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I read about half of the first chapter but after that got...bored. Besides the usual errors (grammar, spelling, punctuation.etc), here's what I picked up. 1) Inconsistency in tenses. I noticed that you switched between present and past tense in particular.. For example, "was" became "is". It sort of...

Ons -Music. Ambience is important. -Plot/Storyline. I'm extremely particular about this. There's too much predictable ones out there. Like, boy meets girl, they become friends and fall in love and...you get the point. More twists, more surprises, the better. So long as it's not too complicated unti...

If you asked me this before, I would have just answered, "I just want to write." But then, I realized after some time that, "No. It's not only because of that. I want to do something different. I want to do something big. I want others to know." The question? What message do you want to bring with t...

@cuttlefish: Yeap - most definitely. I'm loving the story's progress along with the character development. I especially like the protagonist I came up with who's far, far away from a Mary-Sue including the rest of the cast and the setting. The story's gonna be my main focus now - fanfics and VN fict...

Managed almost 19k words in a week but didn't have time to continue after that... ._. Was so close!

Late review is late *hides* I've never played the first version, but I really enjoyed this. The story was short, but sweet and beautifully written that it touches the heart. The voice-overs were nicely done, and it seemed as if that I was there in the story as well. Graphics-wise, they were gorgeou...

I use..no programme, unless you count good ol' Microsoft Word Document/Notepad and my brain... Generally, what I do is this. 1) Write out possible choices according to plot scenes/events/dialogues 2) Write out the scenarios and keep them to a maximum of three (the best ones, and according to the cho...

Mine was: Combat with Arquebus Consensual Sex Involving Tentacles Onmyouji Protagonist Pirate Protagonist Sister/Sister Incest Underworld >.> I have no problem with the arquebus, onmyouji & pirate protagonist and underworld, but there's no way I'm doing incest and consensual sex. I just feel uncomfo...

My finals are coming up in two weeks and I think I might have a nervous breakdown. This is one of my most important years of high school and my grades aren't so hot right now. I'm extremely worried that I might not get into the college that I've been working my whole life for...or the college my mo...

@specialtantei: No harm done xD I'm thoroughly amused, really xD Hmm... Your comment just gave me another idea...

Man, the ideas are rolling. Good time to work!~

@eonhite: sure~

@specialtantei: Thanks ^-^ That sounds awesome... and the stray dog one too~ Ooh, we could tweak your plot a bit, maybe? And turn it into this - The MC returns from visiting her grandparents when...she finds one of her male classmates/usually annoying neighbour brooding at her door-step - much to he...

I have a short story in mind :). I'd like to practice my writing a bit although I don't promise anything perfect, so you'd have to find a proofreader to correct my mistakes. Here's the story :D Evening Love Thief: The Main Character returns home from a journey, only to find out her house is being r...

Brusheezy is a brilliant site for Photoshop brushes, patterns and textures.etc. Before my PC got reformatted (and....Photoshop passed away along with it *emos* too much of a hassle to get everything...again ) I often used their brushes. They have anything and everything - even for the older version...

First time attempting digital art using MyPaint... So I attempted to do this: Original - http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/8654/66212473359302714217099.jpg Digitally - Version 1: http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/8281/sadsamv.jpg Version 2: http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/3111/30154194.jpg I thin...

Ack, I just realized I never did post an introductory post *facepalm* So, like... http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7928/cutevhs.jpg Name's Destiny, feel free to call me Des :) I'm a co-writer of the Universal Hope script, and this is my first time working on a VN though I have writing experience i...