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by Sleipnir56
Mon May 19, 2014 3:49 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3068

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Feedback Wanted

Sounds interesting. I like the long-haired boy. Will there be a sprite of the MC or are you planning on not showing her? Good luck with it. Thank you so much ^^, and that's Yusuke. And yes, I do plan to make a sprite for her if my friend still would like to help. Depends. Anyway, thank so much for ...
by Sleipnir56
Fri May 16, 2014 4:31 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3068

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Feedback Wanted

This looks like a really interesting VN. I'd play it. There's not too much games about overweight girls, so it would be a nice change. I like Minato and Sakuya, they seem cool. The story looks promising enough. And I don't mind that it has tragedy. That makes it even better in my opinion. xD Good l...
by Sleipnir56
Wed May 14, 2014 9:14 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Mira's Magical Mishap [GxG] [Fantasy]
Replies: 35
Views: 36083

Re: Mira's Magical Mishap [GxG] [Fantasy]

Np. I can understand that though. It's kind of good you did that because that makes the story more complete. I'm excited for your next BL game and will defiantly play :D . And if you make it 18 or older that will be even better :oops:
by Sleipnir56
Wed May 14, 2014 2:33 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3068

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Feedback Wanted

It sounds interesting and I hope you make it. I am not a big fan of tragedy and do not care to invest emotion in a story/character only to have them die at the end, unless of course it is a life story. ( I also understand that everybody dies at the end!). For some reason the movie "Antonia's Line" ...
by Sleipnir56
Wed May 14, 2014 2:30 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3068

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Feedback Wanted

CatyCats wrote:So is the character now overweight or has she grown into a slender lady?
I do wish to read the story when it comes out!
Good luck!

She's overweight. I really like writing characters like that, or ones that are different :) . And thanks so much. I'll work hard to get it done :)
by Sleipnir56
Wed May 14, 2014 2:29 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3068

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Feedback Wanted

fleet wrote:I like the idea of an overweight protagonist.

This would be my second one. She still needs a sprite though. Anyway, thank for being interested :mrgreen:
by Sleipnir56
Wed May 14, 2014 2:28 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3068

Re: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)Feedback Wanted

I like the story, and the graphics, but tragedy? I wanted to play it, but if someone dies at the end, it'd be really sad... I'm looking forward to hear more from you! Nina Thank you so much. The first part is kind of a bit of a simple comedy/romance, but things go bad depending on what you choose. ...
by Sleipnir56
Tue May 13, 2014 2:09 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)
Replies: 21
Views: 3068

In His Eyes (Romance,GxB,Tragedy)

Plot-"When she looks into the mirror she sees an ugly duckling, yet when he looks into the mirror his sees a swan. But when he tells her these words of her being beautiful, she cannot hear him. Instead, she frays away from the world and hides her heart deep with the shadows, letting no one know who...
by Sleipnir56
Sun May 11, 2014 2:00 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Are these sprites good?
Replies: 11
Views: 1139

Re: Are these sprites good?

Coren wrote:Looks really good to me! :)
That means a lot to me Coren since I've seen a lot of your stuff and you're very talented. Though I didn't draw them, I did help customized them, so I really appreciate what you said. Thanks so much :mrgreen:
by Sleipnir56
Sat May 10, 2014 8:12 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Are these sprites good?
Replies: 11
Views: 1139

Re: Are these sprites good?

muniiam wrote:I think they could work commercially, but I would suggest that you work a little more on the anatomy.
Do you mean their posture? I would change that, but they were customized. I sadly didn't draw them. But if it like the hair or close, that might be changeable
by Sleipnir56
Fri May 09, 2014 10:15 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Are these sprites good?
Replies: 11
Views: 1139

Re: Are these sprites good?

muniiam wrote:I like the hair, I like the face. The shading looks nice and the clothes look good. I'd say that it looks quite good actually.

Thanks :) . Don't think these would work for commercial use, but I like making games for free so it doesn't matter.
by Sleipnir56
Fri May 09, 2014 10:15 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Are these sprites good?
Replies: 11
Views: 1139

Re: Are these sprites good?

Juneberry wrote:'Beauty is in the eye of the beholder'. While I personally find them quite nice, it probably would depend on the game and such. But personally, I like the style plenty.

You're right. It would depend on the game, and what I do for them. Thanks your opinion and I'm glad you thin they're nice
by Sleipnir56
Fri May 09, 2014 2:49 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Are these sprites good?
Replies: 11
Views: 1139

Re: Are these sprites good?

Depends on what you mean by "good." There's professional "good" and "good enough that it isn't an eyesore." They anatomy is stylized, but serviceable, the coloring is neat, the lineart isn't messy. I'd say it's fine. Thank you. I don't know if they're professional, but that would matter cause they'...
by Sleipnir56
Fri May 09, 2014 2:27 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chocolate Kiss(Yuri,Romance,GXG)
Replies: 62
Views: 10439

Re: Chocolate Kiss(Yuri,Romance,GXG)Update-04/28/14-Please R

I really love the new art you posted up. It gives a really warm, kind of indie-ish, more personal feeling to this work. I'm hoping that the recent art you updated with will takeover the look of the game rather than the sprites. (Sorry, just my opinion, but the sprites are too "bland anime style" fo...
by Sleipnir56
Fri May 09, 2014 2:22 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Are these sprites good?
Replies: 11
Views: 1139

Are these sprites good?

A friend customized these for me. Do you think they're any good?

Here's Yusuke


Image



Here's Minato


Image