all the final sprites going to be of similar design to Eloise, or is there more than one sprite artist? I've found that in games that use more than one sprite artist, the end product looks odd (example: Sengoku Hime by Gesen 18)...
by wererat42
Wed May 08, 2013 4:09 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Paradise Plus(GXG)
Replies: 60
Views: 22663

Re: Paradise Plus(GXG) Indiegogo (Demo inside)

Been playing through the demo, and I have to say I was pleasantly surprised. For the most part. The script still needs some editing work for instance they call Yui the 'class representation' instead of 'class representative'. Also, there's something very awkward about mixing random Japanese words i...
by wererat42
Wed May 08, 2013 3:45 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Paradise Plus(GXG)
Replies: 60
Views: 22663

Re: Paradise Plus(GXG) Indiegogo (Demo inside)

Been playing through the demo, and I have to say I was pleasantly surprised. For the most part. The script still needs some editing work for instance they call Yui the 'class representation' instead of 'class representative'. Also, there's something very awkward about mixing random Japanese words in...
by wererat42
Mon Mar 18, 2013 1:56 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Rising Angels: The Red Rose
Replies: 53
Views: 23911

Re: Rising Angels: The Red Rose [GxG]

I noticed that Faye still describes Kika as having blue hair during her introduction, even though her new sprite definitely has purple hair.
by wererat42
Mon Mar 04, 2013 5:37 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Dizzy Hearts [GxG] DEMO
Replies: 153
Views: 32228

Re: Dizzy Hearts [GxG][M content] DEMO

I only mentioned that because as I understand it, before the events in the plot, Servia has never stepped foot outside her own town which itself seems pretty isolated. Therefore culture shock would be normal, even for an open-minded individual.
by wererat42
Mon Mar 04, 2013 3:51 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Few characters interacting
Replies: 1
Views: 549

Few characters interacting

For an project I'm working on there's going to be three main characters, each having their own independent story arcs. These characters' paths will eventually lead together, but I was wondering how much importance dialogue has in a Kinetic Novel. A certain character will mostly have dialogue with on...
by wererat42
Mon Mar 04, 2013 3:43 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Symphonie des Rêves! [GxB & GxG][Otome]
Replies: 171
Views: 50857

Re: Symphonie des Rêves! [GxB & GxG][Otome-ish!]

Not really an otome gamer, but I'm somewhat of interested in this for the GxG route.
by wererat42
Mon Mar 04, 2013 3:37 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Dizzy Hearts [GxG] DEMO
Replies: 153
Views: 32228

Re: Dizzy Hearts [GxG][M content] DEMO

Congratulations on getting funded. I like that outfit, and as someone who isn't really interested in loli I'd kind of prefer something like that as a default (at least for the non-erotic version). I played your demo and the only real criticisms I had are the repetitiveness of the music, which I imag...
by wererat42
Sun Feb 03, 2013 4:26 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Alarune (Fantasy KN)
Replies: 5
Views: 577

Re: Alarune (Fantasy KN)

One more character: The Chronographer. His study of the events surrounding the POV characters forms the frame story, but for various reasons I can't really say much about him at the moment. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v509/wererat42/SCN_0003_zps670f7626.jpg This sounds like a really interestin...
by wererat42
Fri Feb 01, 2013 7:26 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Alarune (Fantasy KN)
Replies: 5
Views: 577

Re: Alarune (Fantasy KN)

Totes calling that the hunter is the little kid from the start :p hehe... I'll give you some credit for being close, though I'll tell you now Hunter is too old to be the hero of ten years ago. Early drafts of the back story began as a deconstruction of your average JRPG using Robert Browning's Chil...
by wererat42
Fri Feb 01, 2013 5:51 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Alarune (Fantasy KN)
Replies: 5
Views: 577

Alarune (Fantasy KN)

Alarune Story Ten years ago, a plague swept across the country of Verdale. It was not the type of plague that afflicts the body of men but the land beneath our feet. Crops withered and died, the earth became infertile, and no work of science or faith could slow its advance much less reclaim the once...
by wererat42
Wed Jan 30, 2013 5:42 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Dizzy Hearts [GxG] DEMO
Replies: 153
Views: 32228

Re: Dizzy Hearts [GxG][M content]

Just wondering, are there other routes planned, or only the loli?
by wererat42
Mon Jan 28, 2013 2:45 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Farming Life : A Goddess Calls [New Demo for Linex]
Replies: 150
Views: 17700

Re: Farming Life : A Goddess Calls [otome] [adventure] [GxB/

I played the beta, and well, to be honest the dialogue needs quite a lot of work. Like for example when you walk up to the Mayor he says (I assume to himself) that he's feeling sad. It might be better to convey this through some observations in the narrative - it is always better to show instead of ...