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- Sun Feb 24, 2013 2:48 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
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Re: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
OH WOW! I really like the second one!!! That's a very good way to have the head without taking up the text box space. I've never seen that done before. (Though that may just be because I don't play that many VNs.) Hrm, you're right! I'll have to give this careful thought for what I want, and erh, wh...
- Sun Feb 24, 2013 2:18 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
- Replies: 30
- Views: 2779
Re: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
Okay, slept on it and I'm really digging his bulk now. He's meant to be a little older as well (which is typically when people gain a bit of weight.) Erhm, I tried to search in the forums for ideal head size for the main character talking on the left hand side, but I'm not sure if I got the search t...
- Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:21 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
- Replies: 30
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Re: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
Thank you Kato! So, erh, the bottom point of the triangle would be at the crotch? Okay, I bulked him up. http://i.imgur.com/Cy4soZW.jpg His suit looked blocky to me, so I had to shade him in. Ehhhhhh, he's not my type anymore, but hopefully he'll appeal to someone. I'll draw his hands in once I find...
- Fri Feb 22, 2013 6:32 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
- Replies: 30
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Re: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
Thank you! Wow! That is a lot of muscle. He looks like Superman! I usually like them skinny, but maybe this guy could be bigger. Hmmm.......
Bulking him up might be a good idea since I have other skinny guys in it. HMM. I'll try a rough sketch.
Bulking him up might be a good idea since I have other skinny guys in it. HMM. I'll try a rough sketch.
- Fri Feb 22, 2013 4:23 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
- Replies: 30
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Re: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
Okay, how's this:
I took a look at some real-life photos and manga ones, and it's basically around armpit width or shoulder edge width. Is that correct? Or wider? 

- Thu Feb 21, 2013 10:46 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
- Replies: 30
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Re: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
Something from thin-arm artist : I see, he has weird hand and arm. Especially finger. Make arm have a bit more muscle, and... The finger look smaller *lurk* Thank you! Haha, yeah, the fingers were just blocked off because I was pretty sure I had to do a redraw. How much muscle? I think I didn't dra...
- Thu Feb 21, 2013 8:23 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
- Replies: 30
- Views: 2779
Re: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
Oh thank you! Yeah, that makes sense. I'll re-sketch this dude just from the hips up then. Luckily I haven't done the rest yet. 
- Thu Feb 21, 2013 4:12 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
- Replies: 30
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Solunar's Art House [Critiques Welcome!]
Hello! I decided to try my hand at making a VN and I need a few sprites for that, so I started sketching. Then I realised after I was done that maybe my character was drawn too far away. http://i.imgur.com/rNdy5PY.jpg Do I have to bring him closer to the viewer? So his expressions can be seen better...
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Hello everyone! Been lurking around this forum for a while and reading up. Finally decided to sign up because I want to try my hand at making a VN! This forum is really informative and everyone is really friendly, so I'm sure I'll have an enjoyable time here. I've played a few VNs, like Katawa Shouj...