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by Writer16
Sat Jun 06, 2015 10:33 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Circus of Soaring Dreams[GXB][Complete][Romance][ILUjam2015]
Replies: 26
Views: 6246

Re: Circus of Soaring Dreams [GXB][WIP][ILUjam2015]

I like the idea. Phoenix seems like a cool character; she makes the most out of her messed-up life. The guys seem interesting too. I like Ziya because it seems like he has more secrets hidden somewhere deep inside of him. The art is lovely. I'll be following this. Count me in!

-- Allison Diamond.
by Writer16
Sat Jun 06, 2015 10:25 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Land of Mist (GXB/Fantasy/Romance/Free/Otome Kind of?)
Replies: 5
Views: 4240

Re: Land of Mist (GXB/Fantasy/Romance/Free/Otome Kind of?)

A little update. So, I started this first chapter, really started it. So, I found a storytelling style that might work, but I'm not sure if it worked or not. I took long and deliberate steps toward the dusty pathway to the attic. The light waned away and darkness swept across the room as I closed th...
by Writer16
Tue Jun 02, 2015 9:15 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Queen's Crown (gxb)(Fantasy)(Romance)(Drama)
Replies: 24
Views: 5374

Re: Unnamed Medieval Fantasy Project (gxb)(Romance)(Drama)

Since I'm a huge fan of the medevial time period, and I'm interested in any twists or how accurate this remains to that time period. Once, the characters, the world, and the story, get better explained, I'll be willing to give this a try. Count me in!
by Writer16
Tue Jun 02, 2015 6:52 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Panacea [fantasy][romance][adventure]
Replies: 10
Views: 1230

Re: Panacea [fantasy][romance][adventure][updates!]

I like this idea very much. A story about a strong princess, rebellion, and romance, is definetly worth following. Since this is set in medevial time, I'm thinking it might be written in medevial language, and might keep the culture and stuffs. Of course, since it's fanasty, there are ways to play a...
by Writer16
Sat May 30, 2015 9:01 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Land of Mist (GXB/Fantasy/Romance/Free/Otome Kind of?)
Replies: 5
Views: 4240

Re: Land of Mist (GXB/Fantasy/Romance/Free/Otome Kind of?)

A little update of the process. Finished rewriting the prologue. I know most VNs are written in first person, but I'm thinking of going third person. I'll see how that works out. If it doesn't fit the storytelling or feel odd when making decisions, I'll go with first person. I still think it can don...
by Writer16
Sun May 24, 2015 7:55 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Emma: A Lady's Maid [GxB/G][Steampunk Romance] DEMO OUT NOW!
Replies: 34
Views: 10858

Re: Emma: A Lady's Maid [GxB/G][Steampunk Romance]

Ooh, this looks nice. From what I've seen, the writing looks good, and the art looks wonderful. Decisions determine outcome? Count me in!
by Writer16
Mon May 11, 2015 11:08 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Land of Mist (GXB/Fantasy/Romance/Free/Otome Kind of?)
Replies: 5
Views: 4240

Re: Land of Mist (GXB/Fantasy/Romance/Free/Otome Kind of?)

Redid the logo. Will add more stuffs and explain the world and characters vaugely soon.
by Writer16
Fri May 08, 2015 9:10 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Land of Mist (GXB/Fantasy/Romance/Free/Otome Kind of?)
Replies: 5
Views: 4240

Land of Mist (GXB/Fantasy/Romance/Free/Otome Kind of?)

imageedit_10_4160678327.gif "Hidden beneath the stars, behind the moons, above the suns, under the seas, deep in the sands, is the portal out of Land of Mist. But remember this, nothing ever free comes from magic. And there's always a price. A price so succulent yet so poisonous. Be careful about w...
by Writer16
Mon Apr 28, 2014 10:16 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Writer Offering Services for Free (Closed)
Replies: 7
Views: 2008

Re: Writer Offering Services for Free.

Closed for now. I rather work solo for now until I have a better grasp of everything.

Thanks for the offers, even if they weren't exactly according to my requests, but it was still wonderful. (That example needs to go.)
by Writer16
Thu Nov 07, 2013 5:42 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Release your past (GxB, fantasy)[Cancelled]
Replies: 16
Views: 3188

Re: Release your past (GxB, fantasy)

to Writer16: Thanks for your correction, I rewrited the plot. In my previous text, I used present tense because I thought it will be "more attractive" style of writting :lol: That´s the way how it is in my language - it´s happening right now and it isn´t "just" a description of events so it´s more ...
by Writer16
Wed Nov 06, 2013 6:17 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Release your past (GxB, fantasy)[Cancelled]
Replies: 16
Views: 3188

Re: Release your past (GxB, fantasy)

This seems to be a very interesting game, but you should revise your post. I understand that English isn't your first language. The tenses are mixed up, and also a few awkward sentences. At one time, you used, "women" which I assumed was supposed to be woman. Other than that, I'm interested; don't ...
by Writer16
Tue Nov 05, 2013 3:13 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Release your past (GxB, fantasy)[Cancelled]
Replies: 16
Views: 3188

Re: Release your past (GxB, fantasy)

This seems to be a very interesting game, but you should revise your post. I understand that English isn't your first language. The tenses are mixed up, and also a few awkward sentences. At one time, you used, "women" which I assumed was supposed to be woman. Other than that, I'm interested; don't w...
by Writer16
Tue Nov 05, 2013 2:39 pm
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5215
Views: 1216750

Re: Guestbook

Hiya, I guess I should introduce myself. Call me Tessie or Writer16, whatever you wish to address me by, is fine. I'm currently a student. However, I like writing, it's something I grew fond of in my childhood, which developed into something more. Since I didn't started off as a script writer, it's ...
by Writer16
Sun Nov 03, 2013 9:39 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Prince's Bride [otome] [GxB]
Replies: 19
Views: 5059

Re: The Prince's Bride [otome] [GxB]

The idea implied a very thrilling project. I think that this will be a very splendid project, when completed. The art is great. Can't really answer those questions. Good luck with planning and finishing your project.
by Writer16
Sat Nov 02, 2013 3:55 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Writer Offering Services for Free (Closed)
Replies: 7
Views: 2008

Re: Writer Looking For Project!

I wish you good luck in your writing and the game on which you will be working on:) P.S. I noticed a couple of grammatical errors and a few awkward sentence structures, if I were to be honest. But it's rather minor. Once again, good luck :) -Violet ;D Thanks for pointing that out. I'm positive that...