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by Ferdokki
Sat Dec 07, 2013 8:48 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: All the Pretty Flowers [VN] [Friendship, Drama] [Demo] [1/6]
Replies: 122
Views: 31480

Re: All the Pretty Flowers [VN] [Friendship, Life-Themes] [1

The artwork is gorgeous!

So...um, does the game only consist of a kid standing in the desert with a man talking about Death?
by Ferdokki
Sat Dec 07, 2013 8:45 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Goetia Club [Horrorish Dramedy] [All types romance]
Replies: 22
Views: 3773

Re: Goetia Club [Horrorish Dramedy] [All types romance]

I think the concept sounds pretty cool! 8)

2 criticisms:
1. Um, no offense, but Penny's outfit kinda makes her look like a hick.
2. The title menu looks kinda messy. The font, border framing, and menu options look fine, but I think the rest of the background looks kinda lame.
No offense. >.<
by Ferdokki
Sat Dec 07, 2013 8:38 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Remembrance Trilogy: Reminiscence [Drama, Romance]
Replies: 6
Views: 1788

Re: The Remembrance Trilogy: Reminiscence [Drama, Romance]

1. I think the game's story sounds good. Like, it's a light plot with very deep emotions. I like games like that. Great job! :D 2. Yeah, the main characters interest me. When done correctly, it's really powerful to bring young and old together. I especially like how realistic the younger guy's (sorr...
by Ferdokki
Sat Dec 07, 2013 6:31 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Tokyo Crazy Paradise [GxB] [OTOME]
Replies: 29
Views: 5931

Re: Tokyo Crazy Paradise [GxB] [OTOME]

No, I don't mind more questions. n__n (I guess you can tell that I talk a lot.) No, I think dead ends are fine, especially for an investigation game. I just don't like excessive dead ends, like in "Ghost Trick". In case you haven't played that game, the game has lots of dead ends...so much to the po...
by Ferdokki
Sat Dec 07, 2013 5:40 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Tokyo Crazy Paradise [GxB] [OTOME]
Replies: 29
Views: 5931

Re: Tokyo Crazy Paradise [GxB] [OTOME]

Oh, in regards to my last section about "irrelevant endings", an example of this is in the Ren'Py game "a2". I really enjoy playing that game, and I can replay over and over, even though there are only 3 endings, because I like it so much. But the "bad" ending for the game isn't even "bad", it's jus...
by Ferdokki
Sat Dec 07, 2013 2:47 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Tokyo Crazy Paradise [GxB] [OTOME]
Replies: 29
Views: 5931

Re: Tokyo Crazy Paradise [GxB] [OTOME]

Omg, this game looks freaking awesome!!! *o* I love playing mystery/investigation games, but I am disappointed that there aren't many of them out there. u_u This would be perfect! :D Well, to truly enjoy an otome, the first thing I look at is the male character designs. It's kind of hard to want to ...
by Ferdokki
Thu Dec 05, 2013 3:51 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Artist looking for Team! (Closed)
Replies: 4
Views: 814

Re: Artist looking for Team!

Hi! I'd love to help with writing, if you still need a writer. And yeah, I'd do it for free. :mrgreen: I'm a college student too, so I understand the whole thing about being busy and stuff. :wink: I used to write thrillers and mysteries, though my mysteries usually consisted of dark issues, with the...
by Ferdokki
Thu Dec 05, 2013 3:48 pm
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: SkyRaven recruiting page for game Stabbed by Memories
Replies: 1
Views: 726

Re: SkyRaven recruiting members for game Stabbed by Memories

Hi there!

I totally offer myself to be a proofreader! :)
Would the task just be that I proof-read the script and check for grammatical errors?
by Ferdokki
Tue Nov 26, 2013 3:09 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Recruiting Programmers, Writers, and Playtesters
Replies: 8
Views: 1082

Re: Recruiting Programmers, Writers, and Playtesters

The game concept sounds so cool! 8D Though I am a chicken when it comes to playing suspenseful games, once I sit down with one, it's hard to pry away. By reading the description of your game, it sounds like the styles of Yume Nikki 3D, Why Am I Dead?, and another game I can't remember the name of in...
by Ferdokki
Tue Nov 26, 2013 2:56 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Recruiting: artists and graphic designer for both games
Replies: 62
Views: 8736

Re: Recruiting: Writers and artists for otoge-Real!/re:Girl

I would LOOOOVE to be a co-writer for "otoge-Real!"

I saw this post when you first posted it to the forum, but assumed writing spots were taken, so I didn't say much. BUT, if spots for writers/idea bouncers are available, I'll totally sign up! =D
by Ferdokki
Tue Nov 26, 2013 2:38 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: [Paid] Looking for Otome writer
Replies: 4
Views: 954

Re: [Paid] Looking for Otome writer

Hi!
Your artwork is gorgeous (which also means that those boys are gorgeous). ;)
I was wondering if you still needed writers.

If not, it's fine, and I wish you the best of luck on your game! Can't wait for it to come out. =)
by Ferdokki
Sun Nov 24, 2013 4:27 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Memories of Summer Winds [BxG] [Romance][Tragedy][Dem Feels]
Replies: 146
Views: 32396

Re: Memories of Summer Winds [BxG] [Romance][Tragedy][Dem Fe

Is the game ready to play? How's progress?
(sorry, don't mean to sound bossy or rude or anything negative; it just seems like a really great game! Can't wait to play it! ;) )
by Ferdokki
Sun Nov 24, 2013 4:20 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: c'est une marimo
Replies: 16
Views: 2544

Re: c'est une marimo

Holy shmaowzow, your artwork is so great!
by Ferdokki
Sun Nov 24, 2013 4:17 am
Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
Topic: Love Life - fantasy love Sim - WRITER !
Replies: 26
Views: 4792

Re: Love Life - fantasy love Sim - EDITOR !

Hi!

Before I put out my services, I wanted to know how...uh, "explicit" the story/text will be. I can write romance and dating and stuff, but I'm uncomfortable writing sex scenes and whatnot.

Thanks!
by Ferdokki
Sun Nov 24, 2013 4:07 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Routes or no routes
Replies: 6
Views: 984

Re: Routes or no routes

I have played multiple otome (and whatever the opposite is for males pursuing females) games, and I personally prefer non-specific routes. I like to get to know characters, and after the first few encounters with each character, I may choose to pursue one over the others. In this way, I still have f...