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by Ammeh
Mon Sep 22, 2014 10:54 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Dealing With Multiple Internal Dialogues
Replies: 4
Views: 633

Re: Dealing With Multiple Internal Dialogues

Glad that sounds like it'll work for you! :D
by Ammeh
Mon Sep 22, 2014 10:01 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Dealing With Multiple Internal Dialogues
Replies: 4
Views: 633

Re: Dealing With Multiple Internal Dialogues

Have you considered just using the same style of narration for both, rather than switching modes? I think the main things contributing to the awkwardness in the sample are the tense switch, and the fact that he starts calling the girl "you" instead of "her." It's possible to portray in-the-moment in...
by Ammeh
Sun Sep 21, 2014 9:19 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Romance VNs/Dating Sims are dubious manipulation games?
Replies: 59
Views: 6537

Re: Romance VNs/Dating Sims are dubious manipulation games?

I think the problem with manipulation in VN's really comes out when you're interacting with multiple characters over the course of a game. It's pretty easy to have a personality for your character that happens to match up with what a single character likes--but if it's a game where you build relatio...
by Ammeh
Sun Sep 21, 2014 1:29 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Most Difficult Thing About Visual Novels
Replies: 30
Views: 2926

Re: Most Difficult Thing About Visual Novels

Hmm, while finding time is extremely difficult, I think trying to write unique paths for different characters has proven to be difficult. I have two characters whose voices are very strong in my head and easy to write, and two others... well, I'm trying to avoid stereotypes with this one shy girl, ...
by Ammeh
Sat Sep 20, 2014 1:00 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Zombie Princess [GxB, GxG] [Fantasy, Supernatural]
Replies: 10
Views: 3096

Re: Zombie Princess [GxB, GxG] [Fantasy, Supernatural]

Premise = YES. I adore politics-heavy fantasy with romance on the side. The idea of focusing (exclusively?) on various undead fantasy races in roles they're not normally seen in is also intriguing. Artwork = also yes. I really love the PC's sprite...it has a sort of vintage look? She looks poised an...
by Ammeh
Tue Sep 16, 2014 11:10 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: SHINRAI [Murder Mystery] - Released (August 26, 2016)
Replies: 46
Views: 14989

Re: SHINRAI - Broken Beyond Despair [Murder Mystery]

Gospel wrote: In any case, I thought I'll also show you what the in-game profiles currently look like, so here's a glimpse of another character, Nobara's father Henjin:
"Weird person"? :? (I haven't taken Japanese in like 8 years; are all the names like that? The other ones looked reasonable.)
by Ammeh
Tue Sep 09, 2014 8:45 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Hearts Under Blades [BxG, BxB][Samurai][Kickstarter][Demo]
Replies: 58
Views: 9905

Re: Hearts Under Blades [BxG, BxB][Samurai][Fantasy]

I'll start doing some looking now, but in the meantime, are there specific communities you would recommend going to? If you can get a banner ad together in the next few days, Project Wonderful might be a good option. As I understand it, they're a 3rd party site that does banner ads for a variety of...
by Ammeh
Tue Sep 09, 2014 12:16 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Hearts Under Blades [BxG, BxB][Samurai][Kickstarter][Demo]
Replies: 58
Views: 9905

Re: Hearts Under Blades [BxG, BxB][Samurai][Fantasy]

This looks super-shiny and I'm really excited about it--I love intrigue, and the idea of being able to build both romantic and political relationships has me absolutely giddy. I backed the Kickstarter, but I'm extremely surprised that there are only 37 backers after 10 days. (It looks like you'll m...
by Ammeh
Sun Sep 07, 2014 12:28 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Hearts Under Blades [BxG, BxB][Samurai][Kickstarter][Demo]
Replies: 58
Views: 9905

Re: Hearts Under Blades [BxG, BxB][Samurai][Fantasy]

This looks super-shiny and I'm really excited about it--I love intrigue, and the idea of being able to build both romantic and political relationships has me absolutely giddy. I backed the Kickstarter, but I'm extremely surprised that there are only 37 backers after 10 days. (It looks like you'll ma...
by Ammeh
Wed Aug 20, 2014 11:14 pm
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5144
Views: 1151727

Re: Guestbook

Name: Maddy Location: Wisconsin, USA I've been lurking for a while as a VN-fan, but the other day I realized that one of my husband's campaign settings would make an awesome VN and began feverish plotting. I like to think I'm pretty good at writing, and while I don't currently know Python I do work ...