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by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 9:58 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Propinquity (Drama)
Replies: 13
Views: 2410

Re: Propinquity (Drama)

YOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Congrats in making a WIP thread!!! You already know that I think your story and characters looks GR8T (omg Caren u qt) and wow! Congrats on having such a long script already!! As for newbie advice: AVOID FEATURE CREEP LIKE THE PLAGUE Determine at the very beginning what you want ...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 9:44 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]
Replies: 19
Views: 5341

Re: The Life Threads [KN][SunNoFes][Desert Adventure]

@Heiden- Well, one out of two isn't bad, I suppose: The story still stops at the same spot, using Safari. But I was able to continue through to the end on Firefox. Apparently there is still a minor peculiarity in the code somewhere. Anyway, the story was very enjoyable, and very professionally done...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 12:25 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]
Replies: 19
Views: 5341

Re: The Life Threads [KN][SunNoFes][Desert Adventure]

Turns out one of the sfx files didn't want to load on macs (and IE), oddly enough. I've taken it out and update the KN, so it should (*crosses fingers*) work now! :)
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 11:42 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]
Replies: 19
Views: 5341

Re: The Life Threads [KN][SunNoFes][Desert Adventure]

Uh oh, that's not good. Also I just tested it out with Internet Explorer and got a "Posting.failed [object Object]" message preventing me from advancing (this message seemingly happened at random), so for right now it looks like Chrome might be the only browser that can run this. :/ Thank you for le...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 10:41 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Meryl & August [Adventure, slight GxB] New Demo!
Replies: 34
Views: 11516

Re: Meryl & August [Adventure, slight GxB] New Demo!

Oh gosh, comments! - But first! - (Late) Monthly Update! I took a 2/3 week hiatus from working on M&A to make a short little KN ( http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=33193 ) because I was feeling a little burnt out, but I'm back now! My progress is at.... 19%! :) @ neuropsy Aaahh t...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 19, 2015 10:07 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]
Replies: 19
Views: 5341

The Life Threads [KN][Sunofes][Desert Adventure]

http://i1083.photobucket.com/albums/j387/Totenschlagen/titlef2.png A teacher and his bodyguard on a journey across the desert sands, what sort of fate awaits them? - Characters - http://i1083.photobucket.com/albums/j387/Totenschlagen/person2_1.png - Ife A veteran bodyguard, used to moving cargo acr...
by Heiden
Sun Jul 05, 2015 9:45 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Our War Everlasting [BXB][Romance][Action]
Replies: 9
Views: 5764

Re: Our War Everlasting [BXB][Romance][Action]

I thought this was a very sad, yet sweet little game. I was glad to see that Seth and Taimi were able to find happiness together, even though it seemed that the world around them treated them harshly, even after the war had ended. I also really liked the use of color, with the blacks, reds and white...
by Heiden
Sat Jun 13, 2015 10:00 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: On Getting Feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 637

Re: On Getting Feedback

You may want to check this thread on soliciting feedback: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=47&t=30157 Note, asking for what you want specifically can make it more likely that you get feedback. Saying, "play my game and tell me what you think" is so broad that it might turn people aw...
by Heiden
Sat Jun 13, 2015 7:33 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: On Getting Feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 637

Re: On Getting Feedback

If you post your (or screenshots) on Deviantart, you can also submit your game to Groups that focus on visual novels, Ren'Py games, and anything your VN is related to. Asking for feedback on the VN's comments section may help to encourage people. Also, you can try approaching visual novel/indie gam...
by Heiden
Sat Jun 13, 2015 5:39 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: On Getting Feedback
Replies: 4
Views: 637

On Getting Feedback

Hello, sorry if this has been asked before! I've been working on my second VN and have gotten out two demos and am enjoying working on the project, but I'm having problems getting any sort of feedback. I had the same problem with my first VN and am slowly realizing that I must be doing something wro...
by Heiden
Fri May 29, 2015 11:19 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Fairly Dangerous [Dark Comedy][NaNoReno2015]
Replies: 26
Views: 12452

Re: Fairly Dangerous [Dark Comedy][NaNoReno2015]

This is the world's latest response, but yaay! Thank you for the help! I was able to get all the endings!


I really really enjoyed this VN! It was both funny in parts but also really horrifying! (In a good way)

Is it alright if I drew fanart? :oops:
by Heiden
Fri May 29, 2015 11:17 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Lost Heroes [GxB][LoZ][NaNoRenO2015]
Replies: 48
Views: 30614

Re: Lost Heroes [GxB][LoZ][NaNoRenO2015]

Man oh man I had the BIGGEST grin on my face when I was playing this game. I'm not super big into Zelda, but this was so CUTE and FUNNY and it felt like I was reading a really really good fanfic. I loved the good ending where you stayed in Hyrule and were with Link and I also really liked the bad en...
by Heiden
Fri May 29, 2015 10:59 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Wounded by Words [LD32][Gx?][crisis survival] (new version!)
Replies: 19
Views: 13050

Re: Wounded by Words [LD32][Gx?][crisis survival] (trailer u

Congratulations on finishing! Wow a 25k script for a Ludum Dare? That's incredible!! I really enjoyed the more serious themes of this VN, you don't see many people trying to handle dark themes of this nature. I think my favorite character was Gabriel (haha, he was such a flirt, XD) followed by Aline...
by Heiden
Tue May 26, 2015 6:08 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Meryl & August [Adventure, slight GxB] New Demo!
Replies: 34
Views: 11516

Re: Meryl & August [Adventure, slight GxB]

Early monthly update! I have a brand new demo! It's 15k and covers the entirety of the common route! Download it here!: http://www.mediafire.com/download/6u6660lsestqf6h/MerylAugust-0.15-all.zip If you're feeling shy, you can leave me anonymous feedback here!: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1k3UaI8...