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by vividXP
Wed Feb 20, 2013 7:28 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The River Masquerade (thoughts? critiques?)
Replies: 8
Views: 1148

Re: The River Masquerade (thoughts? critiques?)

Dear self, editing and posting at 6 am in the morning doesn't mean you don't have work to do /o\. Dear everyone else, here is more. ------~~~~~~~~------- The girl wakes up to the sight of two familiar bulbous eyes. "If you scream, so help me, I will eat you where you sit." The scream dies abruptly i...
by vividXP
Tue Feb 19, 2013 8:16 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The River Masquerade (thoughts? critiques?)
Replies: 8
Views: 1148

Re: The River Masquerade (thoughts? critiques?)

Thank you for the comments and corrections. I cannot wait for more... As little I consider myself a writer (I don't really consider myself one at all) I'm picky about language and stories I read. I didn't find many issues, really any, but maybe I skipped over them because your narrative was really c...
by vividXP
Mon Feb 18, 2013 9:42 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The River Masquerade (thoughts? critiques?)
Replies: 8
Views: 1148

The River Masquerade (thoughts? critiques?)

Warning this is a bit weird. I wrote this, winging it as I went a long. I did some quick editing before I posted this here (because I was writing so fast, I didn't bother with things like capitalization or punctuation). Therefore I appreciate if you catch any grammar mistakes. Let me know what you t...
by vividXP
Mon Feb 18, 2013 7:01 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: RE: Prince of Nigeria [Internet Scam] (COMPLETE!)
Replies: 39
Views: 6144

Re: RE: Prince of Nigeria ["GxB"?|Romance|Internet Scam]

I'm about to go on a bit of tangent so forgive me, but the plotbunny latched onto my brain: But wouldn't it be interesting if the player role was switched from the scam-ee to the scammer? So the whole thing becomes how are you going keep people from getting suspicious and bailing before they give yo...
by vividXP
Sun Feb 17, 2013 10:39 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Line of Heroes [GxB][Arabian Night Fantasy]
Replies: 41
Views: 32875

Re: Line of Heroes [GxB][Arabian Night Fantasy]

Just finished playing. I really enjoyed this game. I got almost all the endings except Melek , but I'll probably go and fix that soon. I did go for Lucios first though. He is my favorite guy. On the non-romantic side, Rama was a hoot. I'll second a couple of posters before me that I liked the charac...
by vividXP
Sat Jan 26, 2013 7:31 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Pirate Mermaid [GxB][Fantasy] - New Demo Out!
Replies: 344
Views: 142380

Re: The Pirate Mermaid [GxB][Fantasy][Open Demo up for downl

Is there a mirror where the demo can be downloaded? The link takes me to a maintenance screen.
by vividXP
Mon Jan 21, 2013 11:09 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: POV Switching, Where and How?
Replies: 3
Views: 726

POV Switching, Where and How?

Hello, this isn't exactly my first post on Lemma Soft, but it might as well be, so I just want to say I'm glad to be here. I've been going through as many threads as I can and I just want to say that there are lots of talented people here. I'm hoping for some input/advice as someone completely new t...
by vividXP
Tue Jan 08, 2013 10:03 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Rising Angels [GxG](Now with 100% more demo)
Replies: 234
Views: 39941

Re: Rising Angels [GxG](Now with 100% more demo)

Well, all I want to say is this game is why I registered. I had downloaded the demo without reading much of the thread and I've been playing through it as much as I can (being a grad student, time is at a premium). Anyways, I love it! Love it so much that when I read the last page or so of this thre...