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Love the character designs! The urban style of the game is so cool!

Hi, If you still need a writer, I'd be happy to pitch in. :) I understand what you mean about the character types; I get kind of sick of seeing the same types of characters over and over again. Personally, when I write a story, I try to make my character as unique as possible. I'm alright with writi...

Hi there,

Did you still need help with writing?
If so, I'd be willing to help.

What kind of writing style is needed for the game?

The digital drawing looks great. The only complaint I have is that her eyelashes/eye lines are too thick. Other than that, the shading and rendering has been done nicely. =) I really like your traditional/slightly photoshopped drawings. =D The blonde hair for the girl on the left though is a little ...

Did HE make the game? Or did he hire someone to do it?

Quick questions: About how long is gameplay? And are there multiple endings?

In that case, it sounds like a really interesting game!
I'll totally check it out when you guys put it out.

I think the artwork looks kinda kid-ish, but since you said you're going for a kid-friendly novel, I think it should be fine.

I really like the writing style though (er, from what I've seen between the bunny-girl's argument with the narrator). It's really funny and entertaining. =D

The character designs look great, and the story seems interesting too. =)

If you're looking for sprite commissions, you may want to try posting an ad on the "Recruitments" forum. There are a lot of artists usually on there. =)

The game seems very interesting! 8) I am actually not much of a fan for kinetic novels (I prefer VN's with lots of decision-making), however, I know there is a large fanbase for kinetic novels, and I'm sure you'll get a lot of people interested. :) LMAO, yeah, Google Translate doesn't translate Span...

I think the story idea is interesting, and I like the different types of characters the main character can romance. n__n As for your conversation about commissioning an artist (sorry, didn't mean to eavesdrop >.<), you can do the artwork yourself, or in the "Recruitment Services", you can post the d...

I really like the characters' personalities, they are all so unique and different. =) I like how the small details sets them apart drastically (ex: one of them is a visual-kei fan, another is a comic-con fan, etc). I also think the setting is a great idea for these characters to meet. =) Good luck o...

I think the character design/artwork is really unique, I like it! =)

I like Kazuma, Senri, and Ritsuki.
Kazuma reminds me of a math teacher at my high school (I'm not in high school anymore). The lady was INCREDIBLY lazy, and the kids always complained that she needed to get fired. XD

Seems like a great game! =D

I think keeping dead ends to a minimum is a fine idea.

Lol, glad you didn't get too irritated by my long comments. I just happen to REALLY like mystery/detective games, so I tend to know a lot about the genre.

Good luck on the game! I can't wait to play it when it comes out!