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Looking good so far ^^ I read what you sent me in the PM and it looks like you got all the basics in order. One thing I would say, seeing as you're aiming for small scenes with a lot of content packed into them, would be to study the Choice of Romance games. One, I forget the name right this second...

You could move the namebox to the right, so it won't interfere with her hair and still stays in the same place, because it is a bit distracting as it is (not a big problem though) Vince's eyes are closed almost all the time (maybe he can at least first appear with his eyes open and close them later ...

World sure is a scary place... But this is much more fun than the first one, mostly because of different endings

So far looks good. Won't her brother mind her using f-words though? And it's a bit strange to put details like hair / eye color in a VN, because people can just see that. And I was wondering if there is a reason you don't want to use free sprites like http://tokudaya.net/sozai-otoko1.html ? Sure, so...

I liked your game, both story and art (especially colors in backgrounds). And the concept art section, right. I found some moments confusing though like wouldn't Lukas lose more blood if they actually saw his leg off? or how the humans managed to forget everything about the dragonkin in mere 20 years

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The thing with the chibis is that you like them when you see them for the first time, the second, the third... but 100+? Messages like "I had a nice day at the beach but now it's time to go home" are even worse though. We were thinking of maybe just showing stat changes and changing the date on the ...

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No, it's 4x2+2.
But probably you are right and my writing (which I used for reference) IS too brief. All the more reason to find someone better. It's not like I challenge the writer to fit all the plot into these exact 100 words.

Well, I don't count articles and prepositions. But yes, this is for short scenes (and I think we will have quite a lot of these - like dancing), of course there should be longer scenes, but then the stories overlap and have common events, so I thought that the end result would be pretty much the sam...

We have 4 guys with 2 different stories each + 2 side stories. The game will last for 6 months in game time. With roughly 1 scene a week and 100 words per scene it makes about 25.000 words total

Hi. We are now working on an otome game http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=21353&p=271914#p271914 and are looking to recruit a writer(s) especially one interested in writing romance and political intrigues in a royal court setting. We have a basic plot outline in mind but all your...

The game that we have in mind is traditional otome. With the prince coming of age and proclaimed a heir to the throne, it is expected of him to take a wife. Only 6 months left until that date, young ladies from all over the country flock to the palace in hopes of becoming the prince's bride. The gam...

I've played for Lai and got Ending 1. I'm not an expert (only checked Wikipedia) but the story didn't seem plausible to me ( the whole setting of her staying in a glass-covered hospital, the owner's offer to employ her as a nurse or a doctor if she learns something from the staff, the doctor's visit...