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I like the idea. Phoenix seems like a cool character; she makes the most out of her messed-up life. The guys seem interesting too. I like Ziya because it seems like he has more secrets hidden somewhere deep inside of him. The art is lovely. I'll be following this. Count me in!

-- Allison Diamond.

A little update. So, I started this first chapter, really started it. So, I found a storytelling style that might work, but I'm not sure if it worked or not. I took long and deliberate steps toward the dusty pathway to the attic. The light waned away and darkness swept across the room as I closed th...

I like this idea very much. A story about a strong princess, rebellion, and romance, is definetly worth following. Since this is set in medevial time, I'm thinking it might be written in medevial language, and might keep the culture and stuffs. Of course, since it's fanasty, there are ways to play a...

A little update of the process. Finished rewriting the prologue. I know most VNs are written in first person, but I'm thinking of going third person. I'll see how that works out. If it doesn't fit the storytelling or feel odd when making decisions, I'll go with first person. I still think it can don...

Redid the logo. Will add more stuffs and explain the world and characters vaugely soon.

imageedit_10_4160678327.gif "Hidden beneath the stars, behind the moons, above the suns, under the seas, deep in the sands, is the portal out of Land of Mist. But remember this, nothing ever free comes from magic. And there's always a price. A price so succulent yet so poisonous. Be careful about w...

Closed for now. I rather work solo for now until I have a better grasp of everything.

Thanks for the offers, even if they weren't exactly according to my requests, but it was still wonderful. (That example needs to go.)

to Writer16: Thanks for your correction, I rewrited the plot. In my previous text, I used present tense because I thought it will be "more attractive" style of writting :lol: That´s the way how it is in my language - it´s happening right now and it isn´t "just" a description of events so it´s more ...

This seems to be a very interesting game, but you should revise your post. I understand that English isn't your first language. The tenses are mixed up, and also a few awkward sentences. At one time, you used, "women" which I assumed was supposed to be woman. Other than that, I'm interested; don't ...

This seems to be a very interesting game, but you should revise your post. I understand that English isn't your first language. The tenses are mixed up, and also a few awkward sentences. At one time, you used, "women" which I assumed was supposed to be woman. Other than that, I'm interested; don't w...

Hiya, I guess I should introduce myself. Call me Tessie or Writer16, whatever you wish to address me by, is fine. I'm currently a student. However, I like writing, it's something I grew fond of in my childhood, which developed into something more. Since I didn't started off as a script writer, it's ...

The idea implied a very thrilling project. I think that this will be a very splendid project, when completed. The art is great. Can't really answer those questions. Good luck with planning and finishing your project.

I wish you good luck in your writing and the game on which you will be working on:) P.S. I noticed a couple of grammatical errors and a few awkward sentence structures, if I were to be honest. But it's rather minor. Once again, good luck :) -Violet ;D Thanks for pointing that out. I'm positive that...