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by Norbez
Sun May 24, 2015 6:47 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: HCF: Voice-Acting Update [Drama, Twiny Jam 2015]
Replies: 2
Views: 3410

HCF: Voice-Acting Update [Drama, Twiny Jam 2015]

Choose a Technique. Kill a Conspirator. Search for the meaning of HCF. #HCFtwine

HCF has updated! Now with voice-acting by the awesome Brandon Koziatek, who performs as the Shopkeeper.

Feedback & Critique is always welcome!

Download HCF
by Norbez
Wed May 13, 2015 9:33 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Monsters in My Toybox- Complete 4-30-15
Replies: 7
Views: 4983

Re: Monsters in My Toybox- Complete 4-30-15

@Juno:

Wow, nice screenshot comments, and really good points. You got pretty much all the screens I was going to post, actually. Also, that save suggestion is a great idea! ^^
by Norbez
Sat May 09, 2015 12:43 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Monsters in My Toybox- Complete 4-30-15
Replies: 7
Views: 4983

Re: Monsters in My Toybox- Complete 4-30-15

Playing through this game. As someone who wants to be a teacher, I thought this game taught a lot to fourth graders. The material is covered very well, and with extensive effort. Nice work! I did find some flaws, though. I felt some questions were a bit confusing, mainly for the synonyms and antonym...
by Norbez
Tue May 05, 2015 6:35 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Who is Mike? [Mystery/Thriller] NOW ON STEAM!
Replies: 42
Views: 15524

Re: Who is Mike? [Mystery/Thriller,Supernatural, Comedy]

Played this through with Haze; we took turns voice-acting! (She did Sarah, I did the "Mike"s. Maybe we'll post a video! :D) 1. Did you enjoy the story and characters? 2. How was the pacing of the story? 3. Which ending did you like the most? 4. Did the story flow naturally to the ending? 5. Any gene...
by Norbez
Sat Apr 25, 2015 7:24 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: pretty much a KN... with no actual name.
Replies: 9
Views: 2931

Re: pretty much a KN... with no actual name.

Okay then . . . here goes. (deep breath) First off, it was great of you to create something and get it out there. But I do feel the experience could have been better. My main problem is the pacing. From the writing, it seems you wanted to create an emotional story. But you have large text-blurbs, ea...
by Norbez
Fri Apr 24, 2015 8:39 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: pretty much a KN... with no actual name.
Replies: 9
Views: 2931

Re: pretty much a KN... with no actual name.

Hey there! I just played through the game (a few times, to see the changes in endings). Mind if I leave a critique?
by Norbez
Sun Apr 05, 2015 7:57 pm
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5441
Views: 1456937

Re: Guestbook

Hi! I'm Norbez, Haze's sister ( go check out her stuff! ). I've worked with her on Monster Uses CPU 2 , and we have a Gamejolt account . I have quite a few websites: Deviantart , Youtube , and Twitter (@NaomiNorbez) . If you want to know more about me, look at the Deviantart account. I got quite a f...