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by Eyzi
Fri May 13, 2016 2:26 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Carpe Diem: Reboot [Romance][Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 1695

Re: Carpe Diem: Reboot [Romance][Drama]

Ai's sketch is now colored! I also updated the banner.
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by Eyzi
Wed May 04, 2016 4:13 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Carpe Diem: Reboot [Romance][Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 1695

Re: Carpe Diem: Reboot [Romance][Drama]

I haven't quite read the original Carpe Diem so I can't comment on anything that's plot related right now. For CG prices, I'm guessing that instead of doing commissions, for big games, people might just outright hire someone to do the CG for them. I'm pretty sure that a lot of artists will give dis...
by Eyzi
Tue May 03, 2016 11:03 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Carpe Diem: Reboot [Romance][Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 1695

Carpe Diem: Reboot [Romance][Drama]

http://i.imgur.com/w6laXXa.jpg Just because it crashed doesn't mean it's over SYNOPSIS Jung's date with Ai ended with a hard slap back to reality. Ai herself advised him to move on as her life is getting shorter and shorter everyday. Despite this, Jung still wanted to be with her and he has grown d...
by Eyzi
Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:25 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Inconsistency in Time Progression
Replies: 7
Views: 1109

Re: Inconsistency in Time Progression

There are ways you can get away with it especially if the story itself demands for it, but I think this is one of the situations where pauses come in handy. Maybe a short description in between scenes, or as an introduction of a new scene, just to give your readers a heads up that a time skip is hap...
by Eyzi
Wed Dec 09, 2015 12:00 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Character development, how in depth do you go?
Replies: 9
Views: 1149

Re: Character development, how in depth do you go?

Most of the things I wanted to say has been mentioned already, but I'm throwing my 2 cents anyway. For me, it depends on how much I want to expand my story, but I limit it to what is necessary. I try to make it just enough to explain the character's actions and decisions throughout the story. Though...
by Eyzi
Wed Dec 09, 2015 10:07 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Little Match Girl - A Simple Christmas Visual Novel
Replies: 4
Views: 2403

Re: The Little Match Girl - A Simple Christmas Visual Novel

Man, it's been sooo long since I've heard this story. Very nostalgic. Congratulations on creating your first visual novel!
by Eyzi
Tue Dec 01, 2015 12:30 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]
Replies: 14
Views: 4262

Re: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]

Downloaded and finished!!! Reading the steam comments before playing was a bad idea (it spoiled it for me on the spot). But still, it was nice playing it. I probably wouldn't have realized that plot twist if I didn't read the comments though haha. Nice one. The art is really pretty, the writing is ...
by Eyzi
Tue Dec 01, 2015 10:54 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]
Replies: 14
Views: 4262

Re: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]

Hello! I tried out your game a few days ago and I have to say, kudos for the twist! It is surprising that I did not see that coming while I still call myself the psychic of plot twists! I'm not sure if you did the background yourself, however, the light colours of the sprite and the difference it m...
by Eyzi
Mon Nov 30, 2015 3:46 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]
Replies: 14
Views: 4262

Re: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]

AsHLeX wrote:Bookmarking this and gonna try it out the moment I got time!!! :D
Thanks for your time!
by Eyzi
Sun Nov 29, 2015 3:21 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]
Replies: 14
Views: 4262

Re: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]

Review Time~ I'm amazed by the art hahaha What really got to me was... DAT PLOT TWIST! :shock: After being totally convinced that this couple was the cutest ever BAM! She's not even real! I was in denial for around 15 seconds."Nope, Author-san is just pulling my leg." Congrats again for completing ...
by Eyzi
Sun Nov 29, 2015 12:58 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]
Replies: 14
Views: 4262

Re: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]

OwlFeather wrote:WOOT WOOT~ Congrats on the release!
Will review after playing. :3
Thank you! I'll be waiting for your feedback.
by Eyzi
Fri Nov 27, 2015 10:49 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]
Replies: 14
Views: 4262

Re: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]

Wow what a fast release! Grats! The art looks gorgeous! Downloading now, will edit this comment when I finish playing~ Edit: Finished playing once! Was cute and fun to play! I can't get over how pretty Ai's sprite is. xD I keep staring at her just admiring the coloring and everything. The backgroun...
by Eyzi
Fri Nov 27, 2015 5:29 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]
Replies: 14
Views: 4262

Carpe Diem [Drama][Slice of Life]

http://i.imgur.com/08zcTOZ.jpg SYNOPSIS What makes someone perfect? Experience this short bittersweet story in the shoes of the main character, Jung, where you will spend your time hanging out with a girl named Ai. Ai is everything Jung wishes for in a woman... except for one very important thing. ...
by Eyzi
Mon Nov 23, 2015 2:11 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Carpe Diem [Drama, Slice of Life]
Replies: 4
Views: 891

Re: Carpe Diem [Drama, Slice of Life]

Your art is adorable! I look forward to when it comes out. Are there other main characters we'll talk to in the game (other than Ai and Jung)? I saw that you had six sprites so I'm just curious. Thank you! As of now, none. The short story is about the interaction between Ai and Jung. Though I have ...
by Eyzi
Sun Nov 22, 2015 1:25 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Carpe Diem [Drama, Slice of Life]
Replies: 4
Views: 891

Re: Carpe Diem [Drama, Slice of Life]

heartfragment wrote:The art looks really cute! I'm always up for short games; I gave it an upvote on Steam Greenlight. Good luck with the project!
Thank you very much! It really means a lot to me. Though it's the story that I'm proud about it and I hope it won't disappoint you.