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Glad that sounds like it'll work for you!

Have you considered just using the same style of narration for both, rather than switching modes? I think the main things contributing to the awkwardness in the sample are the tense switch, and the fact that he starts calling the girl "you" instead of "her." It's possible to portray in-the-moment in...

I think the problem with manipulation in VN's really comes out when you're interacting with multiple characters over the course of a game. It's pretty easy to have a personality for your character that happens to match up with what a single character likes--but if it's a game where you build relatio...

Hmm, while finding time is extremely difficult, I think trying to write unique paths for different characters has proven to be difficult. I have two characters whose voices are very strong in my head and easy to write, and two others... well, I'm trying to avoid stereotypes with this one shy girl, ...

Premise = YES. I adore politics-heavy fantasy with romance on the side. The idea of focusing (exclusively?) on various undead fantasy races in roles they're not normally seen in is also intriguing. Artwork = also yes. I really love the PC's sprite...it has a sort of vintage look? She looks poised an...

Gospel wrote: In any case, I thought I'll also show you what the in-game profiles currently look like, so here's a glimpse of another character, Nobara's father Henjin:

"Weird person"? (I haven't taken Japanese in like 8 years; are all the names like that? The other ones looked reasonable.)

I'll start doing some looking now, but in the meantime, are there specific communities you would recommend going to? If you can get a banner ad together in the next few days, Project Wonderful might be a good option. As I understand it, they're a 3rd party site that does banner ads for a variety of...

This looks super-shiny and I'm really excited about it--I love intrigue, and the idea of being able to build both romantic and political relationships has me absolutely giddy. I backed the Kickstarter, but I'm extremely surprised that there are only 37 backers after 10 days. (It looks like you'll m...

This looks super-shiny and I'm really excited about it--I love intrigue, and the idea of being able to build both romantic and political relationships has me absolutely giddy. I backed the Kickstarter, but I'm extremely surprised that there are only 37 backers after 10 days. (It looks like you'll ma...

Name: Maddy Location: Wisconsin, USA I've been lurking for a while as a VN-fan, but the other day I realized that one of my husband's campaign settings would make an awesome VN and began feverish plotting. I like to think I'm pretty good at writing, and while I don't currently know Python I do work ...