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by baabaa
Sun Dec 07, 2014 6:36 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Ideas Dump
Replies: 1532
Views: 163560

Re: Ideas Dump

The setting reminds me of Never Let Me Go a bit. now she's a walking target Why? Is it because of body parts? (then everyone has their own clones that suit them better, not to mention there should be laws how to handle situations like that) Or is it about her finding her place in the society? (I do...
by baabaa
Sun Dec 07, 2014 8:31 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Ideas Dump
Replies: 1532
Views: 163560

Re: Ideas Dump

I spent some time today writing up this idea and I thought dumping it here would be nice. So basically, the story is set in a time hundreds, if not thousands, years after an apocalypse situation. The population has decimated and most of the earth is now unpopulated. However, where our story sets pla...
by baabaa
Sun Dec 07, 2014 8:10 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Aloners [GxB] (a post-apocalyptic romance)
Replies: 136
Views: 50585

Re: Aloners [GxB] (a post-apocalyptic romance)

This was such a brilliant VN! I played it in its entirety all in one sitting and my eyes could literally not leave the screen. It is so well written and I think the MC and Trash were written well in a realistic manner. c:
by baabaa
Sun Dec 07, 2014 7:49 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: The last book you read or what are you reading right now?
Replies: 184
Views: 19808

Re: The last book you read or what are you reading right now

I finished up Matched by Ally Condie a while ago so I have to read the other two books of the series.

It was a good read. Not to dramatic with a focus on character development (considering it was set in a utopia future). I do expect that to change as I read the next two books.
by baabaa
Sun Dec 07, 2014 7:45 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Shout For Joy, Share Your Happiness
Replies: 747
Views: 73430

Re: Shout For Joy, Share Your Happiness

I've found motivation to do several different projects both related to VNs and not and I'm super proud that I got myself out of my little unproductive abyss of nothingness. It's not a huge deal but I'm super happy.
by baabaa
Sun Dec 07, 2014 7:42 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
Replies: 5252
Views: 391698

Re: Get that thing off your chest... Now...

Man, I want to start a project so badly but plagued with a habit of procrastination as well as worry and confusion, I don't know how far it'll get. I want to work with someone else on this project I have but I currently don't know anyone to work with. Sigh.
by baabaa
Sun Dec 07, 2014 7:27 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5205
Views: 1208372

Re: Guestbook

*pops up out of no where* Hello!! My name is Michelle and my whole username/avatar thing is a pun to do with my last name that literally no one will get unless you know me in real life. Oh well. I'm from the land down under - Australia, but - fun fact, or maybe it's not all that fun - I'm Chinese-Vi...
by baabaa
Sun Aug 10, 2014 12:47 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Would like a critique on scene
Replies: 7
Views: 815

Re: Would like a critique on scene

Thank you so much for the advice. I'll work on this with future writing :) . I think you gave some good feedback, and am grateful for you reading it. And sorry for the line that didn't make much sense. I've always has a problem with word phrasing Don't worry about it c: I hope it turns out well. Go...
by baabaa
Sat Aug 09, 2014 7:38 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Would like a critique on scene
Replies: 7
Views: 815

Re: Would like a critique on scene

Hi! I really think the scene is well written. However, I do have some notes & advice and such. Sorry if this wasn't what you wanted. Anyway, there were two specific lines that I felt needed reviewing, as follows. If none of the events that took place before this happened and I was here right now, I ...