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by TheDesman
Sun Apr 19, 2015 10:51 am
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: [GxB, Supernatural, Dark] Needs CG artist
Replies: 11
Views: 2018

[GxB, Supernatural, Dark] Needs CG artist

Your Death - Your Choice [/b] A loud bang was the last thing Hailey heard. She had never seen her attacker bring out a gun, nor anticipated what would follow. Suddenly, she finds herself standing in a landscape of softly flowing darkness. In her hands she holds a badge she doesn't recognize. It's s...
by TheDesman
Fri Apr 10, 2015 6:56 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Standard Mission [KN][Action/Comedy][NaNo2015]
Replies: 5
Views: 3387

Re: A Standard Mission [KN][Action/Comedy][NaNo2015]

Yes, I agree on the fighting part. For a while we had longer and more extensive fighting, but we realized that it did not work in a visual novel. It could, but then you'd need a lot of CG's and we did not have the time for that. Yes, that one fight where you used the CG was cool! I'd imagine a CG-f...
by TheDesman
Thu Apr 09, 2015 6:10 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Standard Mission [KN][Action/Comedy][NaNo2015]
Replies: 5
Views: 3387

Re: A Standard Mission [KN][Action/Comedy][NaNo2015]

I did find the physical fighting slightly less compelling than the verbal fighting, since it's kind of hard to convey combat in a VN. Still, you all did a good job with sound effects and transitions for the fight scenes, particularly with the guns. Yes, I agree on the fighting part. For a while we ...
by TheDesman
Thu Apr 02, 2015 6:47 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A Standard Mission [KN][Action/Comedy][NaNo2015]
Replies: 5
Views: 3387

A Standard Mission [KN][Action/Comedy][NaNo2015]

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq286/me_yourself/title%20screen_zpsqogpairl.jpg Two rival Contractors, mercenary spies-for-hire, cross paths during a mission where they are hunting for the same target. Genre : Action with elements of comedy Length : around 6k words. This is our first finished v...
by TheDesman
Mon Mar 23, 2015 7:07 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]
Replies: 8
Views: 2211

Re: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]

The script is as good as done. Just some final adjustments left. Character sprites are all done. The backgrounds could use some more work, but most of them will do. What's left are the CG's, which are sort of necessary. We could release the VN without them but we would not be comfortable doing so. A...
by TheDesman
Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:11 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Strong characters, but weak plot?
Replies: 25
Views: 4484

Re: Strong characters, but weak plot?

Why is your plot "weak"? What I mean is that what happens in your story might not threaten the end of the world, but it might mean the world to your character. For example if I were to compare two different stories. In one we have a superhero that fight against an evil conglomerate that controls the...
by TheDesman
Tue Mar 17, 2015 7:17 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]
Replies: 8
Views: 2211

Re: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]

Status report; the work goes on. The first version of the script is soon finished, and I think that we're going to be end up around 6k words. This process has been rather slow because I have rewritten everything several times. During this time I managed to change the location. Thankfully I did it be...
by TheDesman
Thu Mar 12, 2015 7:41 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]
Replies: 8
Views: 2211

Re: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]

Just a short update with the menu. Hopefully we'll get more done on the characters soon.


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by TheDesman
Tue Mar 10, 2015 9:38 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What are you listening to while you write?
Replies: 116
Views: 14828

Re: What are you listening to while you write?

It tends to vary. Recently it has been the soundtracks from Child of Light and Scribblenauts.
by TheDesman
Mon Mar 09, 2015 8:44 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]
Replies: 8
Views: 2211

Re: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]

I like the amount of mustache you've got going on in this preview, The Desman. Sensei's mustache is all 8) , but then Lézard's mustache is all :wink: . I hope your dialogue characterization is on the same level as your mustache characterization. 40% of writing is pretty good for this part of the mo...
by TheDesman
Mon Mar 09, 2015 7:34 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]
Replies: 8
Views: 2211

Re: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]

Codename: Thorn
Everything: Classified

Wonder who this women is and what she is up to?

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by TheDesman
Sat Mar 07, 2015 6:33 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]
Replies: 8
Views: 2211

A Standard Mission [Action][Comedy][KN][NaNoReno 2015]

A Standard Mission (Working title) Two rival Contractors, mercenary spies-for-hire, cross paths during a mission where they are hunting for the same target. Story : Set in the early 90's Sensei is tasked with infiltrating the French foreign legion to steal intelligence about their recruits for the ...