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by TheKiwi
Thu Jun 11, 2015 12:31 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: My Cup of Coffee [Romantic Investigative Interview] (FREE!!)
Replies: 22
Views: 15568

Re: My Cup of Coffee [Romance][Slice of Life][Conversational

I just played the game again with the sounds and new music, and it all works perfectly! I think the VN really came to life with the changes. Good luck on your next game, I already saw it in the WIPs and I'm excited to play it!
by TheKiwi
Thu Jun 11, 2015 12:27 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

Thank you for all the feedback everyone!

I did one of the characters from All The Pretty Flowers, by Hazel. I know its a lot sketchier than even the ones you said was sketchy, but I was trying to practice and everything... I hope you like it!
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by TheKiwi
Fri May 29, 2015 7:45 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Feedback on my sprite? *UPDATED!*
Replies: 14
Views: 1510

Re: Feedback on my sprite, please? :3

I like the style you're going for! I tried to redline it a bit just to show how I think it could be improved. The body is really stiff and a bit unnatural, so I think turning it and relaxing the arms would help a lot. The face looks nice, because it has soft shading. I think you could soften the out...
by TheKiwi
Fri May 29, 2015 5:24 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

I made a banner!
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It should actually say "Dweeb VNs" probably... but "games" sounds nicer.
by TheKiwi
Wed May 27, 2015 8:09 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Working with Foreign Languages
Replies: 8
Views: 853

Working with Foreign Languages

Right now, I'm working on a VN that involves a foreign character. A large part of my VN is working between the language barrier, so while you can't exactly figure out what she's saying, based on her tone, body language, and a few words you recognize, you can recognize her meaning. The way I'm implem...
by TheKiwi
Wed May 27, 2015 7:15 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

Updated with some new art, and a new headline!

Requests are mostly done on an interested/feel like it basis, so please don't be offended if I don't do yours!
by TheKiwi
Fri May 22, 2015 6:36 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Hagane no Resistance
Replies: 13
Views: 2521

Re: Hagane no Resistance

Wow! I really love how you render!
by TheKiwi
Thu May 21, 2015 8:23 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5277
Views: 1261559

Re: Guestbook

Hey guys. I made a couple posts already but I might as well sign this! I'm an artist and writer, and I really like VNs in general. And variation of "Kiwi" is fine to call me. I don't really have a website or anything, but most of my art is on http://tinykeewee.tumblr.com/ . I look forward to meeting...
by TheKiwi
Tue May 19, 2015 12:07 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Writer/Translator [free/paid] {temporary closed}
Replies: 13
Views: 1757

Re: Writer/Translator looking for new projects [free/paid]

Hey, sorry to intrude.

1000 words is almost two pages, minus 8 lines, at 12pt Times New Roman single-lined paper. If it were double spaced, it reaches into page 4, with six lines.

A paragraph, on the other hand, has an average of 100 lines.

(My sources are from the lorem ipsum site here
by TheKiwi
Tue May 19, 2015 11:30 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: My Cup of Coffee [Romantic Investigative Interview] (FREE!!)
Replies: 22
Views: 15568

Re: My Cup of Coffee [Romance][Slice of Life][Steampunky]

I really enjoyed this one! I haven't gotten all the secrets or anything yet, but it was fun getting a couple endings with one or two secrets too. I plan on completing it! My only issue would be a lack of music during the actual game, and I think adding a few sound effects would really be incredible!...
by TheKiwi
Tue May 19, 2015 8:06 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Replies: 22
Views: 3248

Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

uestHi guys! I've been a long time follower of this forum so I decided to start posting. I mostly draw characters, but I've been working on backgrounds and trying to improve my graphic design so I can do UI too! Critique is always appreciated. And with that, here's some of my art. Some old, some new...