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by TheKiwi
Sat Aug 01, 2015 6:59 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

Thank you for the critique, choco! You're absolutely right about the subject/background view!! I'll try and make my next pictures better and more cohesive. As for the rest, I'll keep that in mind for the next time!
by TheKiwi
Sat Aug 01, 2015 2:51 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Centered Text in NVL-Mode is centered incorrectly [SOLVED]
Replies: 4
Views: 824

Centered Text in NVL-Mode is centered incorrectly [SOLVED]

Hi guys. I'm trying to use NVL mode in Ren'py, and I've more or less figured it out how I want it. But I'm having an issue in terms of centering the text correctly. Here's a picture. http://i.gyazo.com/a5911dc5da719e704cf76b207417ea10.png Besides that, here's some relevant code I have that may help?...
by TheKiwi
Fri Jul 31, 2015 10:30 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

a gifto for a friendo! miki from katawa shoujo
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by TheKiwi
Thu Jul 30, 2015 3:15 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

Hi! Here's some more pictures I've sketched lately.
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recruitment sketch
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by TheKiwi
Mon Jul 27, 2015 7:37 pm
Forum: We are offering Paid Work
Topic: Looking for samples of Hetalia voice impressions!
Replies: 1
Views: 405

Re: Looking for samples of Hetalia voice impressions!

Hi there! You might get more replies if you give more information on your project. Recruitment rules say: 1) An overview of the project, or a link to an overview. Recruitment threads that are not created for a specific project but generally for a company or organization of sorts ("headhunting thread...
by TheKiwi
Sat Jul 25, 2015 10:52 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

Drew some fanart of Katawa Shoujo!
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by TheKiwi
Sat Jul 25, 2015 5:12 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Silent storytelling principle?
Replies: 14
Views: 1756

Re: Silent storytelling principle?

I think it could work very well in a more serious type of VN. While I can't help the conversation on the Gone Home front, as I haven't played it, I have played other games that utilize this. In a visual novel sense, route branches could use this principle very well. A route where you help someone wi...
by TheKiwi
Sat Jul 25, 2015 5:01 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

Background practice, UI practice and a stupid little doodle (Edited an old sprite a bit so the colors would match! I love when VNs have slight edits in the sprites depending on the bg). WHAT IS CONSISTENT ART.
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by TheKiwi
Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:02 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Paring Down Large Ideas
Replies: 8
Views: 1111

Re: Paring Down Large Ideas

Hm... I think the best way to do that would be just zero in on the theme and story you want to tell. I might be able to explain it better with an example, so please bear with me! I want to write a story focusing on two youths trying to start a band, and I think story would probably start on when the...
by TheKiwi
Thu Jul 16, 2015 10:54 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Commission review system?
Replies: 51
Views: 4333

Re: Commission review system?

I don't think that telling people "Well, you can't be part of the discussion because you don't work for money" is particularly fair. I think I was a bit misunderstood there. I didn't mean that they aren't part of the discussion (especially seeing as I personally don't work primarily for money), jus...
by TheKiwi
Wed Jul 15, 2015 5:15 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Commission review system?
Replies: 51
Views: 4333

Re: Commission review system?

I'm having mixed feelings about this whole thing. Mainly, my issue is that all of the work is going to the person who has the commission thread. Giving them buttons, giving them badges, etc etc, and it really seems... Weird, to me. New creators won't have that same opportunity to get those buttons, ...
by TheKiwi
Tue Jul 14, 2015 1:17 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

It's been a tough week...
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concepts for abandoned sunofes attempt
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Thank you, Mr. Iwata
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And here's a character from Mica: Apoptosis!
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Mica: Apoptosis
by TheKiwi
Fri Jul 10, 2015 12:04 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Who runs VN Review sites?
Replies: 30
Views: 4083

Re: Who runs VN Review sites?

I run one, but it's a tumblr and not really a dedicated site. It's still early on but I'll be doing reviews along with a lot of other VN related things, like running events. I also take submissions so if anyone wants to submit their game or demo, any VN related things they want to share, etc. I like...
by TheKiwi
Mon Jul 06, 2015 10:59 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

Thanks Linka! I do have to work on my cleanup skills in general. But I also find just sketching a scene out fun too. And @Hazelbun, of course! I don't have any problem with that. Here's a promo image I did for a VN I'm working on. I'll be posting in the WiP page soon but I want to have more to show ...
by TheKiwi
Thu Jul 02, 2015 8:58 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

Hey everyone! Thanks to everyone who looks at my art or comments. I'll get some more of the requests done!
I ended up doodling a character I made in Fantasy Life.
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