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by Sleipnir56
Sun Sep 14, 2014 12:52 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Artist for hire! For great justice! [OPEN]
Replies: 7
Views: 2332

Re: Artist for hire! For great justice! [OPEN]

So sorry...I'll try and write Megan's path for you today though, and forcably kick my but into gear. Once I'm online skype, I'll give it to you :) . Let's just work on that together. I'm not going to do the others for now because I want to work on this with you. Thank you so much for being patient :...
by Sleipnir56
Sun Aug 10, 2014 12:51 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Would like a critique on scene
Replies: 7
Views: 823

Re: Would like a critique on scene

Thank you so much for the advice. I'll work on this with future writing :) . I think you gave some good feedback, and am grateful for you reading it. And sorry for the line that didn't make much sense. I've always has a problem with word phrasing Don't worry about it c: I hope it turns out well. Go...
by Sleipnir56
Sun Aug 10, 2014 12:29 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Would like a critique on scene
Replies: 7
Views: 823

Re: Would like a critique on scene

Hi! I really think the scene is well written. However, I do have some notes & advice and such. Sorry if this wasn't what you wanted. Anyway, there were two specific lines that I felt needed reviewing, as follows. If none of the events that took place before this happened and I was here right now, I...
by Sleipnir56
Sun Aug 10, 2014 12:29 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Would like a critique on scene
Replies: 7
Views: 823

Re: Would like a critique on scene

Hi! I really think the scene is well written. However, I do have some notes & advice and such. Sorry if this wasn't what you wanted. Anyway, there were two specific lines that I felt needed reviewing, as follows. If none of the events that took place before this happened and I was here right now, I...
by Sleipnir56
Sun Aug 10, 2014 12:29 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Would like a critique on scene
Replies: 7
Views: 823

Re: Would like a critique on scene

Hi! I really think the scene is well written. However, I do have some notes & advice and such. Sorry if this wasn't what you wanted. Anyway, there were two specific lines that I felt needed reviewing, as follows. If none of the events that took place before this happened and I was here right now, I...
by Sleipnir56
Sun Aug 10, 2014 12:29 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Would like a critique on scene
Replies: 7
Views: 823

Re: Would like a critique on scene

Hi! I really think the scene is well written. However, I do have some notes & advice and such. Sorry if this wasn't what you wanted. Anyway, there were two specific lines that I felt needed reviewing, as follows. If none of the events that took place before this happened and I was here right now, I...
by Sleipnir56
Sat Aug 09, 2014 6:09 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Would like a critique on scene
Replies: 7
Views: 823

Would like a critique on scene

So this is a scene I wrote for Parallel Hearts, which is something I'm trying to redo. This is the opening scene for the game, but I'm not too sure if I'm going to use it. Still trying to figure it out. All I'd like is to know what you guys think, and help to improve. I'm grateful for any advice you...
by Sleipnir56
Sun Aug 03, 2014 2:34 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chocolate Kiss(Yuri,Romance,GXG)
Replies: 62
Views: 10449

Re: Chocolate Kiss(Yuri,Romance,GXG)Update-08/02/14

Yokura wrote:o/

Happy to work on this with you~ Still in the middle of convention time and moving boxes time but I'm amped to work on ALL THE PROJECTS
Same here, and I'm hoping you're having a lot of fun :mrgreen: . Know how much moving sucks though, so I wish you the best on that :shock:
by Sleipnir56
Sat Aug 02, 2014 11:16 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chocolate Kiss(Yuri,Romance,GXG)
Replies: 62
Views: 10449

Re: Chocolate Kiss(Yuri,Romance,GXG)'Demo Out' Please Read

Update~ 08/02/14-New Sprite Artist So I'm happy to say I've actually gotten a sprite artist for the game. This is because I've realized that these sprites, though good, are a bit to anime style. People were right in that I need something unique. So, I'm happy to announce Yokura as the sprite artist ...
by Sleipnir56
Wed Jul 30, 2014 6:38 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3072

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Updated 07/24/14-Must R

Overweight protagonist reminds me of Otometeki Koi Kakumei Love Revo though I never really play one LOL. I wonder if in the end she'll diet and become slim too, but staying overweight gives uniqueness to the game ;D Anyway, Yusuke is my favorite so far. He's just my type asdhkslaskjf but I'm kinda ...
by Sleipnir56
Wed Jul 30, 2014 6:34 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3072

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Updated 07/24/14-Must R

The story seems interesting! Haven't seen a sad story in a while so it's a good change of pace. The art looks really good by the way. I'm looking forward to seeing this game! Good luck Thank you so much for being interested :D . And it will be sad, but the first part is on more of a happy note. And...
by Sleipnir56
Mon Jul 28, 2014 4:27 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Seeking Sprite Artist for Chocolate Kiss(Closed)
Replies: 0
Views: 447

Seeking Sprite Artist for Chocolate Kiss(Closed)

So I've decided this game needs some serious updating to what I originally had going for it. The reason to this is because of my friend Yunnari, and how beautiful her CG art is coming along for the game. Thanks to some advice from people on Lemmasoft, I've realized that I need to update the sprites,...
by Sleipnir56
Fri Jul 25, 2014 1:54 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3072

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Updated 07/24/14-Must R

Update-07/24/14-Don't know if people are still with this, but I just wanted to say some things. First off, I've begun to write the story again, and am getting far :) . I am proud of myself because my state of mind has usually gotten in the way. On another note though, I'm currently looking for a CG ...
by Sleipnir56
Wed Jul 23, 2014 11:34 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: In need of CG Artist for In His Eyes (Tragedy ,Mature,Otome)
Replies: 4
Views: 1030

Re: Recruiting CG Artist for In His Eyes (Tragedy ,Mature,Ot

fleet wrote:Comment deleted as OP edited the first post. :wink:

Thanks again :)