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by inhalance
Mon Mar 11, 2013 9:58 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Diem Perdidi [GxB][Romance][Supernatural][Comedy][Mystery]
Replies: 9
Views: 2164

Re: Diem Perdidi [GxB][Romance][Supernatural][Comedy][Myster

The art looks very nice. :) The plot concept is interesting as well, and I was kind of glad you mentioned that it would be an otome game ^^; I can see your VN having a lot of potential! Looking forward to your next updates!
by inhalance
Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:24 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: ~Nakajo! [BxG][Drama][Slice of Life]
Replies: 70
Views: 15744

Re: ~Nakajo! [Romance][Drama][HighSchool]

I love the art concepts! The amount of characters is also a big plus for me as well. I just hope their names and faces won't get confusing later on in the game ^^; I have to admit I've also seen the same general plot outline multiple times already, but I'm curious to see what will make your VN disti...
by inhalance
Wed Feb 20, 2013 11:13 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Regarding School Life Theme
Replies: 30
Views: 3592

Re: Regarding School Life Theme

1) I'm not sure if it's exactly "overused", but it is a common theme, that's for sure. ^^ 2) In my own words, a "school life" theme is generally a theme set within school walls, and the majority of the plot/story is centered around events, characters, and places dealing with the school. For example,...
by inhalance
Fri Feb 15, 2013 9:05 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Critique my writing?
Replies: 4
Views: 753

Re: Critique my writing?

Hm. Right off from the first sentence is where the problems start, I'm afraid: Echoes vibrating against the narrow tunnel, the echoes of Abbie’s scream, the scream of pain and fear, loud and growing smaller. The first sentence is already too drawn out. I suggest either splitting this sentence into o...
by inhalance
Fri Feb 15, 2013 6:57 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: VEE'S 10 DAYS CHALLENGE! [DAY 5 & 6 is up]
Replies: 55
Views: 8935

Re: VEE'S PERSONAL 10 DAYS CHALLENGE! [ sketch request open

May I request Day 7? :) http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/467181 This isn't VN related either, it's from the manga Kimi ni Todoke. Can't wait to see what you come up with!
by inhalance
Fri Feb 15, 2013 6:52 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery] COMPLETED
Replies: 111
Views: 25618

Re: NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery]

The chibis are too cute! I'm looking more and more forward to the release :) Good luck! I'm sure the finished product won't disappoint ^^
by inhalance
Fri Feb 15, 2013 6:48 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Divine [GxB, GxG, BxG, BxB] [Fantasy, Intrigue, Romance]
Replies: 11
Views: 2716

Re: Divine [GxB, GxG, BxG, BxB] [Fantasy, Intrigue, Romance]

Wow, this is definitely something new! What caught my eye at first was all of your different romance tags, haha. Although your description lost me at some parts since everything seems so complex, overall it sounds really interesting. ^^ What will be the general length of each route? Also, is this ga...
by inhalance
Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:28 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Beginning; how do you cope with it?
Replies: 12
Views: 1374

Re: Beginning; how do you cope with it?

I would definitely start with a cut scene or a flashback. Both of them are able to capture the player's interest long enough for them to consider playing through the rest of the game. ^^
by inhalance
Fri Jan 25, 2013 12:48 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Game Makers! I'm curious? What grinds your gears???
Replies: 98
Views: 7475

Re: Game Makers! I'm curious? What grinds your gears???

As a creator, it's mostly my random feelings of motivation and inspiration. On some days, or even weeks, I don't feel like touching my work at all, and I would much rather spend my time sleeping or watching movies. Other times, motivation just hits me in the gut like a baseball bat - I suddenly have...
by inhalance
Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:28 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Doll * house (VN) (Fantasy/Thriller/Romance)(Hiatus)
Replies: 8
Views: 3333

Re: Doll * House (KN) (Fantasy/Psychological/Romance)

This sounds intriguing! I think this definitely has potential. ^^ However, may I suggest proofreading or having someone proofread your first post? I caught a few grammar/spelling errors in your description of the game, which might lead to confusion or misunderstanding of the message you're trying to...
by inhalance
Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:15 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Legend Of Mytheril [GxB] [School Life] [Magic] [Mystery]
Replies: 185
Views: 55857

Re: The Legend Of Mytheril [GxB] [School Life] [Magic] [Myst

The logo looks amazing! It definitely captures the fantasy and magic characteristics of the game, heh ^^ It looks very professional as well (much better than a noob like me can do OTL). I hope you guys do well on your exams too! :)
by inhalance
Sun Jan 20, 2013 10:51 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Closed.
Replies: 28
Views: 3596

Re: Of Dragon Scales & Trials [Fantasy/KN] - adding concept

She looks pretty cute! Now I want to see the concept art for the rest of the characters, heh ^^;
by inhalance
Sat Jan 19, 2013 3:01 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Crimson Rafflesia [Psych|Thriller|GxB/BxG] Demo - 26 Sep
Replies: 395
Views: 79790

Re: Crimson Rafflesia [Thriller|Psych|Romance]Demo 0.5 - 4Ja

I just finished the demo, and now I'm craving more OTL. Sho is so sadistic that I want to know more about her, yet I find her very disturbing at the same time... which is why I want to see more of the game, haha! Also, adding on to starshylea18's question, you can choose who Sho will (or might) end ...
by inhalance
Sat Jan 19, 2013 2:39 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Doppelganger : Dawn of the Inverted Soul [Guide up]
Replies: 561
Views: 175820

Re: Doppelganger : Dawn of the Inverted Soul [Guide up]

I just finished this game, and let me just say, you've done such a great job on this that it's so generous of you to make it a noncommercial game. I am definitely blown away by the quality and effort put into this project, so kudos to you! :) Overall, the game was very enjoyable, the graphics and GU...
by inhalance
Mon Jan 14, 2013 1:31 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Mistaken Identity [Genderbend]
Replies: 7
Views: 656

Re: Mistaken Identity [Genderbend]

Hm, alright! So will this technically be a GxG game? Or a BxG game that's actually GxG because Takume is a guy? (this is a little confusing lol)

I'm looking forward to your updated post as well! :)