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by LliiraAnna
Fri Jul 11, 2014 11:20 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Magicians of Delphine[GxB][BxB][Dating Sim]ALPHA(July 8)
Replies: 268
Views: 82867

Re: Magicians of Delphine[GxB][BxB][Dating Sim]-- DEMO (July

The scene where Aleo meets Ali'sakir made me laugh sooo much. He and Sho are my favourite characters, for now (and I love their sprites). The art looks really promising. CGs and sprites are pretty even though they are unfinished XD Will post more once I finish the demo. Thank you for all your hard w...
by LliiraAnna
Wed Jan 29, 2014 2:13 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!
Replies: 117
Views: 44646

Re: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!

So, alright, now that I'm past my fangirling phase, I just might write a serious comment :D About Alice's narrative - I actually quite enjoyed it. They say first-person narrative is harder to write then the third-person one, and I think it came out pretty well. The only problem I had with the demo -...
by LliiraAnna
Mon Jan 27, 2014 3:43 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!
Replies: 117
Views: 44646

Re: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!

I want to say that I just played the demo and it was absolutely AMAZING and fantastic and... I just don't have words to describe it, really. Definitely waiting for this game to come out, good luck with working on it!
by LliiraAnna
Wed Nov 13, 2013 9:09 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: TRICORE [GxB] [Otome Game] [hiatus]
Replies: 15
Views: 4571

Re: TRICORE [GxB] [Otome Game]

The art is beautiful, and it seems that the story will be interesting too, so... I'm going to keep an eye on this thread x) Good luck with finishing the game~
by LliiraAnna
Tue Nov 05, 2013 1:04 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Nachtigal (otome/soft horror/vampires)
Replies: 77
Views: 33003

Re: Nachtigal (otome/soft horror/vampires)

So, now that I've got all the endings, I can definitely say that I love this game. The characters are all nicely written, and I liked how there are elements of horror here and there despite the game being mostly fairly fluffy. This said, I kind of like the "bad" endings (pet and feast) more than the...
by LliiraAnna
Sun Oct 06, 2013 12:58 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Rising Angels: Reborn [sci-fi]
Replies: 79
Views: 19306

Re: Rising Angels: Reborn [GxB] [sci-fi]

I don't think you should force the characters to do something they don't want to; it will just feel unnatural. So if you feel that they are better off as friends, it's ok ^^
Good luck with the game~
by LliiraAnna
Mon Sep 02, 2013 12:11 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Adventures of Prince Ivan [VN] Released!
Replies: 54
Views: 7717

Re: Adventures of Prince Ivan [VN] in progress

Wow, a Russia-themed VN! I'm so glad. My country usually does not get much attention >> Anyway, it looks interesting and I like the art, so удачи! (Good luck x) As for Ivan the Terrible, I think that he was, what? Not very right in the head? Especially after killing his own son in a fit of rage. But...
by LliiraAnna
Sat Jul 20, 2013 3:24 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]
Replies: 187
Views: 88102

Re: A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]

Thank you for letting me know, I'll have to stop over there and check it out a little more then ^^ @ LliiraAnna: If it wouldn't be to much to ask then yes please <) Feel free to send me a PM. It looks like my brain keeps passing over mistakes that I don't notice until much later or that I thought I...
by LliiraAnna
Sat Jul 20, 2013 6:05 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]
Replies: 187
Views: 88102

Re: A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]

Yeah, tvtropes is addicting. I discovered it not long ago and just can't leave it in peace x) still, some useful things can be found there, so imo it's worth reading.

Btw do you need help? With the text, I mean. I think I remember where several of the mistakes were.
by LliiraAnna
Tue Jul 16, 2013 9:59 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]
Replies: 187
Views: 88102

Re: A Troll's Fairy Tale [Otome] [GxB] [NaNoRenO 2013]

The new CGs are so cute *.* The results of the voting poll were not surprising, though (I was "original" and voted for Acacia lol). There are still a couple of mistakes out there, like "any were" in Edavine's dialogue, but it doesn't really matter because of the well-written characters and interesti...
by LliiraAnna
Tue Jul 09, 2013 5:08 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Crimson Rafflesia [Psych|Thriller|GxB/BxG] Demo - 26 Sep
Replies: 395
Views: 84227

Re: Crimson Rafflesia [Psych|Thriller|GxB/BxG] FULL DEMO 1.0

Now to the demo itself. The premise is definitely interesting, but I felt like the beginning was a bit... anti-climatic. I mean the very first scene; from what I remember, it's written from a first-person point of view, and these are not memories but the descriptions of what is happening at the mom...
by LliiraAnna
Mon Jul 08, 2013 2:48 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Crimson Rafflesia [Psych|Thriller|GxB/BxG] Demo - 26 Sep
Replies: 395
Views: 84227

Re: Crimson Rafflesia [Psych|Thriller|GxB/BxG] FULL DEMO 1.0

Opposites... It's actually quite interesting. I mean, just look at Sho and Kaison. At the first glance, they are the opposites, even in their colour schemes, but they are not so different from each other deep down. They even have the same mantra (I mean the "Smile. Don't despair..." thing). At leas...
by LliiraAnna
Mon Jul 08, 2013 5:57 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Crimson Rafflesia [Psych|Thriller|GxB/BxG] Demo - 26 Sep
Replies: 395
Views: 84227

Re: Crimson Rafflesia [Psych|Thriller|GxB/BxG] FULL DEMO 1.0

Opposites... It's actually quite interesting. I mean, just look at Sho and Kaison. At the first glance, they are the opposites, even in their colour schemes, but they are not so different from each other deep down. They even have the same mantra (I mean the "Smile. Don't despair..." thing). At least...
by LliiraAnna
Sat Jul 06, 2013 6:05 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Jacob's Island - (Fantasy)(Adventure)
Replies: 75
Views: 18143

Re: Jacob's Island - (Fantasy)(Adventure)(~Otome) Demo up!

Came back to say that this was probably the best VN (well, a demo) I've played lately. I liked everything: characters, the story, the art... Thank you for all your hard work, and good luck with finishing it))
by LliiraAnna
Mon May 27, 2013 1:08 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Truculence (GxB) (Otome, Mystical, Adventurous, Religious)
Replies: 16
Views: 5324

Re: Truculence (GxB) (Otome, Mystical, Adventurous, Religiou

Hm... The story sounds pretty complex. I like complex stories, but the writing must be very good in order to keep up the same level x) Just an observation: the summary seems to be written in too long sentences, which does not look very pretty. It also can be hard to read, since by the end of the sen...